1、中考英语作文专题1评分标准 第一档第一档（14-15分）分）符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完整，语言无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完整，语言流畅。流畅。第二档第二档（10-13分）分）符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。第三档第三档（7
2、-9分）分）基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，但表达疑似清顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，但表达疑似清楚。楚。第四档第四档（4-6分）分）基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。第五档第五档（0-3分）分）能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看
3、清。与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。2写作小技巧写作小技巧写作小技巧学生例句学生例句更改例句更改例句1.用两个词而不用一个用两个词而不用一个词。词。My family and I had a good trip.My family and I had a good and relaxing trip.2.适当添加副词或者介适当添加副词或者介词短语。词短语。Students like chatting on the phone.Most students like chatting on the phone after school/in the free time.3.同义替换，避免重同义
4、替换，避免重复。复。I like reading books.I love reading.I enjoy reading.4.使用关联词表示文章使用关联词表示文章的逻辑。的逻辑。I should talk with my good friend,and I should listen to music.I fail in the math.I am upset.First,I can talk with my good friend.Second,I can listen to music to relax myself.I fail in math so I am upset.5.学会使用
5、简单的句学会使用简单的句子，子，避免过度重复。避免过度重复。We should improve pronunciation as well by listening to the conversation in English movies.We should improve pronunciation by listening to the conversation from English movies.3说明文写前“2W”:what,why,人称、时态subject,tense头脑风暴:brainstorming列提纲:搜集、提取信息写中组织信息添加内容选取信息（根据内容而定）自我检查写
6、后检查内容（主要信息）检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构等审题书写检查4说明文1.背景信息2.Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2.Why do you like it?How 根据提示信息扩展内容Other.写前审题56即将毕业的你，将如何处置初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢？假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英文报纸写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。(2019年陕西省中考英语作文)put into different kindsgivetohave a book sale要求:1.参考提示语，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整
7、；3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等）4.词数:不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）Dear Editor,My name is Li Hua.Im going to graduate soon.Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.I hope文章的背景信息人称:I时态：一般将来时7 说明文1.背景信息2.Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2.Why do you like it?How 根据提示信息扩展内容Oth
8、er.写前Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacationput into different kindsgivetohave a book saleStep 1审题8 说明文1.背景信息2.Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2.Why do you like it?How 根据提示信息扩展内容Other写前Id like to share s
9、ome ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacationput into different kindsgivetohave a book sale.Step 2第一人称一般将来时审题9 说明文1.背景信息2.Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2.Why do you like it?How 根据提示信息扩展内容Other写前Id like to share some ideas abo
10、ut how to deal with my books and notebooks.1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacationput into different kindsgivetohave a book sale1.keep the notebooks for myself2.bring me a lot of sweet memoriesStep 3第一人称一般将来时审题10写前 搜集、提取信息1.put books into different kinds2.give my textbooks to young
11、er sisters3.have a book sale4.keep the notebooks for myself5.bring me a lot of sweet memories6.Firstly,Secondly,Next,FinallyStep 4写前依据依据呈现句子呈现句子将第一条提示语转化为第一条理由Firstly,I will put books into different kinds.将第二条提示语转化为第二条理由Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to younger sisters.根据上文添加信息They can stu
12、dy at home during the comingsummer vacation.将第三条提示语转化为第三条理由Thirdly,I have a book sale.Step 5根据上文添加信息Children can buy them at low prices.添加信息 I want to keep the notebooks for myself.Because they bring me a lot of sweet memories.添加信息The used paper will be taken to the waste center.搜集、提取信息12写中Step 1 Fi
13、rst of all,I will put all my books into different kinds.Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters.They can study at home during the coming summer vacation.Thirdly,I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.I decide to keep the notebooks f
14、or myself.They bring me lots of sweet memories.Finally,the used paper will be taken to the waste center.These are my ideas.I hope they can help.Yours,Li Hua组织信息draft13Whats moreIn this way写中 First of all,I will put all my books into different kinds.Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to my youn
15、ger sisters.They can study at home during the coming summer vacation.Thirdly,I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.I decide to keep the notebooks for myself.They bring me lots of sweet memories.Finally,the used paper will be taken to the waste center.The
16、se are my ideas.I hope they can help.Yours,Li HuaStep 2添加信息（写作小技巧）Besides写作小技巧4写作小技巧214 主要内容 检查词数 检查语法 拼写、标点、结构写后Step 3 First of all,I will put all my books into different kinds.Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters.In the way,they can study at home during the coming summer
17、vacation.Besides,I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.Whats more,I decide to keep the notebooks for myself.They bring me lots of sweet memories.Finally,the used paper will be taken to the waste center.These are my ideas.I hope they can help.Yours,Li Hua
18、15 First of all,I will put all my books into different kinds.Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters.In the way,they can study at home during the coming summer vacation.Besides,I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.Whats more,I dec
19、ide to keep the notebooks for myself.They bring me lots of sweet memories.Finally,the used paper will be taken to the waste center.These are my ideas.I hope they can help.Yours,Li Hua最终呈现八年级八年级的难度的难度1617每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以”My favourite_”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。(2017陕西中考英语作文)提示语：My favouriteWhat does
20、it look like?Why do you like it?When do you wear it?.What is it made of?cottonfiber(纤维)wool(羊毛)silk.要求：1.请将短文题目补充完整；2.参考提示语，可适当发挥；3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；4.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）5.词数：不得少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总数词）18My favouriteWhat does it look like?Why do you like it?When do you wear it?.What is it made of?cott
21、onfiber(纤维)wool(羊毛)silk.写前审题第一人称一般现在时Step 119写前Step 2搜集信息My favourite T-shirtWhat does it look like?It is a T-shirt.It is white.Why do you like it?special gift,birthday giftWhen do you wear it?parties with friendsIt brings me a lot of sweet memories.It is made of cotton and fiber.审题20组织信息My favourit
22、e_ Among all my clothes,I like one of the _best.It is white.It is made of cotton and fiber.I like it because this is my birthday gift.Its a very special gift from him.He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday.I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends.This is my favorite T-sh
23、irt.It brings me a lot of happy memories.写中Step 1T-shirtT-shirtdraft21My favourite_ Among all my clothes,I like one of the _best.It is white.It is made of cotton and fiber,so its very comfortable.I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it.Its a very special gift from him.He se
24、nt it to me last year for my 14th birthday.I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends.It makes me remember the time we two spent together.This is my favorite T-shirt.It brings me a lot of happy memories.T-shirtT-shirttopic sentencewhywhenwhat is it made of写中Step 2添加信息22My favourite
25、_ Among all my clothes,I like one of the _best.It is white,it is made of cotton and fiber,so its very comfortable.I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it.Its a very special gift from him.He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday.I often wear the T-shirt when I have pa
26、rties with my friends.It makes me remember the time we two spent together.This is my favorite T-shirt.It brings me a lot of happy memories.T-shirtT-shirttopic sentencewhywhensummarywhat is it made of总分总写中Step 3自我检查23My favourite_ Among all my clothes,I like one of the _best.It is white,it is made of
27、 cotton and fiber,so its very comfortable.I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it.Its a very special gift from him.He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday.I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends.It makes me remember the time we two spent togethe
28、r.This is my favorite T-shirt.It brings me a lot of happy memories.T-shirtT-shirt最终呈现八年级八年级的难度的难度2425某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园，健康生活”的征稿活动。亲你根据一下图示内容积极投稿，倡导同学们“爱护校园环境，健康快乐生活”。(2020年陕西中考英语)Practice要求：1.请将短文题目补充完整；2.参考提示语，可适当发挥；3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；4.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）5.词数：不得少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总数词）keep the school
29、cleando sportslook after yourselfother Students need to have a healthy school life.What can we do to make it?Here Ive got some ideas to share with you.第一人称一般现在时说明文topic:whatHow26说明文Step1What:健康生活Why:How:提示词人称、时态 subject,tense头脑风暴:brainstorming列提纲:搜集、提取信息Step2组织信息添加内容 选取信息(根据内容而定)自我检查Step3检查内容（主要信息）检
30、查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构等审题书写检查写前 important,goodWhy27写中 First,it is important to keep our school clean.For example,we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health.Second,its good to do some sports like running,playing basketball and so on.Third,wed bette
31、r look after ourselves well,such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary.Finally,if we always get on well each other and keep happy,well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.draft28 First,it is important to keep our school clean.For example,we can clean the desks and floor e
32、very day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health.Second,its good to do some sports like running,playing basketball and so on.Third,wed better look after ourselves well,such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary.Finally,if we always get on well each other
33、 and keep happy,well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.写作原技巧4：文章具有逻辑性和连贯性写作技巧4：简单句变成复合句if条件句“主将从现”点睛之笔写中29写后 First,it is important to keep our school clean.For example,we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health.Second,its good to do som
34、e sports like running,playing basketball and so on.Third,wed better look after ourselves well,such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary.Finally,if we always get on well each other and keep happy,well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.主要内容 检查词数 检查语法 拼写、标点、结构30最终呈现 First
35、,it is important to keep our school clean.For example,we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health.Second,its good to do some sports like running,playing basketball and so on.Third,wed better look after ourselves well,such as washing hands in
36、 time and wearing masks when it is necessary.Finally,if we always get on well each other and keep happy,well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.31SummaryPre-writing审题话题类型l 教育类l 实践活动类文章类型l 记叙文l 说明文l 议论文what,who,where,whenwhat,whywhat,why,how列提纲l 提示语l 适当添加内容l 选取信息While-writing人称时态l 组织信息（根据提纲）l 添加信息（注意写作技巧）l 选取信息（议论文)l 自我检查（结构、技巧、拼写等）Post-writing检查l 检查内容（主要信息）l 检查词数l 检查语法l 检查拼写、标点、结构等书写323334
