1、应用文写作应用文写作建议信建议信 培优篇培优篇建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法和主张，解决有关问题的一类信件。写建议信时，应礼貌当先，给出的建议合情合理，目的在于解决问题。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有说服力。建议信的正文框架：建议信的正文框架：第一段：得知缘由，说明目的第一段：得知缘由，说明目的 弄清对方问题，顾及对方感受第二段：提出建议，给出理由第二段：提出建议，给出理由 说明建议的内容 提出具体建议的原因 指出采纳建议的益处第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿 避免笼统的期待和祝愿假如你叫李华，假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友你的美国笔友Mark本学期
2、选修了汉语本学期选修了汉语课程。最近，他来信询问你如何学好汉语。请你根据如课程。最近，他来信询问你如何学好汉语。请你根据如下提示给与他一些建议。下提示给与他一些建议。1.认真听讲，积极练习认真听讲，积极练习2.广泛阅读广泛阅读3.欣赏影视作品欣赏影视作品注意：注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 2.词数：词数：80词左右词左右第一段：得知缘由，说明目的第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Mark本学期选修了汉语课程，需要学习建议基本思路：得知你本学期选修了汉语课程，基本思路：得知你本学期选修了汉语课程，我向你提出一些建议。我向你提出一些建议。潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型本
3、学期为.提供.得知.,某人做了某事this term/semester provide sb.with sth.Hearing/Knowing/Learning that.,sb.does sth.Knowing that you are learning Chinese this semester,I am writing to provide you with some advice on how to learn Chinese well.修改和润色修改和润色Knowing from your letter that you are learning Chinese this semes
4、ter,I am more than pleased to provide you with some advice on how to acquire a good knowledge of Chinese.Sb.be more than pleased to do sth.某人非常乐意做某事某人非常乐意做某事to acquire a good knowledge of sth.精通某事物精通某事物 Knowing that you are learning Chinese this semester,I am writing to provide you with some advice
5、on how to learn Chinese well.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第二段：提出建议，给出理由第二段：提出建议，给出理由1.认真听讲，积极练习认真听讲，积极练习2.广泛阅读广泛阅读3.欣赏影视作品欣赏影视作品原因：语言学习离不开大量的练习原因：语言学习离不开大量的练习原因：有助于扩充词汇量原因：有助于扩充词汇量原因：可以获取习惯用语原因：可以获取习惯用语高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型认真听讲积极练习大量的练习
6、广泛阅读有助于扩充词汇量获得习惯语第一，.第二，.第三，.如果你做某事话会很有帮助。如果你能够.我认为那会更有帮助。做某事最好的方法莫过于.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型认真听讲积极练习大量的练习广泛阅读有助于扩充词汇量获得习惯语listen attentively/closelypractise regularly/constantlya great deal of practiceread as much as possiblecontribute toenlarge/enrich the v
7、ocabularygain idiomatic Chinese高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型Firstly,.Secondly,.Thirdly,.It will be of great help for you to do sth.I think it would be more beneficial if you could.There is no better way to do sth than to do sth.Firstly,there is no better way to lea
8、rn a language well than to listen attentively to your teacher in class and constantly practise after class as mastering a language requires a great deal of practice.Besides,I think it would be beneficial if you could read as much as possible,which contributes to enlarging your vocabulary.Finally,you
9、 can gain idomatic Chinese through movies and songs.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)修改和润色修改和润色Firstly,there is no better way to learn a language well than to listen attentively to your teacher in class and constantly practise after class as mastering a language requires a great dea
10、l of practice.Secondly,I think it would be beneficial if you could read as much as possible,which contributes to enlarging your vocabulary.Thirdly,you cagain idomatic Chinesehrough Chinese movies and songs.To begin with,there is no better way to learn a language well than to listen attentively to yo
11、ur teacher in class and constantly practise after class as mastering a language does require a great deal of practice.Besides,I think it beneficial to read as much as possible,which contributes a lot to enlarging your vocabulary.Finally,you can gain idomatic Chinese through movies and songs.高中英语应用文写
12、作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)To begin with,.Besides,.Finally,.首先，首先，.此外，此外，.最后，最后，.to think it beneficial to do sth.认为做某事有好处认为做某事有好处do+动词原形动词原形 表示强调表示强调to contirbute a lot to.极大地有助于极大地有助于.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿希望这些建议有效，祝愿学业有成希望这些建议有效
13、，祝愿学业有成高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)我真心希望这些建议证明是有效果的。I genuinely hope the suggestions will turn out useful.祝你.Wish you sth./May you do sth.潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型I genuinely hope the suggestions will turn out useful.Wish you a suceessful semester.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇
14、(共34张PPT)Dear Mark,Knowing from your letter that you are learning Chinese this semester,I am more than pleased to provide you with some advice on how to acquire a good knowledge of Chinese.To begin with,there is no better way to learn a language well than to listen attentively to your teacher in cla
15、ss and constantly practise after class as mastering a language does require a great deal of practice.Besides,I think it beneficial if you read as much as possible,which contributes a lot to enlarging your vocabulary.Finally,you can gain idomatic Chinese through movies and songs.I genuinely hope the
16、suggestions will turn out useful.Wish you a suceessful semester.Yours sincerely,Li HuaOne possible version高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)假设你是李华。来自外国的好友Amber因为当地有数人感染新型冠状病毒而向你求助一些自我保护措施，据此请你给出相应的建议。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 2.词数：80词左右参考词汇：新型冠状病毒 the novel coronavirus高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张
17、PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第一段：得知缘由，说明目的第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Amber居住的地方有数人感染了新型冠状病毒，急需自我保护措施的建议可添加细节可添加细节：你非常担忧Amber的安全高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型感染了.对.表示担忧为.提供.自我保护得知.,某人做了某事be infected with.be concerned about.provide sb.with sth.self-protectionHearing that.,sb.does s
18、th.Hearing that several people in your town have been infected with the novel coronavirus,I am very concerned about your safety.Therefore,I am writing to provide you with some practical advice on self-protection.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)Hearing that several people in your to
19、wn have been infected with the novel coronavirus,I am very concerned about your safety.Therefore,I am writing to provide you with some practical advice on self-protection.修改和润色修改和润色Hearing that several people in your town have been infected with the novel coronavirus,I am so concerned about your saf
20、ety that I can hardly wait to provide you with some practical advice on self-protection.Attention:相邻语句之间尽量避免重复；可以考虑句子之间的整合，相邻语句之间尽量避免重复；可以考虑句子之间的整合，使语言更简洁使语言更简洁高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第二段：提出建议，给出理由第二段：提出建议，给出理由1.尽量待在家里，取消聚会原因：病毒易感，远离感染者和携带者原因：病毒易感，远离感染者和携带者2.出门戴口罩，远离人群原因：防止
21、吸入病毒原因：防止吸入病毒3.增强免疫力方法：注意休息，平衡饮食，在家适度锻炼方法：注意休息，平衡饮食，在家适度锻炼高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型取消聚会容易感染感染者携带者戴口罩远离人群防止.做.吸入病毒增强免疫力平衡饮食适度锻炼首要的是,.此外,.最后但也重要,.你最好做某事。强烈建议你做某事。某事情是备受推从的。高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型取消聚会容易感染感染者携带者戴口罩远离人群防止.做.吸
22、入病毒增强免疫力平衡饮食适度锻炼cancel the gatheringseasy infectionthose(who are)infectedvirus carrierswear a maskstay away from/avoid crowdsprevent sb.from doing sth.breathe in the virusenhance/strengthen the immunitybalanced dietsproper amounts of exercise潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型First and foremost,.Moreover,.Last but not l
23、east,.You had better do sth.You are strongly recommended to do sth.It is highly advisable that.First and foremost,due to the easy infection of the disease,you are strongly recommended to keep yourself at home as much as allowed and cancel all your gatherings,in which way you may stay away from those
24、 infected or virus carriers.Moreover,you had better wear a mask and avoid crowds to prevent yourself from breathing in the virus.Last but not least,it is highly advisable for you to enhance your immunity to the infection through regular rest,balanced diets and proper amounts of exercise at home.修改和润
25、色修改和润色First and foremost,due to the easy infection of the disease among people of all ages,you are strongly recommended to keep yourself at home as much as allowed and cancel all your gatherings,in which way you may stay away from those infected or virus carriers.Moreover,you had better wear a mask
26、and avoid crowds to prevent yourself from breathing in the virus.Last but not least,it is highly advisable for you to enhance your immunity to the infection through regular rest,balanced diets and proper amounts of exercise at home.Due to the easy infection of the disease among people of all ages,_(
27、我的首要建我的首要建议便是尽可能多地待在家里议便是尽可能多地待在家里)and cancel all your gatherings,in which way you may stay away from those infected or virus carriers._,(如果不如果不得不出门得不出门)you had better wear a mask and avoid crowds to prevent yourself from breathing in the virus.Last but not least,it is highly advisable for you to en
28、hance your immunity to the infection through regular rest,balanced diets and proper amounts of exercise at home.Attention:避免句式生搬硬套，灵活使用连接词避免句式生搬硬套，灵活使用连接词foremost suggestion is to keep yourself at home as much as allowedMy first and If forced outdoors第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿采取以上步骤，尽可能降低感染风险，相信能度过难
29、关可添加细节可添加细节：期待病毒流行期过去后的重逢潜在词汇及句型潜在词汇及句型采取以上步骤降低感染风险渡过难关流行期重逢通过做某事，我希望.take the steps abovelower the possibility of getting infectedget through the hard timeepidemicreunionBy doing sth.,I hope.By taking the steps above,I hope you can greatly lower the possibility of getting infected and that we will
30、get through the hard time.Looking forward to our reunion after the epidemic.By taking the steps above,I hope you can greatly lower the possibility of getting infected and that we will get through the hard time.Looking forward to our reunion after the epidemic.By taking the steps above,I believe you
31、can greatly lower the possibility of getting infected and that we are sure to get through the hard time.Looking forward to our reunion after the epidemic.修改和润色修改和润色Attention:注意对情感的把握，语言的目的是表达思想注意对情感的把握，语言的目的是表达思想Dear Amber,Hearing that several people in your town have been infected with the novel co
32、ronavirus,I am so concerned about your safety that I can hardly wait to provide you with some practical advice on self-protection.Due to the easy infection of the disease among people of all ages,my first and foremost suggestion is to keep yourself at home as much as allowed and cancel all your gath
33、erings,in which way you may stay away from those infected or virus carriers.If forced outdoors,you had better wear a mask and avoid crowds to prevent yourself from breathing in the virus.Last but not least,it is highly advisable for you to enhance your immunity to the infection through regular rest,
34、balanced diets and proper amounts of exercise at home.By taking the steps above,I believe you can greatly lower the possibility of getting infected and that we are sure to get through the hard time.Looking forward to our reunion after the epidemic.Yours,Li HuaOne possible version建议信注意事项建议信注意事项第一段：弄清
35、对方问题弄清对方问题，顾及对方感受第二段：说明建议的内容（是什么是什么）提出具体建议的原因（为什么为什么）指出采纳建议的益处（怎么样怎么样）第三段：避免笼统避免笼统的期待和祝愿建议信注意事项建议信注意事项1.1.尽量避免重复；考虑句子之间的整合尽量避免重复；考虑句子之间的整合2.2.避免句式生搬硬套，灵活使用连接词避免句式生搬硬套，灵活使用连接词3.3.注意把握情感，精准表达思想注意把握情感，精准表达思想建议明确，语言合理，情真意切建议明确，语言合理，情真意切假设你是李华。你的交换生好友Sofia因为新型冠状病毒爆发而无法去学校参加汉语课程，因此向你咨询如何在家学习汉语，请你给出相应的建议。注
36、意:1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 2.词数：80词左右参考词汇：新型冠状病毒 the novel coronavirus课后练习课后练习Dear Sofia,Knowing that you are unable to attend your Chinese lessons due to the outbreak of the novel coronavirus,I am quite willing to offer you some advice on how to improve your Chinese competence at home.First,you can registe
37、r for some online courses and practice by yourself after each lesson as mastering a language do require large amounts of practice.And Id also like to recommend that you read some Chinese storybooks online,which will contribute a lot to enlarging your vocabulary.Additionally,idomatic Chinese is easily accessible to you through Chinese movies and songs downloaded from the Internet.I genuinely hope the suggestions will turn out beneficial.Wish you all best and a big leap in the Chinese learning.Yours sincerely,Li Hua本课结束本课结束
