1、Basic Writing-Character introduction(人物介绍）人物介绍）-常用句子结构常用句子结构An introduction of a person What do we write about a person?Jay Chou(周杰伦周杰伦)Born in January,1979 in Taiwan,Jay Chou,a famous singer,was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.Showing interest in music,he began learn
2、ing to play the piano at the age of 3 At the age of 21,he was able to release his first record.He is famous for his R&B music.He has started in a few movies.He continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.He is popular among young people.1.出生出生(姓名姓名/时间时间/地点地点)(Birth-nam
3、e,time,place)2.教育情况（教育情况（Education）4.兴趣爱好兴趣爱好(Interest/Hobbies)5.成就成就（Achievements）3.性格，品质性格，品质(Characters/qualities)6.评价评价(Evaluation)Place of birth（出生地）（出生地）Appearance/Looking（外貌）（外貌）Name（姓名）（姓名）Characters/qualities（性格（性格/品质）品质）Date of birth（出生时间）（出生时间）Education（教育）（教育）Interest/Hobbies兴趣兴趣/爱好爱好Eva
4、luation（评价）（评价）Achievements(成就成就)Brainstorm What to write about.出生出生(姓名姓名/时间时间/地点地点)时间时间:be born in+年、月年、月/on日日地点地点:.教育情况教育情况 _ _ Receive/gain/obtain a Bachelors/Masters/Doctors degreebe born in（city/province/country）Brainstormgraduate fromkindhearted，.性格、外貌性格、外貌 _ _ .兴趣爱好兴趣爱好 _ be interested in,hav
5、e a gift for,.成就成就_shy and quiet,enjoy doing sth/be fond ofbe well-known/famous for,devote oneself to,make contributions toSbs height is meters,sbs weight iskg step3.Consolidation.出生出生(姓名姓名/时间时间/地点地点)时间时间:be born in (year/month)/on(date)Jay Chou,a famous singer,（出生于）（出生于）the 18th 0f January,1979.地点地
6、点:be born in（city/province/country/family）Deng Xiaoping(出生于出生于)Sichuan Province Yao Ming (出生于出生于)a sporting family.was born on was born in was born in.教育情况教育情况 1.graduated from,2.receive a Bachelors/Doctors degree 句型：句型：1.After（从（从毕业）毕业）high school,he entered Harvard.2.He attended the College in 198
7、7 and(获得学获得学士学位士学位).graduating fromreceived a Bachelors degree.性格、外貌性格、外貌 _ _ 句型：句型：1.He is a _(心善的心善的)man.2.Jay Chou,a famous singer,was raised by his mother and was _(内向而安内向而安静静)during his childhood.3.His _ (身高是身高是2.26米，体重是米，体重是136千克千克).词汇：词汇：shy and quiet,kindhearted，height is meters,weight iskg
8、kindheartedshy and quiet height is 2.26 meters and weight is 134 kg .兴趣爱好兴趣爱好_ _ 句型：句型：1.He _(有有天赋天赋)music.2.We all _（对（对感兴趣）感兴趣）reading books written by Luxun.词汇：词汇：has a gift for,be interested in,enjoyenjoy doing sthhas a gift forinterested inare.成就成就_ _ 句型：句型：1.He _(因因而著名而著名)his R&B music.2.Fei X
9、iaotong _（致力于）（致力于）advancing Chinas rural economy（农村经（农村经济）济）.词汇：词汇：be well known/famous for,devoted himself to devote oneslefto is famous for 一试身手一试身手 雅典奥运会上中国队共获得32枚金牌，其中刘翔的 110米 跨栏更是令世界为之关注。请你根据以下内容写一篇文章，简要介绍他的情况。姓名 刘翔 性别 男 出生日期 1983.7.13 出生地 上海 体重 74公斤 身高 1.88米 个人爱好 唱歌、电脑 基 本 情 况 11999年3月入选上海市田径
10、队，2000年8月入选国家青年队，教练是孙海平 22002年，获亚运会及亚锦赛冠军 32003年，在英国世界室内田径锦标赛中获 60米 跨栏第三 42004年8月27日 获雅典奥运会冠军，成绩是1291，平世界纪录，打破奥运会纪录 参考词汇：跨栏hurdle 亚锦赛Asian Championships Liu Xiang,a Shanghai native,_(出生于出生于1983.7.13).His _ (身身高是高是1.88米，体重米，体重74千克千克)._(爱好唱爱好唱歌和电脑歌和电脑).In March,1999,he entered the Shanghai track and f
11、ield team and one year later,_(他入选了他入选了)the National Youth Team.He_（有（有 天赋）天赋）running.Sun Haiping has been training him.In 2002,he _(获得金牌获得金牌)in the mens 110m hurdles at the Asian Games and the Asian Championships.At the Athens Olympic Games on August 27,2004,Liu won the mens 110m hurdles final in 1
12、2.91 seconds,equaling the world record(平世界纪录平世界纪录)and _(打破奥运会打破奥运会纪录纪录).He will _(致力于致力于)winning more medals for Chinas track-and-field(田径田径)in the future.was born on July 13,1983he was admitted to/enteredhe won the gold medalheight is 1.88 meters and weight is 74Kgbreaking the Olympic recorddevote
13、himself tohas a gift forHe is interested in singing and computerGuess:WHO IS HE?He is a great computer engineer.He and his wife set up a fund to improve global health and education.After graduation from high school,he entered Harvard,He became one of the richest men in America in his thirties.He is
14、well-known for his kindness.Bill Gates where he dropped out in 1975 to enjoy writing programs.Guess:WHO IS SHE?She was born in Sichuan.She is popular among young people.At the age of 22,she released(发发行行)her first record.She is good at playing the piano and guitar.She is famous for his winning the n
15、ationwide singing contest Super Girl in 2005.She has a gift for singing and she is a handsome Chinese pop singer and actress.Guess:WHO IS HE?He was born in a sporting family.He is now 2.26 meters tall and 134 kg in weight.He is regarded as the best basketball player in China.He joined Shanghai baske
16、tball team in 1997 and became a member of China national team in 1998.He is nicknamed“The Little giant”He became the third Chinese player in NBA history in1998.Guess:WHO IS HE?He was born in Liaoning Province.He joined the PLA when he was 18 years old.He attended the College of the PLA Air Force in
17、1987He was the first man in China who was sent into outer space in Shenzhou 5,which made China the third country to independently send people into space.and received with a Bachelors degree.Guess:WHO IS HE?He was the great genius(天才天才)inventor of the electrical age（电器时代）（电器时代）.He was born in America
18、.He devoted himself to inventing hundreds of inventions.His most famous inventions are the first practical long-lasting light bulb and the photograph.He stayed at school only for 3 monthsJay Chou(周杰伦周杰伦)u 1.Born on the 18th of January,1979 in Taiwan,he was brought up by his mother and was shy and qu
19、iet during his childhood.u 2.Showing interest in music,he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.u 3.When his first album(唱片唱片 lbm）was released in 2000,he got the worlds attention.u 4.He becomes very popular with the young,and has received many awards for his songs.u 5.His own unique Chine
20、se R&B style is unparalleled（无法匹敌的）（无法匹敌的）by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes a chance on trying new things.How to translate the sentence lets analyze the sentences in the passage.Born on the 18th of January,1979 in Taiwan,Jay Chou,a famous singer,was brought up by his mothe
21、r and was shy and quiet during his childhood.分词结构分词结构 同位语同位语身份与身份与概况概况尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺 Showing interest in music,he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.When Jays first album(唱片）was released（发行）in 2000,he got the worlds attention.He becomes very popular with t
22、he young,which allowed him to received many awards for his songs.经历经历分词结构分词结构状语从句状语从句定语从句定语从句注意尽量用非谓语动词注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼使文章精炼尽量用复合句尽量用复合句,如定语从句等，润色文章如定语从句等，润色文章 His own unique（独特的）Chinese R&B style is unparalleled（无法匹敌的）by others and he continues to make breakthroughs（突破）as he takes a chance（冒险）on tr
23、yinging new things.评价评价evaluation注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组A.A.巧用巧用同位语结构同位语结构,使文章简洁，通顺使文章简洁，通顺1)钟南山钟南山1941年出生在广州，他是年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之中国最伟大的医生之一一。Zhong Nanshan,was born in Guangzhou in 1941.2）为人自信乐观的男孩为人自信乐观的男孩刘翔刘翔,出生在出生在1983年的上海年的上海.Liu Xiang,_,was born in Shanghai in 1983.*语法，句法高分语法，句法高分t
24、ipsone of the greatest doctors in Chinaa confident and optimistic boyB.B.巧用分词巧用分词结构结构，使文章精炼，使文章精炼eg.3岁时，对音乐表现出浓厚兴趣，周杰伦开始学习弹岁时，对音乐表现出浓厚兴趣，周杰伦开始学习弹钢琴。钢琴。Jay Chou showed great interest in music at the age of 3.He began learning to play the piano.1）获得获得中山大学中山大学硕士学位后硕士学位后，她出国升造，她出国升造。_ from Zhongshan Uni
25、versity,she went abroad to further her study.2）姚明姚明1980年出生于上海年出生于上海，是世界著名篮球运动员。，是世界著名篮球运动员。Yao Ming,_,is a world famous basketball player.(定语定语)Having received a masters degreeborn in Shanghai in 1980Showing great interest in music,Jay Chou began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.C 巧用巧用with
26、结构，作定语结构，作定语/状语状语 with+n.1)历史老师是个漂亮女人，历史老师是个漂亮女人，长着两只大眼睛，留长发长着两只大眼睛，留长发.My history teacher is a beautiful woman _.2)他他高鼻子，大嘴巴高鼻子，大嘴巴，看起来像个外国人。，看起来像个外国人。_,he looks like a foreigner.3)他他带了一个大包带了一个大包，上车很困难。，上车很困难。He had difficulty getting on the bus _.with+O+Oc(非谓语非谓语/介短介短)1）他看到一个）他看到一个抱着婴儿的抱着婴儿的女人站在那里
27、。女人站在那里。He saw a woman _ standing there.2）他）他双手反绑双手反绑，被带了进来。，被带了进来。He was brought in,_.With a big nose and a big mouthwith two big eyes and long hairwith a baby in her armswith his hands tied behindwith a big bagD D 恰当使用定语从句、状语从句等复合句，润恰当使用定语从句、状语从句等复合句，润色文章色文章1 1）叶诗文获得两枚奥运金牌，这使她闻名于世界。）叶诗文获得两枚奥运金牌，这使
28、她闻名于世界。Ye Shiwen won two gold medals in London Olympic Games,_.2)20022002年，他去了上海，在那里他赚了一大笔钱。年，他去了上海，在那里他赚了一大笔钱。In 2002,he went to Shanghai,_.3）她决心成为一名歌手，无论遇到什么困难。）她决心成为一名歌手，无论遇到什么困难。She decided to be a singer _she might come across.which made her world-famouswhere he madea lot of moneyno matter what difficulty/whatever difficultyHomework 硕士学位：masters degree;博士：doctor
