1、高一期中考试书面表达讲析高一期中考试书面表达讲析Book 3 Module 7Writing Skills Writing书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你班邀请一位老艺人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00来班里推广剪纸艺术，你打算邀请你们学校酷爱中国文化的英国交换生Peter参加。请你写封E-mail,邀请他参加，并告诉他活动安排。参考词汇：手艺人craftsman;剪纸艺术paper-cut art 普遍错误：1.单词拼写错误 2.不会表达日期3.be动词的漏用或错用We will be invite an old manIt will hold on April 21st4.old
2、 前误用a5.主谓不一致审题不清，要点缺失Writing书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你班邀请一位老艺人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00来班里推广剪纸艺术，你打算邀请你们学校酷爱中国文化的英国交换生Peter参加。请你写封E-mail,邀请他参加，并告诉他活动安排。逻辑不清 思路点拨1.文章的首段要开门见山，言明写邮件的目的；2.第二段第二段主体部分表述要准确、流畅，结构要清晰3.结尾要重申希望参加的愿望，并期待对方尽早回复。（交际性）如何使书面表达更加流畅清晰得高分?1.What should we write?What expressions and sentences can
3、we use?1.我班将邀请一位老艺人来班里教学剪纸艺术。2.这是一个很好的机会去了解剪纸，这个传统技艺有约是一个很好的机会去了解剪纸，这个传统技艺有约2000年的历史了年的历史了3.该活动于4月21日上午8:00到10:00举行。4.受邀艺人将推广剪纸艺术，并有相关活动安排受邀艺人将推广剪纸艺术，并有相关活动安排。（难点）（难点）学生考场作文摘录：句子句子形式形式的变化的变化1.考生原句考生原句My class will invite an old craftsman who is good at paper-cutting to teach us paper-cut art.Anoldcr
4、aftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.2.考生原句考生原句It is a good way to learn about the paper-cut,which is a traditional Chinese art has around 2000 years history.n.,atraditionalChineseartwithahistoryofaround2000years.3.考生原句考生原句This activity is on April 21st and begins a
5、t 8:00am ends at 10:00.ThisactivityfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.4.受受邀艺人将邀艺人将推广推广剪纸艺术，剪纸艺术，并且要告知并且要告知Peter相关相关活动活动安排。安排。联想相关动词：explain/teach,show/display,guide/directThecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillsabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishouro
6、wnworks.并列句的使用节奏明快，使得文章错落有致考生缺少信息考生缺少信息要点罗列要点罗列“布布”词句词句2.How can we organize the necessary information and related ideas we want to write?句间：句间：不可不可松散堆砌式，松散堆砌式，起承转合连贯好。起承转合连贯好。1.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.做好要点之间的连贯和必要的延伸
7、 2.Meanwhile,youwillmakesomenewfriends.Inaword,youcanexperienceChinesecultureandbroadenyoureyesatthesametime.思考：对哪个要点做连贯和延伸？思考：对哪个要点做连贯和延伸？受邀艺人将受邀艺人将推广推广剪纸艺术，并且要告知剪纸艺术，并且要告知Peter相关相关活动安排活动安排文中：文中：逻辑逻辑分明交流要好分明交流要好在结尾处添加表希望、祝愿的语句，适当增加一些人情味，会使全文更加完整，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。DearPeter,IamLiHua,theleader
8、ofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.知道你热爱中国艺术，Idliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningfulactivity.Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese art deeply,Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.我班将邀请一位老艺人来推广剪纸艺术。ItfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraf
9、tsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.此外，还会有一些有趣的活动，你可以从中更加了解中国的文化。Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyouca
10、nhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.如能接受我的邀请我将不胜感激。Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you!look forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li HuaI would appreciate it if you accept my invitation.DearPeter,IamLiHua,theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.Knowing that you are crazy about C
11、hinese art deeply,Idliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningfulactivity.Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.ItfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraftsmanw
12、illexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.Imsureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!look
13、forwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,全国全国I卷卷书面书面表达（满分表达（满分25分）分）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.内容：学习唐诗；3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。优秀满分优秀满分范文范文Dear Leslie,How are you?Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and Im writing to tell you
14、something about our next lesson.The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502.In the class,you will mainly learn Tang poetry,which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry.Youd better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty,which makes it easy for you to go through the class.If there is anything that I can help you,please dont hesitate to tell me.Looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
