1、高考英语作文的润色与提高高考英语作文的润色与提高 SophiaSophia 盘山县高级中学盘山县高级中学专题一：优秀作文的基本特征专题一：优秀作文的基本特征优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征1 1、层次不乱、层次不乱2 2、句式多变、句式多变3 3、亮点若干、亮点若干3 3、巧妙串联、巧妙串联4 4、蠢错不犯、蠢错不犯6 6、整洁卷面、整洁卷面 层次不乱层次不乱开头：第一个要点开头：第一个要点主体：第二个要点主体：第二个要点结尾：第三个要点结尾：第三个要点句式多变句式多变长短变化长短变化主、被动变化主、被动变化主语变化主语变化同义词变化同义词变化同功能句型变化同功能句
2、型变化横向比较变化横向比较变化亮点若干亮点若干高中词汇高中词汇高中常见短语高中常见短语高级句型高级句型各种复合句各种复合句倒装句倒装句强调句型强调句型虚拟语气句型虚拟语气句型非谓语动词结构非谓语动词结构巧妙串联巧妙串联起：起：first of all,to begin with,above all.承：承：in addition,besides.转：转：however,on the other hand.合：合：in my opinion,all in all,in a word.蠢错不犯：蠢错不犯：初中二年级学生就应该掌握的初中二年级学生就应该掌握的基本语言表达能力。基本语言表达能力。1.I
3、 very like the book.2.He was very angrily.3.There have many student in the classroom.4.The car is yellow color.整洁卷面整洁卷面英文书写大方、圆润、自然英文书写大方、圆润、自然词与词间距适当词与词间距适当字母大小适当字母大小适当无大面积涂改无大面积涂改不影响交际不影响交际专题二专题二肃清基础语言错误肃清基础语言错误中学生英语写作中常见的中学生英语写作中常见的1414种语言错误：种语言错误：1.1.主谓不一致主谓不一致My father and I likes going fishing
4、 by the lake.Large quantities of soil has been washed away.2.2.时态、语态混用时态、语态混用Last night,I had enjoyed a party.The painting on the wall damaged seriously.was3.3.句子成分残缺句子成分残缺I stood up and saw there a boy.The young man running in the street.waswas4.4.习惯搭配误用习惯搭配误用I once heard from the animal like this.
5、We passed away the building.ofby5.5.名词单、复数不分名词单、复数不分I made many friend in the summer camp.We can get some informations from the Internet.6.6.动词单、复数不分动词单、复数不分Our teacher often say that success lie in hard work.Mr.Smith,together with some students,are coming to our school.7.7.赘词现象多发赘词现象多发I hope you ca
6、n return back to our school soon.Well hold a party on next Sunday.8.8.近义词的误用近义词的误用The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform.I quarreled with my teacher about my grades.9.9.基本词汇拼写错误基本词汇拼写错误I flied to New York directly from Beijing.This will be done immediatly.10.10.前后人称
7、不一致前后人称不一致The boy was born in a poor family but she works hard.We watched a few movies and we loved it.11.11.动词原形作主语动词原形作主语/宾语宾语Take a walk after dinner is very good for you.At that moment,I didnt feel like take a walk.12.12.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致逻辑主语与主句主语不一致Preparing dinner,the doorbell rang.Walking in the s
8、treet,a car hit an old man.高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）13.13.一个简单句出现两个谓语一个简单句出现两个谓语There was no work to do,he went back home.I received you email,I was very excited.beingWhenand高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）14.14.中式英语中式英语Next week have a party.I sorry you I cant with you go Bei
9、jing.高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）有则改之，无则加勉；有则改之，无则加勉；用心则易，无心则难。用心则易，无心则难。高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）专题三：第一反应与克制第一反应专题三：第一反应与克制第一反应高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）他是个好人。他是个好人。第一反应测试：第一反应测试：He is a good man.generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospit
10、able,easy-going,devoted,open-minded,modest,friendly 高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）对不起，我不能和你一起去北京了。Im sorry that I cant go to Beijing with you.Would you accept my heartfelt apology that I cant make it to Beijing with you as we have planned.I sorry you I cant with you go Beijing.高考英语作文的润色与提高
11、课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）英语写作中被认为是亮点的东西英语写作中被认为是亮点的东西1.1.一般中学生驾驭不了的词汇和句型结构；一般中学生驾驭不了的词汇和句型结构；2.2.恰到好处的名言、谚语等；恰到好处的名言、谚语等；3.3.一语中的的修辞手法。一语中的的修辞手法。高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）很多很多 a lot of a good number of(C.n.)a large amount of (U.n.)a great deal
12、 of(U.n.)a mountain of homework a sea of people abundant/adequate 高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）take part in join in participate in compete in sign up for 参加参加高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）fit in adapt to adjust to cope with be used to be accustomed to feel at home 适应适应高考英语作文的润色与
13、提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）follow my dream/passion pursue my goal seek after my destination/objective追求梦想追求梦想高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）about/around/some roughly approximately more or less 大约大约高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）so/therefore as a result as a consequence consequen
14、tly 因此因此高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）important crucial critical significant of much value 重要的重要的高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）恰到好处的名言、谚语能使文章增色恰到好处的名言、谚语能使文章增色高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）1.Practice makes perfect.2.God helps those who help themselves.3.Where there is a
15、 will,there is a way.4.One false step will make a great difference.5.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.6.Experience is the mother of wisdom.7.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）8.More haste,less speed.9.Its never too old to learn.10.All that glitt
16、ers is not gold.11.Look before you leap.12.Rome was not built in a day.13.Great minds think alike.14.well begun,half done.15.A friend in need is a friend indeed.高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）大胆使用基本的修辞手法大胆使用基本的修辞手法高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）比喻比喻All the students are as busy as b
17、ees preparing for the coming exams.所有学生都在忙着准备考试。所有学生都在忙着准备考试。All the students are busy preparing for the coming exams.高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）夸张夸张我感觉压力很大。我感觉压力很大。I feel great pressure.I felt as if I were under a mountain and I cant even breathe.高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张
18、）拟人拟人我感觉所有同学都在嘲笑我。我感觉所有同学都在嘲笑我。I feel all my classmates laughing at me.I felt as if even the birds on the trees are laughing at me.高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）亮点的任务：亮点的任务：使你的作文从千万篇作文中使你的作文从千万篇作文中脱颖而出脱颖而出。高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）谢谢 谢！谢！高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共50张）
