1、高中英语人教版写作训练高中英语人教版写作训练 A letter of giving advice 近五年高考书面表达命题趋势分析近五年高考书面表达命题趋势分析2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试书面表达一览表年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试书面表达一览表提纲提纲对捐助的看法对捐助的看法议论文议论文广东卷广东卷提纲提纲人物事迹人物事迹应用文(报道)应用文(报道)广东卷广东卷提纲提纲对汉语词典收录英语词汇的看法对汉语词典收录英语词汇的看法议论文议论文江苏卷江苏卷图表图表创业作品展评情况创业作品展评情况应用文(通知)应用文(通知)辽宁卷辽宁卷中文提示中文提示推荐图书并说明理由推荐图书并说明理由应用文
2、(书信)应用文(书信)浙江卷浙江卷提纲提纲应用文(书信)应用文(书信)安徽卷安徽卷回信解决同学的困扰回信解决同学的困扰告诉笔友你参加高考的情况告诉笔友你参加高考的情况应用文(书信)应用文(书信)四川卷四川卷提纲提纲提纲提纲结合个人经历解释谚语的含义结合个人经历解释谚语的含义夹叙夹议夹叙夹议山东卷山东卷提纲提纲欢迎来你校访问的美国代表欢迎来你校访问的美国代表应用文(欢迎词)应用文(欢迎词)陕西卷陕西卷提纲提纲高中生应当做什么高中生应当做什么应用文(发言稿)应用文(发言稿)江西卷江西卷120词左右词左右提纲提纲从失败走向成功从失败走向成功夹序夹议夹序夹议福建卷福建卷英文提示英文提示小事情有大作用小
3、事情有大作用文体不限文体不限湖北卷湖北卷不少于不少于120词词提纲提纲介绍物品介绍物品说明文说明文湖南卷湖南卷不少于不少于80词词提纲提纲最好的礼物最好的礼物应用文(发帖)应用文(发帖)重庆卷重庆卷朋友与手机朋友与手机议论文议论文重庆卷重庆卷不少于不少于100词词提纲提纲写信给即将到你班学习的交换生写信给即将到你班学习的交换生应用文(书信)应用文(书信)天津卷天津卷不少于不少于60词词图画图画讲述解决自行车存放问题的过程讲述解决自行车存放问题的过程记叙文记叙文北京卷北京卷不少于不少于50词词提纲提纲告诉英国朋友自己无法按计划去云南旅游告诉英国朋友自己无法按计划去云南旅游应用文(书信)应用文(书
4、信)北京卷北京卷100词左右词左右提纲提纲十年后的我十年后的我说明文说明文全国新课标全国新课标IIII100词左右词左右图表图表咨询暑假英语学习班情况咨询暑假英语学习班情况应用文(书信)应用文(书信)全国新课标全国新课标I词数词数命题命题形式形式题材题材体裁体裁项目项目卷别卷别不少于不少于60词词不少于不少于120词词 120词左右词左右不少于不少于100词词120-150词词120词左右词左右120词左右词左右100-120词词100词左右词左右150词左右词左右5个句子个句子150词左右词左右英文提示英文提示20082008年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(全国试卷年普通高等学校招生全国统一
5、考试(全国试卷IIII)书面表达(满分书面表达(满分2525分)分)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:要点:1、参加中文学习班;、参加中文学习班;2、看中文书刊、电视;、看中文书刊、电视;3、学唱中文歌曲;、学唱中文歌曲;4、交中国朋友、交中国朋友.注意:注意:1、词数、词数100词左右;词左右;2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。、开头语已为你写好。June 8,2008 Dear Peter,Im
6、 glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Sincerely yours审题要点审题要点一、人称:一、人称:第一人称第一人称 二、时态:二、时态:一般现在时和一般将来时一般现在时和一般将来时三、内容要点:三、内容要点:1 1、参加中文学习班,可得到老师的指导以及和同学在、参加中文学习班,可得到老师的指导以及和同学在一起学习的机会。一起学习的机会。2 2、看中文电视节目、书籍等。、看中文电视节目、书籍等。3 3、学唱中文歌曲,使得记忆单词更简单。、学唱中文歌曲,使得记忆单词更简单。
7、4 4、交中国朋友,可得到更多的帮助。、交中国朋友,可得到更多的帮助。四、词数四、词数100100词左右。(注意事项要求)词左右。(注意事项要求)引出话题引出话题提出具提出具体建议体建议总总 结结Here are some a few suggestionsFirst Firstly,.Secondly Then,Furthermore Besides,FinallyIm quite sure that I do hope my suggestions建建议议信信 构思谋篇构思谋篇思路导引常用套语建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1After I
8、 read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that 2I am very glad to hear that you want to3I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter4.I am writing to you for the purpose of 5.You have asked me for my advice with regard toand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.首段:提出写信的原因。思
9、路导引常用套语常用套语表达建议(表达建议(bodybody)1.first,firstly,secondlythen,after that,in the endfinallyMeanwhile,whats more2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3.I would like to suggest/recommend that4.If I were you,I would5.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.6.When it comes t
10、o such a situation,I would like to suggest that you can 主体段落:提出建议及其理由,即针对具体情况提出具主体段落:提出建议及其理由,即针对具体情况提出具体建议和忠告体建议和忠告。思路导引结尾段:表达出本人的期望或希望对方做出回应。结尾段:表达出本人的期望或希望对方做出回应。常用套语常用套语建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2.I hope you will find these proposals sugges
11、tions practical/useful/helpful.3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.4.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.5.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.List the key points1、参加中文学习班、参加中文学习班 take a Chinese course join Chinese language classes
12、 go to a Chinese class You can take a Chinese course.Its important necessary to take a Chinese course.Taking a Chinese course is good for you.2、有和同学一起学习的机会、有和同学一起学习的机会 have a chance to do sth;do sth with sb;practise sth with sb You will have a chance to learn Chinese with your classmates.You can pra
13、ctise Chinese with your classmates.3 3、看中文电视节目、书籍等。看中文电视节目、书籍等。watch Chinese TV programs;read books in Chinese.Watching Chinese TV programs and reading books in Chinese can also help your Chinese.(It also helps watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese.)4、学唱中文歌曲使得单词更简单。、学唱中文歌曲使得单词更
14、简单。Its a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs and it can make remember Chinese words easily.Learning and singing Chinese songs will help you remember Chinese words easily.It should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs.By doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.5、交中
15、国朋友,可得到更多的帮助。、交中国朋友,可得到更多的帮助。make friends with sb;get a lot of help help sb with sth You can make Chinese friends and they can help you with your Chinese.You can get a lot of help by making more Chinese friends.You can make more Chinese friends.Im sure that they will tell you a lot about China and h
16、elp you learn Chinese.ModelDear_ ,(1)Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _.(2)Here are a few suggestions.(3)First,it is important to _.(4)as youll _.(5)Then,it also helps _.(6)Furthermore,it should be a good idea to _.(7)Because _(8)You can also_.(9)Im quite sure that _.(10)Please
17、 _ next time.Im looking forward to _.Best wishes,Sincerely yours,Signature 称呼称呼(1 1)、提出写信的)、提出写信的原因原因(2 2)、过渡句引出)、过渡句引出建议建议(3 3)、提出建议一)、提出建议一(4 4)、建议一的理)、建议一的理由由(5 5)、提出建议二)、提出建议二(6 6)、提出建议三)、提出建议三(7 7)、建议三的理)、建议三的理由由(8 8)、提出建议四)、提出建议四(9 9)、建议四的理)、建议四的理由由(1010)、表达出本)、表达出本人的期望或希望对人的期望或希望对方做出回应方做出回应 M
18、odel定稿誊写 Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,its important to take a Chinese course,as youllbe able to learn from the teacher and practise with your fellow students.Then,it also helps watch TV and read books,new
19、spapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Furthermore,it should be a good idea tolearn and sing Chinese songs.Because bydoing so youll learn and remember Chinesewords more easily.You can also make moreChinese friends.Im quite sure that they willtell you a lot about China and help you learnC
20、hinese.Please try and write to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Sincerely yours,Li Hua 如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分整体三部分1.Heading点题;一两个句子;概括性;暗示性2.Body 中心记述部分;层次分明3.Ending 小结;呼应主题假设你是李华,你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大假设你是李华,你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好,请你给他写一封回信,提一些建议,帮助他学好好,请你给他写一封回信,提一些建议,帮助他学好英语。英语。内容提示:内容提示:1.1.一定要做好课前预习一定要做好课前预习 2.2.课堂上认真听讲,记好笔记课堂上认真听讲,记好笔记 3.3.课后认真独立完成作业课后认真独立完成作业 4.4.每天进行英语听说练习每天进行英语听说练习 5.5.加强课外阅读扩大词汇量加强课外阅读扩大词汇量词数:词数:100100词左右词左右Homework: