1、如何写急救故事写作任务假设你是某英文杂志的特约作者，在“120急救宣传日”到来之际，该杂志邀你写一则发生在自己身边的急救故事来帮助宣传掌握急救知识的重要性。内容包括：1.紧急状况；2.急救过程；3.急救结果。注意：词数150左右。 _写作指导一、审题定调本写作任务要求写一个急救故事，属于记叙文的范畴。在文章的开头交代清楚事件发生的时间和地点。写急救故事时，通常从紧急状况、急救过程及急救结果等几个方面来描述，可以适度地发表自己的感想。时态以一般过去时为主。二、谋篇布局本写作可分为三部分：第一部分：描述紧急状况，包括时间、地点、人物等；第二部分：描述急救过程，注意细节描写；第三部分：说明急救结果及
2、表达自己的感想。范文展示Possible version one:One day, our doorbell rang. It was Li Miao from next door: “Help, my brother is bleeding!” she shouted. My sister and I ran to their house to find 5-year-old Xiao Zhuang bleeding heavily from a huge cut in his arm. He had fallen while running through the house, accid
3、entally pushing his arm through a glass door panel.My sister grabbed a clean towel from the bathroom and pressed it on the wound to stop the blood from flowing. Xiao Zhuang was crying so my sister spoke gently trying to comfort him. She told me to call for an ambulance since she knew the cut would n
4、eed medical treatment.Just as the ambulance arrived, the medical workers immediately hugged Xiao Zhuang and held his arm. Then we went to the hospital with Xiao Zhuang, where the doctor quickly dealt with the wound. After a few weeks, it healed.Li Miaos parents were so thankful. “Im so happy that I
5、learned first aid and knew what to do,” my sister said.Possible version two:One day, on the bus to school, I noticed a young boy sitting beside me stand up, choking and holding his chest. His face turned red and he just made a violent effort to breathe. Suddenly, I realized something happened to him
6、, so I shouted loudly “Help!”Hearing that, the bus driver immediately parked the bus on the side of the road, went back and grabbed the boy, pulling him off the seat and into the aisle. Then she stood behind the boy, wrapping her arms around his waist. Quickly and constantly, I saw, she moved her fi
7、st inward and upward against the boys stomach.After a minute or two, a stick of gum rushed out of the boys mouth and rolled onto the bus floor. Soon, the boy could breathe smoothly and turned to the driver to say thanks.“I am glad that I learned the Heimlich maneuver during my first aid training. And it paid off today!” she told the boy.
