1、单元话题写作单元话题写作The Olympic GamesYou have to believe in yourself.Thats the secret of success.你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键。Charles Chaplin Learning Aims:1.To Learn what is a good writing and to learn the techniques of writing.2.To write a composition about the 2016 Olympic Games.Enjoying and analyzing（分析感知优秀作文）（分析感知优
2、秀作文）Here are my suggestions on how to improve our ability to communicate in English.First,youd better make full use of various opportunities to practise speaking English.For example,you can join the English club or English corners where you will meet a lot of people who would like to communicate wit
3、h each other in English.In this way your ability of listening and speaking can also be improved.Passage 1 Second,try to do more reading and know more about English cultures.It is worthwhile to travel to foreign countries so that you will have a better understanding of cultural differences.Last but n
4、ot least,learn to use proper body language.Sometimes spoken language is not enough for you to express yourself,so gestures and posture can make you understood better and avoid making mistakes in communication.I hope my advice can be of great benefit to you.Great changes have taken place in the way o
5、f communication in peoples life in recent years.In the past,people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.Whats more,people have
6、easy access to the Internet,which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes,peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient.It used to take several days to hear from each other,but now it takes only several minutes,even if th
7、ey are in two different continents.In a word,people have an easier life nowadays.Whats moreIn a wordIn addition/MoreoverPassage 2DISCUSSION:What is a good writing？A good compositionContent structurelanguage覆盖所有覆盖所有内容要点内容要点层次分明，语层次分明，语法结构合理。法结构合理。语言地道、语言地道、规范、得体规范、得体DISCUSSION:What is a good writing？
8、Content:everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整内容要完整)（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字提示，可以用笔在试题处标出提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人，如果人家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）DISCUSSION:What is a good writing？Structure:*Good beginning an
9、d ending(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)*Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅)Language:*No Chinglish(避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)*No Grammatical mistakes(没有语法错误没有语法错误)*With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)Avoid Chinglish!1)Traffic in Shanghai is too c
10、rowded.2)There has a highway connected with Beijing.3)Though shes almost 40，but she still plans to compete.4)I forgot my dictionary at home.5)It will cost us much money to buy one.heavy.leftistake阅卷教师喜欢什么样的作文阅卷教师喜欢什么样的作文?字体工整，卷面干净；紧扣主题，条理清晰；语言地道，过渡自然；长度适中，一气呵成。阅卷教师讨厌什么样的作文阅卷教师讨厌什么样的作文?涂涂抹抹，斑斑点点；层次不清
11、，段落不分；语句不通，杂乱无章；书写潦草，卷面不洁；高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：1.本题总分为本题总分为25分，按分，按5个档次个档次给分。给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言内容和语言初步确初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，从总分中的，从总分中减去减去2分。分。4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点内容要点，应用词汇应用词汇和和语法结构语法结构的的丰富性丰富性和和准确性准确性及上下文的及
12、上下文的连贯性连贯性。高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：5.拼写与标点符号拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如如书写较差书写较差以至影响交际，将其以至影响交际，将其分数降分数降低一个档次低一个档次。7.语言首先要求准确通顺。语言首先要求准确通顺。8.鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。Please learn to your composition now.书面表达评价表书面表达评价
13、表 项目项目 自评自评 他评他评 1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划?2.句子开头注意大小写了吗句子开头注意大小写了吗?3.有没有注意标点符号有没有注意标点符号?4将文章分段了吗将文章分段了吗?分成了几段分成了几段?5有单词拼写错误吗有单词拼写错误吗?几个几个?6.有时态错误吗有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态误用了哪种时态?7.注意主谓一致了吗注意主谓一致了吗?8.有没有语态的错误有没有语态的错误?9.有没有使用关联词有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗使用得当吗?10.有没有词性的错误有没有词性的错误?哪一种哪一种?11.简单句表达正确吗简单句表达正确吗?12.是否注意使用了复杂的
14、句子结构是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构?13.表达方式是否多样化表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗注意长短句搭配了吗?14.有没有用好词好句有没有用好词好句?用了哪些用了哪些?作文范文：作文范文：The first modern Olympic Games were held in Athens in 1896.With its development,there are over250 sports nowadays and any country can take apartif their athletes reached the agreed standard.Themotto of
15、 the Olympic Games is“Swifter,Higher andStronger.”Its well known that the 31st Olympic Games will beheld in Rio de Janeiro,Brazil in 2016.Of course,theChinese athletes are admitted as the competitors tocompete for the honor of our country.In thecompetition,women will also play an important partin th
16、e Olympic Games.We hope that Brazil will succeed in holding theevents.Suggestions for you:1.Try your best to learn English and get yourselves interested in it.2.Do more reading.3.Form the habit of memorizing words every day.4.Practise writing regularly under the guidance of your teacher.小结小结Homework:1.Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.2.Surf the Internet to find out more information about Olympic Games.
