1、英语书面表达英语书面表达English Composition Writing四大内容：开头段：四大内容：问候；自我介绍；写信背景；写信目的。Well begun is half done.开头段：开头段：1、问候、问候 How are you doing?How is everything going?2、自我介绍、自我介绍 I am Lihua,a 17-year-old boy studying in XXX middle school.I am LiHua,whoWell begun is half done.3、写信背景（写信的缘由）、写信背景（写信的缘由）I heard/learn
2、ed that You said in your last letter that 4、写信目的、写信目的 Now,I am writing this letter to do sth.had planned to do sth.go to the movies/go to the cinema/watch a movieon(this)Sunday afternoon/on(at)the weekendbreak/keep ones promise/wordapologize to sb.for doing sth.make an apology to sb.for doing sth.Im
3、 sorry to do sth./thatDear Peter,I feel terribly sorry to have broken my promise that I would see a film with you on this coming Sunday afternoon.Please accept my sincere apology!正确使用有关连接词 时间先后：时间先后：first,then,later,in the end,eventually,最后最后since then,after a while 转折关系：转折关系：but,however,on the cont
4、rary（相反地）（相反地）nevertheless（然而）（然而）因果关系：因果关系：because,since,as,thanks to,owing to,as a result of,due to,because of for the reason that,thus,therefore正确使用有关连接词 让步关系：让步关系：though,although,even if,even though,as 递进关系：递进关系：whats more/worse,to make matters worse in addition,furthermoreon the one hand on the
5、 other hand 条件关系：条件关系：if,unless,as long as（只要）（只要）,on condition that(如果）如果）表表 列列 举：举：for example/instance,takefor example,thats to say,in other words 表表 总总 结：结：in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole,as has been stated,all in all,to sum up,personally,in summary Firstly Secondly Thirdl
6、y.To begin with/First of all In addition/besides/furthermore /moreover/Whats more/at the same time At Last/in the end/finally/eventually/Last but not least正确使用一些承上启下的连接词或短语用于陈述观点的词或短语 Personally,From my point of view,In my opinion,In my view,As far as Im concerned,I hold the idea that.As for me,As r
7、egards to me,eses Yesterday afternoon,I was about to leave the dormitory when I received my Chinese teachers call,telling me that I have to attend the essay contest held this Sunday afternoon.I hope the change wont cause too much trouble for you.Shall we go to have a meal together next Sunday aftern
8、oon?If it is convenient for you,lets meet at 5:00 p.m.outside the school gate.If not,please let me know what time suits you best.When I received a call from my Chinese teacher who asked me to attend the essay contestIm looking forward to your early reply.1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so ma
9、ny things.（使用名词性从句）2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用as倒装句)3.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)4.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(强调句）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇怎样使用较
10、丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.It was because of your help that I passed the physics exam.5.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词)6.They sang and laughed as they went back to
11、school.(使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says.（no matter what状语从句）8.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（祈使句+and）Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progre
12、ss.9He had hardly come back from Beijing when he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)10.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of)11.As a result the plan was a failure.(turn out)12.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(the morethe more)Hardly had he come back from Beijing when he was sent abroa
13、d.We all think highly of him.It turned out to be that the plan was a failure.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.句式改写句式改写 e.g.大家都知道，清明节是我国的传统节日。在这一天，人们会去给亲人扫墓来寄托他们的哀思。We all know Tomb-sweeping Day is a traditional festival in China.On this day,people will clean the graves in honour of the dea
14、d.whenIts known/said thatPeople hold the idea that It is on this day that people will clean 失分原因：1.语言表达有错误，不地道语言表达有错误，不地道。2.要点有所遗漏。要点有所遗漏。3.词汇量小，句子单一。词汇量小，句子单一。4.句子衔接不自然。句子衔接不自然。5.离题句太多。离题句太多。6.书写差书写差。Practice假设你是某中学英语社团团长李华，打算举行中学生英语口语大赛。你想邀请外教Mr.Thomas参加。请根据以下内容，给Mr Thomas写一封邀请信。1.诚邀Mr.Thomas做裁判。2.介绍口语大赛的目的和形式。3.大赛举办的时间、地点。final（决赛）注意：词数100左右。tips:1.时态和人称2.para.1 问候，写信目的（告知活动，发出邀请）para.2 大赛的目的，形式，举办的时间和地点 para.3 提出热切的期望
