1、读后续写基本流程Tips for writing:1.Thorough reading 2.Creative plotting（构思）构思）3.Swift drafting4.Careful polishing5.Neat copying 1续写合理流畅生动高级丰满整洁读后续写基本要求requirements2续写Writing Practice3读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Our unplanned travels were pure joy until this day.It was day eight of
2、 a family trip to Germany for Oktoberfest,a two-week festival held in Munich,Germany,and Switzerland for Alps hiking.We wanted to book two rooms in Munich.Knowing none were available,we chose to try our luck and find a hotel along the freeway.At Freiburg(a German city 278 km west of Munich),we found
3、 the local hotel rooms were all booked for a festival.So we journeyed merrily down the road to find rooms.To our surprise,all the hotels we contacted were booked up.There was no room for us in Germany.So we went across the border into Switzerland to Basel.A large city in another country would provid
4、e two rooms for us,we thought.4 It was in Basel that our bad luck began.I drove while my wife and son burned up their phones in broken self-taught German looking for two rooms.I rolled up to a stop sign and the GPS said,Turn left.Looking at the road signs,I scratched my head(挠头)because something did
5、nt seem right.But,of course,I followed the command of my GPS pilot.Quickly it was clear that we were no longer on a road,but train tracks.“Calm down,”I instructed my wife and son.“Ill simply drive a bit until I can get off the tracks and back on a road.”This calm was short-lived as our teenage son,M
6、itch,noted,“Dad,there s a train behind us!”While we were processing this dilemma,another tram appeared in the distance.5 Our car was not pressed flat like a soda can.I eased it off the tram tracks onto a crowded pedestrian-only(行人专用的)square.Hundreds of people were enjoying their weekend outdoors.We
7、were safe,but obviously not where cars were allowed.The best plan I could think of was to(丢弃)the rental car.What a stupid idea!6Paragraph 1:About that time an elderly gentleman approached and knocked on the window of our car with his stick._ Paragraph 2:We were freed from our painful experience,but
8、still had no place to sleep for thenight!_7写作过程Writing Process8体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去时原文核心内容解读：一家人外出旅行去参加慕尼黑啤酒节，路途困难重重，很难预定到房间的故事。1.解题思路9When：It was day eight of a family trip to Germany for Oktoberfest.Where：Munich(Germany)Freiburg(Germany)Basel(Switzerland)who：I/my wife/my son,Mitch/an elderly gentleman2.文
9、章脉络102.文章脉络What:We want to book two rooms in Munich but none were available.At Freiburg,all the hotels were booked up and there was no room for us so we decided to head for Switzerland to Basel,hoping to find two rooms.It was in Basel that our bad luck began.Following the command of my GPS pilot,we
10、were no longer on a road but train tracks.Eventually,I drove my car off the tram tracks onto a crowded square where cars were not allowed.11两段首句定一框 根据续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。（我们找到了停车处）二框二首正能量第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。（我们最终找到了住所）3.写作思路12 词1）笼统词变具体词2）单词变短语3）词汇派生4.高分精炼131）笼统词变具体词笼统词变具体词笼统词笼统词具体词具体词beautifu
11、lhandsome(英俊的),attractive(吸引人的),graceful(优雅的),fine(精美的)gladexcited(兴奋的),pleasant(愉快的),joyful(欢喜的)importantvital(至关重要的),critical(决定性的),significant(意义重大的),primary(首要的),profound(深刻的)badmean(卑鄙的),evil(邪恶的),selfish(自私的),disgusting(令人厌恶的)goodexcellent(优秀的),awesome(令人惊叹的),outstanding(杰出的)poorPoorly-dressed
12、(穿着破烂),be in rags(衣衫褴褛),needy(贫困的)veryterribly(极度地),extremely(极其),highly(非常),greatly(大大地)142）单词变短语单词单词短语短语likehave a passion forlookstare at/glare atbeginget down tostandStruggle/spring to ones feetraiseput forwarddesirelong forusemake use ofdecidemake up ones mind153）词的派生前缀示例un-不；非unconsciously(无意识
13、地),untruth(谬误)in-不；非illogical(不合逻辑的),irrelevance(不相关)non-无；没有nonsense(废话),non-stop(直达的；不停的)dis-不；非；相反dishonest(不诚实的),disappear(消失)re-又；再；重新reapply(再申请),reassuring(令人放心的)anti-反对antifreeze(防冻剂),anticlimax(扫兴的结局)auto-自己(的)，无人操作（的）autobiography(自传),automatic(自动的)16Tom is a boy.He is a student.He works h
14、ard.That makes his parents happy.Tom,a boy,who is a student,works hard,which makes his parents happy.Being a student,Tom,a boy,works hard,making his parents happy.Being a good student,Tom,a clever boy,works especially hard,making his beloved parents extremely happy.Being a marvelous learner,Tom,an i
15、ntelligent teenager,works especially hard like a honeybee,making his beloved parents extremely happy.4.高分精炼罗列罗列合并合并简化简化美化丰满美化丰满替换、文学替换、文学句 For example:17无灵主语 1.My pen involuntarily hesitates.我不知该从何处下笔。我不知该从何处下笔。2.Anxiety tore the boy into pieces.这个男孩焦虑不安，整个人都崩溃了。这个男孩焦虑不安，整个人都崩溃了。3.The thick carpet k
16、illed the sound of my footsteps.我走在厚厚的地毯上，一点脚步声也没有。我走在厚厚的地毯上，一点脚步声也没有。4.All attempts to find rooms failed.寻找房间一切尝试都失败了。寻找房间一切尝试都失败了。5.The astonishment robbed me of the power to say anything.我震惊得说不出话来。我震惊得说不出话来。4.高分精炼18 Paragraph 1:About that time an elderly gentleman approached and knocked on the wi
17、ndow of our car with his stick.Hearing the knock,I rolled down the window with my heart beating wildly,wondering what would happen to us.“Why did you park your car here without permission?”asked the gentleman,confused.Feeling embarrassed,I explained to5.范文赏析 参考范文（一）19 5.范文赏析him the dilemma we were f
18、aced with.Much to our surprise,not only did the gentleman guide us to a parking lot but also he showed us around the city,where we saw a large number of people dressed in festive costumes.It was then that we felt a sense of relief.20Paragraph 2:We were freed from our painful experience,but still had
19、 no place to sleep for the night!I scratched my head again,desperate and extremely exhausted.Having sensed our awkward situation,the gentleman politely asked,“I live alone,would you mind staying with me tonight?”“It is so kind of you to offer us accommodation!Sir!”I replied,5.范文赏析21feeling excited a
20、nd grateful.We had fun with each other and never before had we had such a wonderful night.As you can see,next time you are in great trouble,keep in mind that God will open a window for you when he closes the door!5.范文赏析22About that time an elderly gentleman approached and knocked on the window of ou
21、r car with his stick.Sheepishly I rolled down the window and heard these serious words,“Sir,you can t be here in that car.”Yes,I explained why we were there.Make your way slowly and carefully to that street,he said nicely,pointing his stick to an opening 100 yards and hundreds of people away.I thank
22、ed him and drove our car through the crowd.It took a while.We got a number of glares from the walkers.But we made it out.We guessed our way back to the freeway without the use of GPS.Paragraph 1参考范文（二）23 We were freed from our painful experience,but still had no place to sleep for the night.Mitch go
23、t back on his phone,wanting to do anything that would get him out of the car because he was reaching his breaking point.Success,he announced after booking a room at a nearby hotel.At the front desk,I realized that my son failed to mention the only available room was the most expensive one in a first-class hotel,costing thousands of dollars!参考范文Paragraph 224Thanks for your attention!25
