1、Bilian High School Zhu zhanghaoIts common for us to eat out nowadays,then what aspects(方面方面)will you consider when choosing a restaurant?A balanced diet,good service delicious/tasty foodreasonable pricespleasant environment Come and eat here!Come and eat here!Come and eat in Wang PengCome and eat in
2、 Wang Pengs restaurant!s restaurant!Come and eat in Yong HuiCome and eat in Yong Huis restaurant!s restaurant!Your choice?Your choice?MenuRice,Raw vegetables,Fruit,waterMenu Barbecued mutton kebabs Roast pork,Stir-fried vegetables,Fried-rice,Cola,Ice cream+=New menuRaw vegetables with the hamburgers
3、Boiled potatoesIce cream with fresh fruitAs a result,their balanced diets became a great successThey provide a balanced menu with food full of energy and fibre which is of great benefit to your health.Penghuis RestaurantLi chang:“Nothing is better than their menu.”Offering balanced diets,the restaur
4、ant enjoyed great success.Li Chang,a regular customer in their restaurant,witnessed the change and development of it.One of his friends Jack asked him about famous restaurant in his area.Li wrote a letter to recommend(推荐推荐)Penghuis Restaurant.Writing:A letter of RecommendationDear Jack,_ Yours Li Ch
5、angPara1.knowing that you Id like to recommendPara2.reasons Para3.endingThe restaurant I recommend is Penghuis restaurant because they provide a balanced menu with food full of energy and fibre.Penghuis restaurant,in my opinion,is a good choice because they combine their ideas and offer balanced die
6、ts.As for well known restaurant,I recommend their restaurantPara1Id like to recommend Penghuis restaurant,which is very popular in our community.他们提供平衡膳食，这对我们健康有益。他们提供平衡膳食，这对我们健康有益。They provide balanced diets and they do good to our health.They provide balanced diets which bring us lots of benefits.
7、They provide balanced diets which are beneficial to our health.They provide balanced diets which are of great benefit to our health.没有什么比提供平衡膳食更重要的没有什么比提供平衡膳食更重要的1.It is the most popular restaurant in our area/community._than theirs in our area._(因他们的平衡膳食而著名因他们的平衡膳食而著名),it is the most popular restau
8、rant in our area/community.No other restaurant is more popular Well known for their balanced dietsNothing is more important than having a balanced diet.Para2 State your reasons2.With extra discount and affordable price,surely you will understand why they are so popular.With _,surely you can_.3.a bal
9、anced diet,good service,nice environment (not only,but also)Whats more,they will offer discount from time to time.With so many tasty dishes,surely you can choose whatever you likeWith good service and pleasant environment surely the restaurant can/will impress you a lot.表递进：表递进：.Whats more,.Moreover
10、FurthermoreBesidesIn additionMost importantlyTip:Whats more,besides,furthermoreThey will help you present your ideas more clearly.Dear Jack,Im glad to know you and your family are coming to my place for a visit.As for famous restaurant here,I believe Penghuis is an ideal choice._ Looking forward to
11、your arrival soon!Best wishes,Li ChangYou try:write the second partReasonsDear Jack,Im glad to know you and your family are coming to my place for a visit.As for famous restaurant here,I believe Penghuis is an ideal choice.With all kinds of delicious dishes,it is a typical restaurant where you can h
12、ave a balanced diet.You can not only receive excellent service but also enjoy the story of owners and how they changed their menus.Whats more,its clean environment will impress you a lot and the warm and friendly atmosphere will make you feel at home.Looking forward to your arrival soon!Best wishes,
13、Li ChangsampleHomework:Polish your writing.1.学习学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。2.不论不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认
14、识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。3.动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。4.议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。5.记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中
15、的水平，令人汗颜。6.大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。7.由由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。8.提炼提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时
16、，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多最多。9.抓抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。
