1、Reading for WritingReading for WritingUnit 2 Travelling AroundHave you ever been to Xian?西安城楼What is Xian famous for?Terracotta Army大明宫大明宫陕西历史博物馆陕西历史博物馆西安城墙西安城墙大雁塔Paragraph Main ideadetail1Main purpose for the trip2Other plans for the trip3transpot4Final thoughtsReadingRead Richards email and fill i
2、n the table.go to Xi an to see the Terracotta Army go to the Shaanxi History Museum，the Xian City Wall,other famous sights train write soon again and send photos At the last of Richards email,he said“Do you have any plans for the coming holiday?Hope to hear from you soon.”Writing taskWriting task 假定
3、你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。告诉他你的安排。目的地目的地中国第二大岛中国第二大岛-海南岛海南岛时间时间10月月1日日-10月月6日日活动活动岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营感想感想增长知识，拓宽视野增长知识，拓宽视野（1）一、审题：确定写作体裁和主题）一、审题：确定写作体裁和主题 体裁体裁:应用文应用文-告知信告知信 主题：给主题：给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划。旅行计划。（2）二、确定时态和人称）二、确定时
4、态和人称 时态：一般将来时时态：一般将来时 一般现在时一般现在时 人称：第一人称、第二人称人称：第一人称、第二人称【写作指导】【写作指导】（3）三、明确写作要点）三、明确写作要点 对对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈的来信做出评价和反馈 具体的旅游计划（旅行的目的、交通具体的旅游计划（旅行的目的、交通方式、活动等）方式、活动等）旅游的心得体会旅游的心得体会（4）四、布局）四、布局 第一段：写信目的；第一段：写信目的；第二段：主体部分，详细介绍旅游计划；第二段：主体部分，详细介绍旅游计划；第三段：体会第三段：体会+期待回复期待回复（1）谢谢你写信告诉我你在西安的旅行）谢谢你写信告诉我你在西安的
5、旅行,这这真是特别令人惊奇的旅行。真是特别令人惊奇的旅行。(非限制定从非限制定从)_（2）我们选择海南岛旅游，因为它的风景优）我们选择海南岛旅游，因为它的风景优美。美。_Thank you for your letter about your trip to Xian,which is amazing.We choose to travel to Hainan Island because it has beautiful scenery.【写作提示】【写作提示】3.依我看，旅游不仅可以让我增长知识，依我看，旅游不仅可以让我增长知识，而且还可以拓宽视野。而且还可以拓宽视野。(enrich my
6、 knowledge;broaden my horizons)In my opinion,travel can not only enrich my knowledge,but also broaden my horizons.开篇句：开篇句：I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holiday.篇中句：篇中句：1.The National Day is coming,and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery.2.
7、I am planning to go there by train and come back by coach.结尾句结尾句 Look forward to your early reply.【写作佳句】【写作佳句】Writing（15 minutes）假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。告诉他你的安排。目的地目的地中国第二大岛中国第二大岛-海南岛海南岛时间时间10月月1日日-10月月6日日活动活动岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营感想感想增长知识
8、，拓宽视野增长知识，拓宽视野Exchange drafts1.Is there a clear purpose for the trip?2.Does each paragraph have a clear main idea?3.Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans?4.Does the writer use commas,stops,and question marks correctly?5.Are all the words spelt correctly?6.Are all the prop
9、er nouns capitalised?assess each others work according to the checklist参考范文参考范文Dear Richard,Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xian,which is amazing.I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays.With the National Day coming,I am going to travel to Hainan Island
10、to see its beautiful scenery with my family.We will spend 6 days there,from Oct.1th to Oct.6th.Its because of its beautiful scenery that we choose to travel to Hainan Island.Other than hiking on the island,we have planed many other activities like surfing in the water,spending the nights in the tents.I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.In my opinion,travel can not only enrich my knowledge,but also broaden my horizons.Look forward to your early reply.Yours,LiHuaRevise your draft according to your partners comments
