1、定语从句在写作中的应用句里乾坤，一锤定音句里乾坤，一锤定音一、魔法导航一、魔法导航在英语写作中使用复杂的句式结构是提高书面表达档次、增加语言亮点的主要途径之一,而定语从句就是复杂结构中的重要一项。因此,在写作中巧妙地运用定语从句可为我们的文章“增光添彩”。书面表达中定语从句的常用形式如下:1.who和whom引导定语从句时,指人。另外,在限制性定语从句中如果它们作宾语可省略。典句引领典句引领This reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she can to let me have the best.这使我想起了我的妈妈,她一直
2、竭尽全力让我拥有最好的东西。雕词琢句雕词琢句(1)I am Li Jin,(是学生会主席)in Chenguang Middle School.(2015天津)答案who is chairman of the Student Union(2)我想采访的人是杨利伟。(2015安徽)答案The person who I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.2.which引导定语从句时,指物,that引导定语从句时,既可指人又可指物。另外,which或that在限制性定语从句中作宾语可省略。典句引领典句引领I can learn all the importa
3、nt things that have happened during the week.我能够了解这周内发生的所有重要的事情。雕词琢句雕词琢句(1)Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Sat-urday for the Double Ninth Festival,(它是为老年人设立的节日)in our culture.(2015课标全国)答案 which is the day for the elderly(2)最后我们和这位老工匠(craftsman)以及我们制作的面人拍了
4、照片。(2015北京)答案Finally,we took pictures with the old craftsman and the dough figurines that we made.3.whose 引导定语从句时,既可指人又可指物,可转换为the+n.+of+whom/which的形式。典句引领典句引领I paid a visit to a school nearby whose environment was very beautiful.我参观了附近的一所学校,它的环境非常优美。雕词琢句雕词琢句(1)I would like to interview Zhang Haidi
5、(她的经历深深鼓舞了我).答案whose experience has inspired me deeply(2)我认识这个小男孩,他的妈妈是位科学家。答案 I know the little boy whose mother is a scientist.4.as引导定语从句时,意为“正如”,有引起下文的作用。典句引领典句引领As we all know,our friends will lend us a helping hand when we need help.(2014重庆)众所周知,当我们需要帮助时,我们的朋友会伸出援手。雕词琢句雕词琢句 (正如古谚语所说),living wit
6、hout a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass.答案 As an old saying goes5.由which引导的非限制性定语从句,有总结、点评上文的作用。典句引领典句引领He was always working hard,which made him pass the university entrance exam-inations.他一直学习很努力,这使他通过了高考。雕词琢句雕词琢句(1)I hope you can help the students in our class to learn m
7、ore about English and western culture,(这能增进我们的理解).(2014天津)答案 which can increase our understanding(2)十年后,我将建立自己的公司,这能帮助很多人解决就业的问题。(2014课标全国)答案In ten years,I will build up my own firm,which can help many people solve the problem of finding a job.6.使用关系副词where,why和when引导的定语从句。典句引领典句引领The picture shows
8、us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her mom.这张图片向我们展示了一个感人的时刻,一个小女孩过来迎接她的妈妈。雕词琢句雕词琢句(1)At no time will I forget the happy time (我们一起学习英语).答案 when we learned English together(2)我打算参加龙舟训练营(Dragon Boat Training Camp),在那儿我可以参加多种活动。(2015北京)答案 I am going to join the Dragon Boat Training
9、 Camp where I can take part in various kinds of activities.二、学以致用二、学以致用1.完美文章结合括号中的提示,用定语从句完成下面的文章。Hi!Tom,Nice to read your e-mail today.I notice youve begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.However,Im afraid there is(1)(我想指出来的一个错误).It is the idiom“无所不为”,(2)(它的意思是做各种各样的坏事).Are y
10、ou doing all kinds of bad things at home?I guess(3)(你真正想说的意思)is that youve got nothing to do these days.In that case,you should use“无所事事”.We usually use“无所不为”to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad,and“无所事事”to describe(4)(人们没有有意义的事情可做的情形).Have I made myself clear?Anyway,Im amazed at(
11、5)(你已经取得的进步).Hope youll find a job soon.Li Hua答案(1)one mistake(that/which)Id like to point out(2)which means“do all kinds of bad things”(3)the idea that you were really trying to say(4)the situation where/in which people have got nothing meaningful to do(5)the progress(that/which)youve made2.话题写作本期话
12、题学校生活写作要求至少运用三种定语从句。根据下面的汉语提示,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。1.众所周知,课外活动对学生的健康成长非常重要。2.我们学校的课外活动丰富多彩,其中我最喜欢踢足球。3.它不仅锻炼了我的身体,而且还塑造了我的性格。4.在活动中,我还结交了很多兴趣相同的朋友。5.我认为,学生应该积极参加自己喜欢的课外活动。答案One possible version:As we all know,out-of-class activities are of great importance to the healthy growth of the students.There are va
13、rious out-of-class activities in our school,of which playing football is my favorite,which has not only built up my body but al-so shaped my character.In addition,I have made some friends who have the same interest as me.All in all,I think students should take an active part in out-of-class activiti
14、es that they like.三、美文赏读三、美文赏读(2014重庆写作二)青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括:赞同Susan的看法你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么该礼物的意义期待大家回复注意:(1)词数不少于80;(2)符合语言规范;(3)开头已给出(不计入总词数)。我来试写I am a high school student from China.答案One possible version:I am a high school stude
15、nt from China.Recently I have read an article which/that was written by Susan Beacham,who thinks whether a gift is suitable lies not in its value but in the givers heart,and that the giver should devote time and energy to the gift.I agree with Susan,whose article reminds me of my best gift,a pen giv
16、en by my father,who was a worker.When I was in junior middle school,my father bought me a nice pen with his small salary,wishing me to study hard.From then on,the pen has been my best companion,which has been encouraging me to study hard.I am looking forward to everyones reply.本文充分运用了which、that、who、whose引导的定语从句,从而符合了高考书面表达评分标准中“尽力使用较复杂结构”这一要求,给文章增添了亮色,给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象,提升了作文档次。【写作点评】
