1、Great People and Great Inventions of Ancient China WritingM5Learning Objectives know the structure of an argument（议论文）；use transitional words（过渡词）in my writing;improve my writing and others；think critically（批判性地）.By the end of the class,I will be able toStage 1 Getting ready4 Every coin has two side
2、s,so we should think critically and dialectically(辩证地).Stage 2 Before-writingTask 1 Read the passage quickly and summarize its structure.The Advantages and Disadvantages of Cars Para 1:give some general facts about the subject（主题）（主题）Para 2:give the arguments（论据，理由论据，理由）for cars Para 3:give the argu
3、ments against cars Para 4:give the writers final opinionTask 2 Read the passage again and then find out the transitional words(过渡词).Transitional words 过渡词In the first place,/First of all,/To begin with,(首先)Whats more,/In addition,/Besides,/Furthermore,(其次)Finally,/Last but not least,/As a final poin
4、t,(最后)First,Second,Third,On the one hand,On the other hand,For one thing,For another,On the contrary,/however,/in contrast,/nevertheless,(然而，相反地)In conclusion,/To conclude,/In summary,/In short,(总之)Personally,/In my opinion,/For my part,/As for me,/From my point of view(在我看来)Stage 3 While-writing A
5、global survey finds that most people cant live without their smart phones.It has become part of their bodies.Task 3 Discuss in groups.The Advantages&Disadvantages of Smart Phones.illness social media convenienceindifference 冷漠relaxdisadvantagesLack face-to-face communicationStrain/hurt ones eyes Ove
6、ruse（过度使用）Be bad for/Have a bad effect on sb.Be addicted to virtual world(虚拟世界)Get radiation(受到辐射)Cause physical downsides（身体滑坡）Increase financial costs（财务费用）Neglect（忽视）people around us Result in/lead to indifference(冷漠)between people Bolster/improve/strengthen ones social networking(社交网络)Bring soci
7、al media convenience（社交媒体的便利）Keep up to date with the world(与世界同步)Browse the internet Use it to relax oneself Use it for entertainment Download(下载)Shop online advantages Use it in a discerning manner（以有辨别力的方式）.Treat it critically and dialectically.Useful sentences Opinions are mainly divided into tw
8、o groups.People have different opinions on this topic/problem.People hold/have different attitudes towards this problem.Opinions on this topic vary from people to people.The opinions concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.Some people hold the opinion that Some people are in favor of
9、the idea that A majority of people approve of the idea that People who are for the idea think Some people agree to the point that However,some people hold a different view.However,some people differ in their opinions on this matter.Others argue that In their opinionOther prefer to Others believe tha
10、tThose who are against the idea think that Task 4 Write an essay on this subject:1.Structure（结构）2.Content（内容）3.Sentence patterns（句型）4.Transitional words 5.Grammar The Advantages and Disadvantages of Smart Phones.Stage 4 Post-writing23Task 5 Self-check and Peer-check.Evaluation FormSelf-checkPeer-che
11、ckT e a c h e r assessmentContent(5)Structure(4)Vocabulary(4)Grammar(4)Spelling（拼写）&Punctuation（标点）&Capitalizing（大小写）(4)Handwriting(4)methodcriteriaThree strengths:1._2._ 3._One suggestion:_What have we leaned today?Stage 5 Summing-up improve your essay based on the suggestion of your partner.Then give yourself a new score according to the evaluation form.Stage 6 Homework
