1、Unit OneR e a d i n g f o r W r i t i n g讲课人A letter of advice1A letter of adviceWords:1.焦焦急急的的，担忧的，担忧的 adj._2.在网上在网上 prep._3.推荐推荐,建议建议 v._4.行为行为 n._ v._表现表现5.青少年青少年 n._6.一代人一代人 n._7.吸引吸引 v._ n._ adj._有吸引力的有吸引力的Phrases:1.对对担心担心_2.喜爱喜爱 _3.集中注意力于集中注意力于_ _4.沉溺于，对沉溺于，对上瘾上瘾_5.鼓励某人做某事鼓励某人做某事_6.祝祝一切顺利一切顺利_
2、anxiousonlinerecommendbehaviourbehaveteenagergenerationattractattractionattractivebe worried aboutbe attracted tofocus onconcentrate onbe addicted to encourage sb.to do sth.all the best 2010203A letter of adviceSentences：I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior._I think you should
3、 encourage your friend to try new hobbies._Why not discuss the problem together?_我建议你和你的朋友聊聊他的行为。我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好。为什么不和他一起讨论一下这个问题呢？3Objcetiveswrite a letter of advice properly using some writing skills in this period.master some words,phrases and sentences related to writing a proper letter of ad
4、vice.12LearningBy the end of the class,you will be able to.4Read a letter offering some advice on page 18 and then solve the questions below.5A letter of advice1)What is Worried Friends problem?2)What is Susans advice?He is worried about his friend.Talk to his friend about his behaviour.Encourage hi
5、s friend to try new hobbies.Discuss the problem together with his friend.6What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions?Write them down.I recommend that.I think you should.Why not.?A letter of advice7Topic sentenceyour point of view中段中段Bodyyour advice尾段尾段Conclusionyour wishes提出有针对性的建议Body希望自己
6、的建议能对对方有所帮助，同时阐明你所提供的建议仅供对方参考。Conclusion一般指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自己的立场作一些解释。Topic sentenceA letter of advice建议信的正文通常采取“三段式结构”：8010203A letter of advice Im sorry to know that you are now having trouble(in)doing sth.知道你现在在方面有些麻烦,我很抱歉。Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。My adv
7、ice/suggestions are as follows./The following is my advice./Here are some tips to help you.我的建议如下/这里有帮助你的一些建议。Topic：交代背景：交代背景+写信目的写信目的9A letter of adviceFirst/First of all，why not.？If you do this，you can.Secondly/Whats more,you should/had better do.Then/That way,.It is also helpful/useful to do.,whi
8、ch will Thirdly/In addition/Besides,it would be a good idea if.By doing this,.As far as Im concerned/Last but not least,doing.is a better choice.When it comes to this problem,I suggest that you should.Body：介绍详情、提出建议：介绍详情、提出建议10010203A letter of adviceConclusionConclusion：提出希望采纳建议：提出希望采纳建议+感谢感谢+盼望回复盼
9、望回复I hope you will find these ideas useful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用。I believe/am sure that if you follow my advice，youll.我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会。I would be grateful if you could consider my advice.I would appreciate it if you could take my adice into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。Looking forward to your early reply.
10、盼望你的早日回复。11A letter of advice假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友谊需要时间和投入友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。12A letter of adviceStep 1List the outline of the passage.Paragraph 1：the _ of
11、 the letterParagraph 2：the _ that you giveParagraph 3：the writers _purposesuggestionshope13A letter of adviceStep 2List the words，phrases and sentences.1.Words and phrases _ n.建议 _ n.情况 _ 交朋友 _ 做有困难 _ 接受某人的建议_ 和同甘共苦 _ 需要 _ 全心全意 tip/advice/suggestion situationmake friendshave trouble/difficulty in do
12、ing.take ones adviceshare happiness and sorrow with.call forput ones heart into14A letter of advice知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(have trouble/difficulty in.)I am sorry to know _如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(beadj.to do)The situation _要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(why not)_，if you want to make friends?我认为一个朋友应该友好、诚实、负责任的。(I think)I
13、 think a friend should _你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldnt it be a good idea.？)Wouldnt it be a good idea _that you are having trouble in making friends.is easy to change if you take my advice.Why not be a friend firstbe friendly,honest and responsible.if you share happiness and sorrowwith your friend?15A l
14、etter of advice正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes)Just as a saying goes,_我建议你全心全意地交朋友。(recommend that)I recommend that_众所周知，友谊需要时间和投入。(It is well known that/As we all know)It is well known that_.a friend in need is a friend indeed.you(should)put your heart into making friends.friendship calls
15、 for time and effort16A letter of adviceStep 3Draft the article by using the following words and phrases.however，to begin with，in addition，last but not least17Dear Su Ru，I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends.However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Her
16、e are some tips to help you.To begin with，why not be a friend if you want to make friends？I think a friend should be friendly,honest and responsible.In addition，wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend?Just as a saying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed.Last
17、 but not least，I recommend that you put your heart into making friends.It is well known that friendship calls for time and effort.I hope you will find these ideas useful.All the best.Yours，Li Hua 18A letter of adviceStep 4 Exchange drafts.Use the checklist to give feedback on your partners draft.Are
18、 all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order?Does the writer give reasons for the advice?Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions?Does the writer use commas and stops correctly?Is the handwriting easy to read?19A letter of adviceStep 5 Summary:What have you learnt in this class?1.Words,phrases and sentences.2.Writing skills:Topic,Body,Conclusion.20A letter of advice21谢谢观看Thank You讲课人22
