1、会考模拟作文练习Tips 表达方式表达方式 9：0011:30 We began our work at nine oclock and ended at half past eleven.We worked from nine to eleven thirty.结尾的感受要联系文章内容。结尾的感受要联系文章内容。描述活动的形容词描述活动的形容词 a meaningful experience an unforgettable experience a beneficial experience Last Saturday,my class organized a volunteer acti
2、vity.My classmates and I went to the city park near our school,where we did some volunteer work.We got there at nine oclock.As soon as we arrived there,we were divided into three groups,and then we began to work.Some helped water trees and flowers.Some cleaned the benches and picked up litter.Others
3、 cleaned the childrens playground.Time passed quickly.Before we knew it,it had been 11:30 and we had to go back.We didnt finish the work until 11:30.It was time for us to leave.All of us were happy because we did something good to others and to the environment.I believe this activity can increase pe
4、oples awareness of environmental protection.Protecting the earth is protecting ourselves.Last Saturday,my class organized a volunteer activity.My classmates and I went to the city park near our school.As soon as we got there at nine oclock,we were divided into three groups.Some helped water trees an
5、d flowers.Some cleaned the benches and picked up litter.Others cleaned the childrens playground.Although we were very tired,we felt very happy because we did something good to the environment.(73 words)12-14分分 上周六我们班组织了一个志愿者活动。我和我的同学们去了学校附近的城市公园。九点我们到达那个公园。一到那儿我们就被分成三组，然后开始工作。有的帮忙浇树和花，有的擦长凳，还有的捡垃圾。时
6、间过得很快，不知不觉，就到了11:30.我们该回去了。我们所有人都很高兴，因为我们为他人和环境做了好事。我相信这个活动可以提高人们环保的意识。节水周志愿者作文节水周志愿者作文-tipstips 认真审题，认真审题，“请参考以下信息，完成你的个人简介，并说明你申请成为志愿者的目的。”确定以下内容确定以下内容 内容：内容：个人简介个人简介+目的或原因目的或原因 时态：时态：一般现在时一般现在时 结构：结构：2 2段或段或3 3段段 应当适当加入连接词以使内容连贯，应当适当加入连接词以使内容连贯，条理清晰条理清晰 For one thing,For another For one thing,For
7、 another thing,thing,whats more/besides/in whats more/besides/in addition/furthermoreaddition/furthermore in a word/in short in a word/in short节水周志愿者作文节水周志愿者作文-tips-tips 在所给的每一条要点后，可以有在所给的每一条要点后，可以有适当的展开或补充，以达到丰富内适当的展开或补充，以达到丰富内容的目的。容的目的。节水周志愿者作文节水周志愿者作文-tips-tips 对对有兴趣有兴趣 sb.be interestsb.be intere
8、steded in in sb.be sb.be keen keen on on sb.be sb.be enthusiastic enthusiastic aboutabout sb.sb.have/show/expresshave/show/express anan interest interest in in 正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 我想要成为一名我想要成为一名志愿者。志愿者。Id like to Id like to becomebecome a a volunteer volunteer ofof Id like to Id like to workwork as as a
9、a volunteer volunteer forfor.Id like to Id like to take part intake part in as a volunteer.as a volunteer.正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 我擅长说英语我擅长说英语 ，因此我能够和外，因此我能够和外国人流利地国人流利地/自如地交谈。自如地交谈。I am good at I am good at speakingspeaking English English so I can so I can communicate/talkcommunicate/talk with with foreign
10、ers fluently/foreigners fluently/freelyfreely.正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 我有我有的习惯。的习惯。I I am inam in the habit of doing sth.the habit of doing sth.I I have have the habit of doing sth.the habit of doing sth.I have I have a gooda good habit of doing habit of doing sth.sth.养成养成的习惯的习惯 form/get intoform/get into the
11、 habit of the habit of doing sth.doing sth.摆脱摆脱的习惯的习惯 get rid ofget rid of the habit of doing the habit of doing sth.sth.正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 阐述做某事的原因阐述做某事的原因 I want to do I want to do because because+句子句子 The reason The reason whywhy I do is I do is that that+句子句子 I want to do .Thats I want to do .Thats
12、whywhy I I want to dowant to do 正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 阐述目的阐述目的 I want to do so that I can I want to do so that I can dodo I want to do in order that I want to do in order that I can doI can do In order to do,I want to In order to do,I want to dodo正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 为为做贡献做贡献 make contributions tomake contributi
13、ons to sth./sth./doing sth.doing sth.将自己致力于将自己致力于 devote devote oneselfoneself to sth./doing to sth./doing sth.sth.将自己的时间，精力，金钱贡献给将自己的时间，精力，金钱贡献给 devote devote onesones timetime/energyenergy/moneymoney to to 正确的语言表达正确的语言表达正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 介绍姓名，身份，来自何方介绍姓名，身份，来自何方 My name is .I am a My name is .I am a
14、Senior 2 student Senior 2 student fromfrom.I am Li Hua,a Senior 2 I am Li Hua,a Senior 2 student student studyingstudying at .at .I am a Senior 2 student I am a Senior 2 student called Li Hua called Li Hua studyingstudying at/at/who studywho study at atTIPS 文体：议论文 时态：现在时现在时 结构：3段：一方的看法；另一方的看法；我的看法议论
15、文常用句型议论文常用句型 开头句开头句：Different people have Different people have different opinions on the different opinions on the problem/the matter.problem/the matter.陈述一方观点：陈述一方观点：Some people think/consider Some people think/consider thatthat Sb.are in favor of the idea that Sb.are in favor of the idea that Sb.
16、are in favor of doing sth.Sb.are in favor of doing sth.Sb.hold the idea that Sb.hold the idea that 陈述另一方观点：陈述另一方观点：The other people are against The other people are against this idea/opinion/view.this idea/opinion/view.Sb.dont agree to the idea.Sb.dont agree to the idea.Sb.dont think that sb.Sb.dont
17、 think that sb.should doshould do 陈述自己的观点：陈述自己的观点：In my opinion,In my opinion,As far as I am concerned,As far as I am concerned,议论文常用句型议论文常用句型连接词连接词 首先，其次：首先，其次：on one hand,on the other handon one hand,on the other hand for one thing,for another for one thing,for another thingthing 递进关系递进关系：also,bes
18、ides,also,besides,whats more,in addition,whats more,in addition,furthermore,moreoverfurthermore,moreover 转折关系：转折关系：but,however,on the contrarybut,however,on the contrary Different students have different opinions on it.Some students think it is a good idea to keep pets,Pets can comfort old people wh
19、o live alone.Besides,pets can make our life interesting.Example writing becausePets can company people and bring happiness to them.On the contrary,the other students are against the idea.If too many people keep pets at home,its bad for the environment.Also,pets may be noisy and even attack people.Wh
20、at more,they spread diseases.Example writing be noisy 吵闹；喧杂make noise 制造噪音 In my opinion,we can keep pets at home.But meanwhile we should pay attention to the environment when walking pets.Only in this way,can we enjoy the pleasure with pets and protect our world.Example writing 改错 They think keep p
21、ets is bad They think keep pets is bad for the environment.for the environment.They think They think keepingkeeping pets is pets is bad for the environment.bad for the environment.the Winter Asian Games the Winter Asian Games 志愿者志愿者 将写作要点合理组合：将写作要点合理组合：*年龄，性别年龄，性别 *学历及英语水平学历及英语水平 *爱好体育，熟悉本地爱好体育，熟悉本地
22、 *善于交往，乐于助人善于交往，乐于助人 *承诺：提供最好服务承诺：提供最好服务 *合适的结尾合适的结尾the Winter Asian Games the Winter Asian Games 志愿者志愿者 Dear Sir/Madam,Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua.I would My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.the Winter Asian Games.（写信
23、的写信的目的目的）I am a boy/girl of 17I am a boy/girl of 17 and and I am studying at high school now.I am studying at high school now.I am good at English and I can I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in talk with foreign tourists in English freely.English freely.I believe I can do a I
24、 believe I can do a good job for the Gamesgood job for the Games.FirstFirst,I,I like sports and like sports and I know the place I know the place very wellvery well(I am familiar with I am familiar with the host city because it is my the host city because it is my hometown)hometown).SecondSecond,I g
25、et along,I get along with others easily.with others easily.It is especially useful for a It is especially useful for a volunteer.volunteer.BesidesBesides,Im ready Im ready to give help whenever it is to give help whenever it is neededneeded.My promise is to offer.My promise is to offer the best service to the people the best service to the people at the Games.at the Games.,which Please consider my request,Please consider my request,and Im looking forward to your and Im looking forward to your early reply.early reply.Your faithfully,Your faithfully,Li HuaLi Hua
