1、2020年广东英语中考第三部分写作训练话题三居住环境单词风暴来袭单词风暴来袭20202020备考精练备考精练三阶攻关三阶攻关写作练兵写作练兵 你听说过你听说过Earth Hour这项活动吗？这项活动吗？今年的今年的Earth Hour你是如你是如何度过的何度过的？请你写一篇题为？请你写一篇题为“My Earth Hour 2011”的短文。的短文。内容包括：内容包括：1.你今年参加你今年参加Earth Hour这个活动了吗？请表达你参加或者没有这个活动了吗？请表达你参加或者没有参加的心情参加的心情；2.请描述你当时在哪里，与谁一起度过，做了什么事请描述你当时在哪里，与谁一起度过，做了什么事；一
2、阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句审文体：记叙文审文体：记叙文 审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称审标题：审标题：2011我的地球我的地球一小时一小时审时态：一般过去时、一般现在时、现在审时态：一般过去时、一般现在时、现在完成时或一般将来时等完成时或一般将来时等审要点：为环境保护做了什么及你的号召审要点：为环境保护做了什么及你的号召一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.请列举两件以上你在日常生活中经常做的有利于环保的事请列举两件以上你在日常生活中经常做的有利于环保的事；4.号召大家加入到明年的号召大家加入到明年的Earth Hour活动中来活动中来。作文要求：作文要求：1.不能照抄原文
3、；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出，左右。作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。不计入总词数。My Earth Hour 2011 The Earth Hour was from 8:30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday,March 26th this year._I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章
4、二阶写好句1.We should try our best to use less water if necessary in our daily life.2.We must save the trees and not buy things made of ivory.七七(下下)Unit 5 P293.I think simple things like bringing a bag to go shopping can help reduce waste pollution.九九(全全)Unit 13 P98如何保护环境如何保护环境一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句角度角度1 1
5、好句范例好句范例4.To cut down air pollution,we should take the bus or subway instead of driving.九九(全全)Unit 13 P985.Remember to throw rubbish in the bins and keep public places clean and beautiful for everyone.九九(全全)Unit 13 P986.You can save electricity by turning off the lights when you leave a room.九九(全全)U
6、nit 13 P1007.You can also use reusable bags instead of plastic bags.九九(全全)Unit13 P100一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句子仿写句子仿写1.我们应该尽我们最大的努力保持我们学校干净。我们应该尽我们最大的努力保持我们学校干净。_2.我们可以通过种植更多的树木和关掉工厂来减少空气污染。我们可以通过种植更多的树木和关掉工厂来减少空气污染。_ _ 3.我们应该让人们减少塑料的使用以便于我们可以保护地球。我们应该让人们减少塑料的使用以便于我们可以保护地球。_ _We shou
7、ld try our best to keep our school clean.We can reduce air pollution by planting more trees and closing down the factories.We should ask people to reduce the use of plastics so that we can protect the earth.You may ride a bike or walk instead of driving to school or work.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4.为了保护环境
8、，我们可以尽可能多地步行去上学。为了保护环境，我们可以尽可能多地步行去上学。_ _5.你可以骑自行车或者步行而不是开车去上学或上班。你可以骑自行车或者步行而不是开车去上学或上班。_ _6.你离开家之前应该关灯。你离开家之前应该关灯。_To protect the environment,we can walk to school as much as possible.You should turn off the lights before leaving home.1.Elephants are in great danger.Elephants are in great danger.P
9、eople cut down many trees so elephants are losing their homes.七七(下下)Unit 5 P292.The river was really dirty.The river was really dirty.Even the bottom of the river was full of rubbish.九九(全全)Unit 13 P97目前的环境问题目前的环境问题一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句角度角度2 2句句 子子 扩扩 写写 范范 例例 3.Sharks may disappear one day.Sharks may
10、 disappear one day if we do not do something to stop the sale of shark fins.九九(全全)Unit 13 P994.The air is badly polluted.The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.九九(全全)Unit 13 P98一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句The air will become worse and worse if we dont stop cutting down
11、trees seriously.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句子扩写句子扩写1.We must keep the air fresh.(扩写原因扩写原因)_ _2.The air will become worse and worse.(扩写条件扩写条件)_ _We must keep the air fresh because we need a healthy living environment.一阶 审好题三阶 练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.I use plastics too much in my daily life.(扩写观点扩写观点)_ _4.Many wild an
12、imals are in danger.(扩写做法扩写做法)_ _I use plastics too much in my daily life.Now I have come to realize that its a bad habit.Many wild animals are in danger.We should take action to protect them.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段 As a student,I have done lots of things to protect the environment.For example,I
13、always _(做法做法1).Besides,I often _(做法做法2).I think we can _(做法做法3).Lets take part in the Earth Hour next year.语语 段段 练练 习习 1 1如何保护环境如何保护环境carry a cloth bag while shoppingride a bike to school instead of taking a carcare for the earth by doing sodo something to protect the environment water pollution is
14、 a big problemThe environmental problems _(现状现状).There is _(具体表现具体表现)and so on.It is said that_(观点观点).So we should _(解决措施解决措施)一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句are very serious these days语语 段段 练练 习习 2 2目前的环境问题目前的环境问题a lot of pollution,like air pollution,noise pollution,water pollution一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章My
15、Earth Hour 2011 The Earth Hour was from 8:30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday,March 26th this year.It was the moment my friends and I waited for a long time.We talked and played games at home with all the lights off.We were glad to be in the Earth Hour.As a student,I have done lots of things to protect the
16、 environment.For example,I always carry a cloth bag while shopping.Besides,I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.I think we can care for the earth by doing so.Lets take part in the Earth Hour next year.I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公
17、司将在你的假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件，谈谈自己的观点、家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件，谈谈自己的观点、看法。看法。内容包括：内容包括：1.表示欢迎并陈述原因；表示欢迎并陈述原因；2.对其可能造成的环境污染感到担忧；对其可能造成的环境污染感到担忧；3.希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。写作练兵写作练兵作文要求：作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名；和同学的真实姓名；2.语句连贯，词数语句连贯，词数80个左右
18、。邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，个左右。邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。不计入总词数。写作练兵写作练兵Dear Sir or Madam，I am a middle school student._I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory in my hometown.There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more j
19、obs.Most of us stand by the program.However,some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area.写作练兵写作练兵_Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,Zhang HuaI would like to know whether you have any plans for the environmental protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?写作练兵写作练兵
