1、如何读？如何读？2017年年6月浙江高考读后续写月浙江高考读后续写Interpretation of the Text 文本解读A storyhowwherewhenwhywhowhatMacMacInterpretation of the Text 文本解读(Who)PaulPaulfriendBeckyBeckyInterpretation of the Text 文本解读(When)6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】Interpretation of the Text文本解读(How)情感线
2、：情感线：6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读(G-N策略）1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.1 The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
3、Given Information6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）New Information Did Paul and Becky offer help?Did Paul and Becky offer help?What did Paul and Becky do to What did Paul and Becky do to help Mac
4、 out?help Mac out?How did the wolf react?How did the wolf react?Was Mac rescued at last?Was Mac rescued at last?How did Mac feel?How did Mac feel?1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.1 The car abruptly stopped in front of him.6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推
5、荐】Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.2 A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.Given Information6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】Interpretation of underlined words and giv
6、en information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）New Information After their arrival,how did they react?After their arrival,how did they react?Were they grateful to the life savers?Were they grateful to the life savers?Did they continue their bike trip to Did they continue their bike trip to Alaska?Alaska?1.Interpret
7、ation of given information首句解读：Para.2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up.6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】2.Interpretation of underlined words下划线词解读：Mac，friends，bicycle，pedaled，home，wolf，jumped，cars，climb，PaulInterpretation of underlined words and given information划线词
8、和续写首句解读划线词和续写首句解读Characters人物类Mac,friends,Paul,wolfPlaces地点类 home,climbTools工具类 bicycle,carsAction动作类 pedal,jump6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】paulpaul Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读 1BeckyBeckyMacMac yelledyelleddived in,shutting dived in,shutting the door
9、 just before the door just before the wolf pounced on the wolf pounced on himhim jumped off jumped off his his bicycle bicycle 6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】paulpaul Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读 2BeckyBeckyMacMac could feel the could feel the thumping of
10、 his heart thumping of his heart against his chestagainst his chestdived in,shutting dived in,shutting the door just before the door just before the wolf pounced on the wolf pounced on himhim shouted at shouted at 6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】paulpaul Interpretat
11、ion of writing ideas 写作思路解读 2BeckyBeckyMacMac could feel the could feel the thumping of his heart thumping of his heart against his chestagainst his chestdived in,shutting dived in,shutting the door just before the door just before the wolf pounced on the wolf pounced on himhim shouted at shouted at
12、 6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：之之准确的动作神态描写：恐惧篇准确的动作神态描写：恐惧篇Para.3:Macs heart jumped.上面这一段文字情节完整，但是存在着字数不足，信息量不够，表达干瘪的缺点，无法准确传达故事类文章的情感因素。为此，我们可以通过情绪情感、心理活动、具体动作、对话独白、场景描写以及修辞等更多种方式使得文章血肉丰满，厚实感人。6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教
13、课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】I.词的积累：动词：fear,scare,dread,shock形容词：afraid,scared,dreadful,frightened,frightful名词：fear,scare,dread副词：alone,fondly,instantly,quickly,hardThe Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：表达微技能：之之准确的动作神态描写：恐惧篇准确的动作神态描写：恐惧篇6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】6月读后续写真题（精品）高考英
14、语作文新题型-PPT执教课件【推荐】II.词块和句的积累：1.A snake came out of the brushwood and scared me to death.2.The explosion really frightened the pants off me.3.That horror movie made my hair stand on end.4.I was scared stiff/silly.5.My heart stood still when I saw the little baby was to fall from the second floor.6.La
15、st night,I dreamed about being chased by an angry dog.I really had my heart in my mouth.7.That loud noise scared me out of my wits.8.A flood of fear welled up in him.9.Sally said I should try Bungee,but I had cold feet.10.She shook all over,feeling like sitting on pins and needles.The Micro-skills T
16、raining in writing 表达微技能：表达微技能：之之准确的动作神态描写：恐惧篇准确的动作神态描写：恐惧篇Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换1.1.没能够逮到那猎物，这头垂头丧气的狼离开了，消失在树林里。没能够逮到那猎物，这头垂头丧气的狼离开了，消失在树林里。Failing to get the prey,the disappointed wolf left,Failing to get the prey,the disappointed wolf left,_.(_.(运用连动句句型运用连动句句型)Failing to get the prey,the disap
17、pointed wolf left,Failing to get the prey,the disappointed wolf left,_.(_.(运用非谓语动词结构运用非谓语动词结构)Thinking of the wolfs bloody mouthwhen he thought of the wolfs bloody mouthand disappeared into the woodsdisappearing into the woodsPossible version 1 Paragraph 1 The car abruptly stopped in front of him.“C
18、ome on，get in the car quickly!”Paul yelled.Without any hesitation,Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed to the back door of the car.It was locked!Thinking of the wolfs bloody mouth,Mac was nearly dead with fright.He could even imagine the wolfs teeth tearing into his flesh.Just at that moment,the do
19、or was unlocked by Becky and the frightened man dived in,shutting the door just before the wolf pounced on him.So angry was the wolf that it kept roaring and smacking the window violently.Luckily,the car was hard to protect them.After quite a while,realizing whatever he did was in vain and that it w
20、as impossible to catch Mac,the disappointed wolf left,disappearing into the woods eventually.Mac sat in the car,his heart still fluttering with fear.Possible version 1Paragraph 2 A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.They were surprised to find Macs bicycle lying on the road,his tent ba
21、g torn and Mac just like a drowned mouse.“Mac,what on earth has happened?”“I was almost killed by a wolf!”When told about Macs thrilling experience,they couldnt help crying out,“What a narrow escape!”“Yes,without their timely help,Id have ended up in the wolfs stomach!”Macs friends were also gratefu
22、l to Paul and Becky.Afraid that there might be more potential dangers ahead,Paul and Becky offered to drive them to Alaska.Whether they would enjoy the rest of the journey,only Mac could tell.评点：文中表示惊恐的心理描写直接反映了主人公所处的危险境地，起到正面烘托人物形象、刻画人物性格的作用。伴随着故事情节的推动，主人公的危机一步一步得到缓解，因而心理的变化从吓得要死（was nearly dead wi
23、th fright）到惊恐万分（frightened）再到心有余悸（his heart still fluttering with fear）。人物的心理描写肯定是与人物所处的环境相符的，三处心理描写体现了主人公真实的心理变化，使得Mac这个人物形象更为立体丰满。Possible version 2Paragraph 1 The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paul shouted at Mac“Get in the car quickly!”Without thinking twice,Mac pedaled towards the car as
24、 fast as he could.Five yards,four yards,three yardsMac could feel the thumping of his heart against his chest and sweat drench his clothes.Suddenly the bicycle was tripped and Mac threw himself down on the ground heavily.The wolf caught up and its murderous look and bloody mouth seemed to tell Macs
25、fate.Scared to death as he was,Mac struggled to crawl up and threw his bicycle at the wolf with all his strength.Meanwhile,Paul tried honking the horn loudly to scare it away.Angry but painful,the wolf had to step back,growling and glaring at Mac angrily.Mac held his breath,daring not to make a move
26、ment.The air seemed to be frozen and both of them were waiting for a chancePossible version 2Paragraph 2A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.They were astonished to find Mac was in great danger-Macs tent bag was being torn by the wolf!Without hesitation,Macs friends dashed to help Mac
27、with a can of bear spray and a baseball bat.Feeling two strong creatures approaching,the wolf hesitated.While he really didnt want to mess up the sure thing,eventually he turned back unwillingly and disappeared into the woods.Until then everyone breathed again.Mac hugged all of them and said thanks
28、again and again.Afraid that there might be more potential dangers ahead,Paul and Becky offered to drive them to Alaska.Whether they would enjoy the rest of the journey,only Mac could tell.评点：由于第一段续写中主人公未能在狼追到之前安全进入车内，人狼生死之战逐步进入白热化阶段。因此伴随着故事情节的推动，主人公紧张的心情也逐步升级。从拼命逃跑时的the thumping of his heart against his chest and sweat drench his clothes到被狼追上时的scared to death再到人狼对峙时的Mac held his breath,daring not to make a movement，最后狼离开时的Until then everyone breathed again,所有这些细腻生动的心理描写直接展现了主人公Mac面对危机时的心路历程，从而使人物形象更为真实、立体、丰满。
