1、如何用英语写对比类文章【写作任务】你校英语报Wellness栏目现面向全校学生征文，主题为“运动给你带来的变化”。请你用英语写一篇120词左右的短文投稿。【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作任务要求用英语写一篇短文，介绍运动给你带来的变化，属于对比类文章。主题语境为人与自我，倡导健康的生活方式、积极的生活态度。人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。二、拟定提纲本写作可分为三部分：第一部分：总体介绍；第二部分：运动前后的你；第三部分：你的感想。三、搜集素材单词：hiking, change, benefit, overweight, sickly (带病的，不健康的), anxious
2、, confident, positive, happy .短语：have a strong preference for, junk food, outdoor activities, make up my mind, build myself up, pick up, lose weight, play an important role in, bring about .句子：Ive benefited much from .I loved junk food and spent little time doing exercise.I became overweight and sic
3、kly.I didnt pass the 800-metre race.It made me anxious.I made up my mind to build myself up.It has made great changes in me.I realize the importance of doing exercise.衔接词表因果关系：because, as, so, thus, therefore, as a result .表时间顺序：first of all, firstly; then, secondly; finally, in the end, at last .表递
4、进关系：whats more, worse still, besides, moreover, furthermore, in addition .表转折关系：but, yet, however, on the contrary .四、撰写草稿按照列出的提纲，使用搜集的素材扩展每个部分，完成初稿。第一部分：总体介绍。Ive benefited much from hiking. It has changed my life.第二部分：运动前后的你。While at junior high school, I loved junk food and spent little time doing
5、 exercise. I became overweight and sickly. I didnt do well in the 800-metre race. It made me anxious. I made up my mind to build myself up. I decided to hike. It has changed me a lot. Ive become confident and happy.第三部分：你的感想。I realize the importance of doing exercise. I enjoy the changes and will ke
6、ep going.五、修改润色初稿完成后，为了使文章表达准确、逻辑清楚，需对初稿进行修改润色。如：1.使用复合句，用which引导定语从句将两个句子合并，如首段改为Ive benefited much from hiking, which has made a big difference to me。2.用短语代替单词，如make a big difference代替change, have a strong preference for代替love，play an important role in代替importance等。3.增加衔接词使上下文更加连贯，如so、worse still、
7、then、months later、moreover等。4.使用句式，增强文章的感染性，如使用强调句It was then that I made up my mind to build myself up，凸显做出改变的决心。5.适当添加细节，充实内容，使文章更有说服力，如like losing weight and getting stronger等。六、检查定稿经过修改润色之后，需要再读一遍，以便发现并改正拼写、标点符号和语法上的错误，最后定稿，完成写作。【范文欣赏】 Ive benefited much from hiking, which has made a big differe
8、nce to me. While at junior high school, I had a strong preference for junk food and spent little time doing exercise, so I became overweight and sickly. Worse still, I became the only one who did not finish the 800-metre race in my class, which made me anxious. It was then that I made up my mind to
9、build myself up. To do this I chose to hike. Months later, it has made great changes in me, like losing weight and getting stronger. Moreover, Ive become confident and happy rather than worried. The experience has helped me realize doing exercise plays an important role in ones health. I enjoy the changes hiking has brought about and will keep doing it.【Reflection】你还会从哪些方面对初稿进行修改润色呢？
