1、Proof Reading Jintai senior high school:Song Xiaoni1精选Warming upCorrect the following wordsin the other handbe responsible with sb/sthbe supposed for sthlarge quantity ofhave an effect in sbmake a great progressthe accident was happenedin hurryconvince sb sthat sight ofa lot of equipmentsgeneral spe
2、akingas soon as possiblyonfortoquantitieson删去删去a删去删去wasaoftheequipmentGenerallypossible2精选改错题的命题特点 短文多选用短文多选用110词左右的记叙文和应用文词左右的记叙文和应用文 设题形式：错、多、少（设题形式：错、多、少（8:1:1）多词和少词的改动主要针对多词和少词的改动主要针对虚词虚词，实词实词多为改变多为改变形式。形式。3精选Obey the rules of correction 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同
3、桌写的作文。文中共有文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上修改后的词。，并在其下面写上修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词注意：注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词每处错误及其修改均限一词 2.只允许修改只允许修改10处，多者处，多者(从第从第10处起处起)不计分不计分并不是每一个句子都有错，有些句子并
4、非只有一处并不是每一个句子都有错，有些句子并非只有一处错误。错误。4精选Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?5精选短文改错口诀：短文改错口诀：动词形，名词数动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副还要注意形和副 非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别 代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟 介词短语常常考介词短语常常考 习惯用法要记住习惯用法要记住 句子成分多分析句子成分多分析 冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾6精选一、动词形一、动词形 As I tell you last time,I made three new friends here.Since t
5、henfor all these yearswe had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed where they please.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very.toldhavedrunk删去删去been7精选二、名词数二、名词数 The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier
6、and dirtier.Most of the students in our class are now making rapid progresses.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports one hour every day.airtimeshoursprogress8精选三、还要注意形和副三、还要注意形和副 My mum makes the better biscuit
7、s in the world.To make matters bad now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.On the left hand side of the class,I can easy see the football feild.bestworselesseasily9精选四、非谓语，细辨别四、非谓语，细辨别 Weve been spending a l
8、ot of time sing in karaoke bars.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,asking me to let her to copy my answers.(2处错误处错误)singingsittingunderstandasked删去删去to10精选五、代词格，细领悟五、代词格，细领悟
9、Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed.We must find ways to protect your environment.1.人称代词，物主代词的使用人称代词，物主代词的使用 2.反身代词反身代词oneself的使用的使用 3.人称代词的主格和宾格人称代词的主格和宾格 4.不定代词不定代词another,the other的使用的使用 5.both,all,either,neither,none 的使用的使用myselfour11精选 Close to the school there was a beautiful
10、 park with many trees around them.I let Mary copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were called to the teachers office.itboth12精选六、习惯用法要记住六、习惯用法要记住 主要考查固定搭配主要考查固定搭配 catch a sight of have a gift in all of sudden in Sunday afternoon express us such many people 删去删去a in for a in on us ourselves s
11、uch so13精选 So I didnt lose my heart and kept running.Because the help you gave me that summer,my life changed.It is so a beautiful place!删去删去my ofsuch14精选七、句子成分多分析 The first man arrive pays for the meal.With a student led me,I had no difficulty finding your office.Mary was able to switch between Ger
12、man and French,both of that she spoke fluently.It is a pity what you missed such a good lecture.In spite of serious illness,but he overcame all difficulties.to arrive leadingwhich that删去删去but15精选八、逻辑关系须关注八、逻辑关系须关注 关注整体逻辑，注意六个一致：即主谓一致、名词单复数关注整体逻辑，注意六个一致：即主谓一致、名词单复数一致、代词指代一致、时态语态一致、非谓语动词与逻辑一致、代词指代一致、时
13、态语态一致、非谓语动词与逻辑主语一致、行文逻辑关系一致。主语一致、行文逻辑关系一致。Mr.Smith,together with his wife and children,are going to visit Beijing this summer.My glasses,with which I was like a blind man,fell to the ground and broke.iswithout16精选 It was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also spl
14、endid.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.It is known to us is that he has made a very positive contribution to our society.washaving删去删去is17精选九、冠词、连词常光顾九、冠词、连词常光顾 My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of time.Today I was having a PE lesson wh
15、ile I fell down and hurt my foot.That is which other teachers say.whata when18精选 It was the culture,rather than the language,which made it hard for him to adapt to the new environment.Do you want to leave now and would you rather set off later?thator19精选短文改错应注意的问题短文改错应注意的问题 四不改四不改:标点符号不改。标点符号不改。大小写不
16、改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。词序错误不改。在纲外生词不改。在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错20精选短文改错口诀：短文改错口诀：动词形，名词数动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副还要注意形和副 非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别 代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟 介词短语常常考介词短语常常考 习惯用法要记住习惯用法要记住 句子成分多分析句子成分多分析 冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾21精选Steps of doing proofreading 1.Go through the whole passage to get a general idea.(浏览全文，掌握大意浏览全文，掌握大意)2,Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）（分句阅读，逐行找错）3,Read the passage for the third time,check the answers and correct the difficult ones.（检查核对，（检查核对，攻克难点）攻克难点）22精选
