1、书面表达书面表达By June 评分时，实行分析法评分：按评分时，实行分析法评分：按 、内容内容 和和连贯连贯三项标准分别给分。三项标准分别给分。书面表达的评分标准：书面表达的评分标准：(满分满分25)语言语言15-190-410-145-920-25How can we make our language stand out to reach the high level?There are three ways to make your language stand out.How can we make our language stand out to reach the high l
2、evel?There are three principles to be kept in mind!Firstly,erase the obvious grammatical mistakes.Secondly,use complex sentences,inverted sentences and sentences with non-infinite verbs.Thirdly,pay attention to the conjunction words between sentences.The Three Principles内内 容：容：公共场所公共场所禁烟禁烟实施时间：实施时间：
3、2011年年1月月1日起日起实施范围：全国实施范围：全国目目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟标：所有室内公共场所无烟措施：措施：张贴张贴禁烟标志禁烟标志W_w w.k*s*5 u.co m相关数据：相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约）吸烟人数：约3.5亿亿（2）分）分 布：男性布：男性75；女性：；女性：25（3）受）受二手烟二手烟影响人数：约影响人数：约5.4亿亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万万/年年高考书面表达高考书面表达以下是一则关于中国政府决定以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟禁烟的报道的主要内容。的报道的主要内容。According to the relevant dat
4、as,nearly 350 million people,being consist of 75 percent of the male and 25 percent of the female,has develop the habit of smoking.Now,the number of people are affected by thesecond-hand smoking have reached 540 million.Every year because second-hand smoking more than100 million die.Chinese governme
5、nt has decidedforbid smoking.Start from January 2011,the ban requiresthere is no smoking in all the inside places.So the government will put up forbit smoking signs in order tomake sure no smoking in all the public places.中国政府决定中国政府决定禁烟禁烟 The Chinas government has decided forbid smoking.The Chinese
6、government has decided to forbid smoking.公共场所公共场所禁烟禁烟 All the public inside places no smoke start from 1/1,2011.Starting from January 1,2011,the ban requires that there should be no smoking in all the public indoor places.目目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟标：所有室内公共场所无烟措施：措施：张贴张贴禁烟标志禁烟标志The government will put up forbit
7、 smoking signs in order to make sure no smoking in all indoor public places.The government will put up signs to forbid smoking in order to ensure a smoke-free environment in all indoor public places.相关数据：相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约）吸烟人数：约3.5亿亿（2）分）分 布：男性布：男性75；女性：；女性：25According to the relevant datas,nearly 350
8、million people,being consist of 75 percent of the male and 25 percent of the female,has develop the habit of smoking.According to the relevant data,nearly350 million people,consisting of 75 percentof the male and 25 percent of the female,have developed the habit of smoking.受二手烟影响的人数：约受二手烟影响的人数：约5.4亿
9、亿The number of people are affected by the second-hand smoking have reached 540 million.The number of people affected by the second-hand smoking has reached 540 million.每年因二手烟死亡人数超过每年因二手烟死亡人数超过10万人万人.Every year because second-hand smoke die people number more than 100 thousand.Every year more than 10
10、0 thousand people die because of/due to/as a result of second-hand smoking.A correct sentence is a beautiful language.Beautiful sentence structures attract attention.Natural conjunction words(连接词）连接词）are quite necessary.Read a reference version with beautiful cojunction words and then underline the
11、words.According to a report by the Chinese government,there are about 350 million smokers in China,of whom 75%are men and 25%women._,the number of people affected by second-hand smoke has added up to about 540 million and more than 100 million of these people die each year.Faced with such a challeng
12、ing situation,_,the Chinese government has decided to forbid smoking in public places nationwide from January 1st,2011._,signs will be put up to forbid smoking._,I am sure we can make all the public indoor places free of smoke.Now,lets practise!书面表达书面表达Practice 微作文微作文 1.我想知道你能否销售一些中国结。我想知道你能否销售一些中国结
13、。2.这些中国结都是我亲自用红丝线、布料以及其他原这些中国结都是我亲自用红丝线、布料以及其他原 料做成的。料做成的。3.你知道，在中国它们象征着友谊、爱情和好运。你知道，在中国它们象征着友谊、爱情和好运。4.如果有人想要了解更多、更详细的信息，请他们给如果有人想要了解更多、更详细的信息，请他们给 我写信。我写信。（素材来源于（素材来源于2013.新课标全国卷）新课标全国卷）写作要求：写作要求：将以上句子连成一篇将以上句子连成一篇50词左右的英语短文，应用高级词左右的英语短文，应用高级 词汇以及从句复杂句并注意相应的连接词。词汇以及从句复杂句并注意相应的连接词。HomeworkAppreciat
14、e the good worksof your classmates and make improvements onyour own.最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记叙班会情况和自己的感受，内容要点如下：1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解2.你谈到了自己的梦想。3.如何实现自己的梦想。HeCooperate with your group members tomake improvement on your classmatescomposition finished during your wintervacation.While correctin
15、g,keep in mindthe three principles.Group WorkNow its the time to presentyour work.Show us how muchyou score for this passage andwhat your reasons are.Group WorkPractice 微作文微作文 1.我想知道你能否销售一些中国结。我想知道你能否销售一些中国结。2.这些中国结都是我亲自用红丝线、布料以及其他原这些中国结都是我亲自用红丝线、布料以及其他原 料做成的。料做成的。3.你知道，在中国它们象征着友谊、爱情和好运。你知道，在中国它们象征着友谊、爱情和好运。4.如果有人想要了解更多、更详细的信息，请他们给如果有人想要了解更多、更详细的信息，请他们给 我写信。我写信。（素材来源于（素材来源于2013.新课标全国卷）新课标全国卷）写作要求：写作要求：将以上句子连成一篇将以上句子连成一篇50词左右的英语短文，应用高级词左右的英语短文，应用高级 词汇以及从句复杂句并注意相应的连接词。词汇以及从句复杂句并注意相应的连接词。_ Making the language stand out,we are the best!Remember
