1、Book7Book7 Unit 5 Travelling abroad Unit 5 Travelling abroad Writing Letter to a penfriend (Introduce the life in a place)by Lai JunJoshMy penfriendDear Cody,I am so happy to be your penfriend.My name is Josh.Im a college student,who lives in Aigio,Greece.Im writing to share with you something about
2、 my hometown.Aigio is a small city with charming natural scenery in Greece,which lies in the north coast of Peloponnesus(伯罗奔尼撒半岛).It is mild here with the Mediterranean(地中海的)climate.The air is fresh,because there are no factories in and around.Our life is quiet but a little bit busy.Many local peopl
3、e live on tourism.They are quiet but friendly.Many bars,inns and nice restaurants can be found along the coastal area.During the summer,you can come and stay here for your vacation.Youll be amazed by the delicious Greek food and the quietness with the beautiful coastal scenery.By the way,I have deci
4、ded to go to Guangxi University in Nanning to study Chinese this summer.What is the life like in Nanning?Hoping to hear from you soon.Best of luck!Yours,JoshWhat to write in the reply?How to write it?Dear Cody,I am so happy to be your penfriend.My name is Josh.Im a college student.I live in Aigio,Gr
5、eece.Im writing to share with you something about my hometown.Aigio is a small city with charming natural scenery in Greece,which lies in the north coast of Peloponnesus(伯罗奔尼撒半岛).It is mild here with the Mediterranean(地中海的)climate.The air is fresh,because there are no factories in and around.Our lif
6、e is quiet but a little bit busy.Many local people live on tourism.They are quiet but friendly.Many bars,inns and nice restaurants can be found along the coastal area.During the summer,you can come and stay here for your vacation.Youll be amazed by the delicious Greek food and the quietness with the
7、 beautiful coastal scenery.By the way,I have decided to go to Guangxi University to study Chinese this summer.What is the life like in Nanning?Hoping to hear from you soon.Best of luck!Yours,Joshlocal lifegeographyclimatefoodLets learn from Joshs letter!local peopleWhat are introduced in the letter?
8、environmentand sceneryDear Cody,I am so happy to be your penfriend.My name is Josh.Im a college student.I live in Aigio,Greece.Im writing to share with you something about my hometown.Aigio is a small city with charming natural scenery in Greece,which lies in the north coast of Peloponnesus(伯罗奔尼撒半岛)
9、.It is mild here with the Mediterranean(地中海的)climate.The air is fresh,because there are no factories in and around.Our life is quiet but a little bit busy.Many local people live on tourism.They are quiet but friendly.Many bars,inns and nice restaurants can be found along the coastal area.During the
10、summer,you can come and stay here for your vacation.Youll be amazed by the delicious Greek food and the quietness with the beautiful coastal scenery.By the way,I have decided to go to Guangxi University to study Chinese this summer.What is the life like in Nanning?Hoping to hear from you soon.Best o
11、f luck!Yours,Joshlocal lifegeographyclimatefoodLets learn from Joshs letter!local peopleWhat are introduced in the letter?environmentand scenerylocal lifegeographyclimateenvironment and sceneryfoodlocal peopleNanningGuangxi Universitystatus(地位地位)What to write in the reply?capital,permanent host city
12、 of CAEXPOlies in the south of Guangxiwarmmany green trees,Green City,beautifulconvenient(smartphone apps,high-speed train,subways)friendly,warm-hearteddelicious,variousone of the best in Guangxi,long history,beautiful campus人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad
13、写作课(共23张)How to convey all the information in this letter?Step 1.Analyze the question and make an outline 审题并列提纲Step 2.Make and polish sentences 造句润色Step 3.Compose and polish the letter 组篇再润色Step 4.Transcribe 抄写人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Greet
14、ings and writing purposeStep 1.Analyze the question and make an outline 审题并列提纲Heading开头Body主体Ending结尾Hope and wishI am so glad to.Hows everything going?Im writing to.Im looking forward to .I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes!local lifegeographyclimateenvironment and sceneryfoodlocal peopleGuang
15、xi Universitystatus(地位地位)capital,permanent host city of CAEXPOlies in the south of Guangxiwarmmany green trees,Green City,beautifulconvenient(smartphone apps,high-speed train,subways)friendly,warm-hearteddelicious,variousone of the best in Guangxi,long history,beautiful campus人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travel
16、lingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Step 2.Make and polish sentences 造句润色 Hows everything going?I am so glad to hear from you.Im writing to tell you something about Nanning.Hows everything going?I am so glad to hear from you.Knowing that you have decided to study in Guangxi
17、University,Im pleased to tell you something about Nanning.Adverbial 添加状语（Clarify the logical relation 明确逻辑关系）Greetings and writing purposeHeading开头I am so glad to.Hows everything going?Im writing to.Express emotion 增加情感的表达人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课
18、(共23张)Nanning is the capital of Guangxi.It is the permanent host city of the CAEXPO.It lies in the south of Guangxi.Nanning,which lies in the south of Guangxi,is the capital city.It is also the permanent host city of the CAEXPO.Nanning lies in the south of Guangxi.As a political and economic center,
19、it is not only the capital city of Guangxi but also the permanent host city of the CAEXPO.Attributive clause 定语从句Supportive detail 补充细节Advanced sentence pattern 高级句型Body主体status(地位地位)capital,permanent host city of CAEXPOgeographylies in the south of Guangxi人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人
20、教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Body主体Due to the warm climate and the abundant green trees all year round,Nanning is known as the Green City with beautiful scenery.The climate here is warm.There are many green trees in the city.Nanning is called the Green City.The citys scenery is beautiful
21、.Because the climate is warm and there are many green trees all year round,Nanning is called the Green City and the citys scenery is beautiful.Adverbial clause 状语从句Supportive detail 补充细节Advanced expressions高级的表达方式climateenvironment and scenerywarmmany green trees,Green City,beautiful人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit
22、5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)local lifeBody主体Life here is very convenient.Many things can be done with the powerful smartphone apps.With many high-speed trains and 3 subway lines,you can quickly reach your destinations with ease.Our life is very convenient.You
23、can use smartphone apps to do many things.The city has high-speed trains and 3 subway lines.Life here is very convenient.Many things can be done with the powerful smartphone apps.There are many high-speed trains and 3 subway lines.Prep.phrase as adverbial 介词短语做状语Passive voice被动语态convenient(smartphon
24、e apps,high-speed train,subways)Supportive detail 补充细节人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)local peopleBody主体friendly,warm-heartedPeople here are friendly and warm-hearted.They are willing to help if you are in trouble,so youll easily fit in well and fa
25、ll in love with the life here.People here are friendly and warm-hearted.Supportive detail 补充细节Phrases 短语人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Body主体What may attract you most is that a variety of delicious local snacks and food can be found in a street ca
26、lled Zhongshan Road.There are many kinds of delicious food.Phrase 短语fooddelicious,variousThere are a variety of delicious snacks and food.Supportive detail 补充细节Noun clauses 名词性从句Passive voice被动语态，人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Body主体Guangxi Univer
27、sity is one of the best universities in Guangxi.It has a long history and a large and beautiful campus.Guangxi Universityone of the best in Guangxi,long history,beautiful campusGuangxi University is one of the best universities in Guangxi,which has a long history and a large and beautiful campus.Att
28、ributive clause 定语从句人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Ending结尾Hope and wishIm looking forward to .I hope to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Im expecting your coming.All the best!I hope to see you soon.Best wishes!I look forward to seeing you soon.Best
29、 of luck!I am looking forward to your coming.Best wishes!Just keep it concise!结尾可简洁结尾可简洁人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Hows everything going?I am so glad to hear from you.Knowing that you have decided to study in Guangxi University,Im pleased to t
30、ell you something about Nanning.Nanning lies in the south of Guangxi.As a political and economic center,it is not only the capital city of Guangxi but also the permanent host city of the CAEXPO.Due to the warm climate and the abundant green trees all year round,Nanning is known as the Green City wit
31、h beautiful scenery.Life here is very convenient.Many things can be done with the powerful smartphone apps.With many high-speed trains and 3 subway lines,you can quickly reach your destinations with ease.People here are friendly and warm-hearted.They are willing to help if you are in trouble,so youl
32、l easily fit in well and fall in love with the life here.What may attract you most is that a variety of delicious local snacks and food can be found in a street called Zhongshan Road.Guangxi University is one of the best universities in Guangxi,which has a long history and a large and beautiful camp
33、us.I am looking forward to your coming.Best wishes!Step 3.Compose and polish the letter 组篇再润色组篇再润色人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Hows everything going?I am so glad to hear from you.Knowing that you have decided to study in Guangxi University,Im pl
34、eased to tell you something about Nanning.First of all,Nanning lies in the south of Guangxi.As a political and economic center,it is not only the capital city of Guangxi but also the permanent host city of the CAEXPO.Due to the warm climate and the abundant green trees all year round,Nanning is know
35、n as the Green City with beautiful scenery.Besides,life here is very convenient.Many things can be done with the powerful smartphone apps.With many high-speed trains and 3 subway lines,you can quickly reach your destinations with ease.Whats more,people here are friendly and warm-hearted.They are wil
36、ling to help if you are in trouble,so youll easily fit in well and fall in love with the life here.What may attract you most is that a variety of delicious local snacks and food can be found in a street called Zhongshan Road.As for Guangxi University,it is one of the best universities in Guangxi,whi
37、ch has a long history and a large and beautiful campus.In a word,Nanning is a beautiful and modern city with nice people.Im sure youll enjoy your study here.Looking forward to your coming.Best wishes!Step 3.Compose and polish the letter 组篇再润色组篇再润色Linking expressions or sentences 连接成分或过渡语句人教新课表高中英语选修
38、7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Dear Josh,Hows everything going?I am so glad to hear from you.Knowing that you have decided to study in Guangxi University,Im pleased to tell you something about Nanning.First of all,Nanning lies in the south of Guangxi.As a po
39、litical and economic center,it is not only the capital city of Guangxi but also the permanent host city of the CAEXPO.Due to the warm climate and the abundant green trees all year round,Nanning is known as the Green City with beautiful scenery.Besides,life here is very convenient.Many things can be
40、done with the powerful smartphone apps.With many high-speed trains and 3 subway lines,you can quickly reach your destinations with ease.Whats more,people here are friendly and warm-hearted.They are willing to help if you are in trouble,so youll easily fit in well and fall in love with the life here.
41、What may attract you most is that a variety of delicious local snacks and food can be found in a street called Zhongshan Road.As for Guangxi University,it is one of the best universities in Guangxi,which has a long history and a large and beautiful campus.In a word,Nanning is a beautiful and modern
42、city with nice people.Im sure youll enjoy your study here.Looking forward to your coming.Best wishes!Yours,CodyStep 4.Transcribe 抄写抄写Format(格式格式)Spelling(拼写拼写)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)SummaryStep 2.Make and polish sentences造句润色造句润色(1)Advance
43、d vocabularies 高级词汇高级词汇(2)Phrases 短语短语(3)Complex sentence patterns 复杂句式复杂句式(4)Diverse expressions 多样化的表达多样化的表达(5)Supportive details 补充细节补充细节Step 3.Compose and polish the letter 组篇再润色组篇再润色 Linking expressions or sentences 连接成分及过渡语句连接成分及过渡语句Step 4.Transcribe 抄写抄写 Format(格式格式)Spelling(拼写拼写)Step 1.Analy
44、ze the question and make an outline 审题并列提纲审题并列提纲Heading开头开头Body主体主体Ending结尾结尾人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)Homework 假设你是李华。你收到了美国笔友假设你是李华。你收到了美国笔友SamSam的来信。在信中，的来信。在信中，SamSam向你介绍了他的故乡，同时他也想了解你的家乡。请你给向你介绍了他的故乡，同时他也想了解你的家乡。请你给他写一封回信。信的主要内容如下：他写一封回信。信的主要内容如下：1.1.感谢感谢SamSam的来信；的来信；2.2.向向SamSam简要介绍你的家乡；简要介绍你的家乡；3.3.邀请邀请SamSam到你的家乡游玩。到你的家乡游玩。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)人教新课表高中英语选修7Unit5Travellingabroad写作课(共23张)
