1、PART THREE第三篇写作妙解篇话题(三)情感表达情感表达典例分析初中生活即将结束。假如你是李平,请以“Thanks to”为题,用英语写一篇短文给某英语网站投稿,谈谈初中三年你最想感谢谁,叙述一件他/她曾经帮助过你的事,以及你的感受。提示词语 teacher,problem,help,encourage,moved 提示问题Who do you want to say thanks to?What did he/she do to help you?How did you feel?_【写作架构】【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文是一篇记叙文,主题是情感表达。根据题目要求,可以提炼出3个要点
2、:(1)介绍你想要感谢的人(2)描述他/她曾经帮助你的事情(3)描写你的感受2.时态:一般过去时3.人称:第三人称和第一人称【基础写作】.根据所给提示词补全下列各句1.我想对我的英语老师表示感谢。(say thanks to)I want to my English teacher.2.我的英语老师既善良又热心。(not onlybut also)My English teacher is .3.在过去的三年里,我的英语老师对我的帮助很大。(in the past three years)My English teacher .say thanks tonot only kind but al
3、so warm-heartedhas helped me so much in the past three years4.她鼓励我坚持努力学习。(encourageto)She .5.她帮我制定学习计划并且时不时帮助我学英语。(from time to time)She and .encouraged me to keep studying hardhelped me make a study plan helped me with my English from time to time.句子升格按括号中的要求改写句子。6.While I was in Grade 7,my English
4、 was poor.(用At the beginning of middle school改写句子,意思不变)_7.My English teacher shows us her kindness and love.(改为被动语态)_8.I want to say thanks to my teacher because she has helped me a lot in the past three years.(用thanks for改写句子,意思不变)_At the beginning of middle school,my English was poor.Kindness and
5、love are shown to us by my English teacher.Thanks for having helped me a lot in the past three years.9.I felt lucky.I had her as my teacher.(用to do连接两个句子)_10.I just want to say thanks to her because she has helped me a lot.(用the reason whyis that改写句子)_I felt lucky to have her as my teacher.The reaso
6、n why I want to say thanks to her is that she has helped me a lot.【连句成文连句成文】Thanks to my English teacher I want to say thanks to my English teacher.My English teacher is very kind and warm-hearted.She has helped me so much in the past three years with my English study.When I first came to middle sch
7、ool,my English was very poor.I had lots of problems and wasnt interested in English at all.One day,my English teacher asked me to go to her office after school.She asked me about my problems and why I didnt like English.She was very friendly and patient.She encouraged me to keep studying hard.We mad
8、e a plan for my English studying.After that,she started to help me from time to time.I was so moved by her kindness.I felt that I was so lucky that I had her as my English teacher.I am going to leave school soon.I just want to say thanks to her for all her help.拓展积累【表达感想的句子表达感想的句子】1.I want to say so
9、rry to my English teacher.2.I am regretful to make my English teacher angry.3.My English teacher is the person that I want to remember forever.【描写她描写她/他对我做的事的句子他对我做的事的句子】1.She encouraged me to keep trying hard and not to give up.2.He helped me make a plan and helped me to improve my math from time t
10、o time.3.With her help,my math has improved much.4.She enlightened me and made me full of creative ideas.5.She helped me find my confidence and dare to overcome the difficulties.【描述我的感受的句子描述我的感受的句子】1.Words cant express how happy I am.2.I will remember Mr.Zhang forever who has helped me develop good
11、learning habits and encouraged me to achieve my dream.3.I was so moved by her kindness and patience that I am so thankful to her for her help.实战演练假如你是李华,即将结束在美国的交换学习,回国前你想给住家妈妈 Sarah写一封感谢信,告诉她你什么时候回国,为什么感谢她,以及你的感受。提示词语 help,care,communicate,drive to hospital,own family 提示问题When are you going to leav
12、e?Why do you want to say“thank you”to her?How do you feel?Dear Sarah,Im writing to deliver my thanks to you._ Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua One possible version:Dear Sarah,Im writing to deliver my thanks to you.I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning.I really want t
13、o say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here.I will never forget that you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English.Whats more,I will never forget that you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didnt feel well.Staying with your family is just like being with my own family.Your kindness,patience and care make me feel at home.Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua
