1、2021/3/11WritingShuitou No.1 Middle School Zhu Rufang2021/3/12The High School Entrance Exam(中考中考)is coming!tiredtiredbusybusy2021/3/13good ways good ways toto get relaxed get relaxed 2021/3/14Is going outing(Is going outing(春游春游)a good way to)a good way to relax for Grade 9 students?Why?relax for Gr
2、ade 9 students?Why?I think its (not)good for us.Because I think its (not)good for us.Because 2021/3/15Reasons70%ofstudentsagree30%ofstudentsdisagreeYouropinion?1.get close to nature;enjoy the beautiful nature2.Open our eyes and increase our knowledge3.be good for our health1.waste time;affect our st
3、udy2.feel tired3.Worry about our safety2021/3/16Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed.70%ofthestudentsthinkitsagoodway.Theythinkitsagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature.Goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge.Goi
4、ngoutingisgoodfortheirhealth.30%ofthemdontliketheidea.Intheiropinion,goingoutingisawasteoftime,andithasabadeffectontheirstudy.Afterall,goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired.Whatsworse,iftheygoouttoastrangeplace,noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudentGoingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoours
5、tudy.However,itshouldbeorganizedwell.2021/3/17Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed.70%ofthestudentsthinkitsagoodway._theythinkitsagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature._,goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge._,
6、goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth._,30%ofthemdontliketheidea.Intheiropinion,goingoutingisawasteoftime,andithasabadeffectontheirstudy.Afterall,goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired.Whatsworse,iftheygoouttoastrangeplace,noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudent_,goingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutals
7、otoourstudy.However,itshouldbeorganizedwell.in a word,besides,first,next,on the other hand,FirstNextBesidesOn the other handIn a wordWritingskill:使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑自然、紧凑，使文章更，使文章更为为地道地道，更具，更具“英语味英语味”。2021/3/18Sometimes to do relaxing things Sometimes to do relaxing things can make
8、 you feel better.can make you feel better.2021/3/19Tony Gina2021/3/110Tony Gina2021/3/111Tony Ginasothat,and ,than,so,however,but,so2021/3/112The better learning way,the better grade youll get.The better learning way,the better grade youll get.2021/3/113 Tony and Gina are two middle school students.
9、They both work hard but they have different learning ways.Tony often tired in class.He hardly listens to the teacher,hemiss lots of important points that the teacher makes.As a result,Its too difficult for him to finish the homework quickly.So he hasto stay up late and doesnt get enough sleep.Howeve
10、r,Gina listens careful and tries to catch what the teacher says in class.Because of this,so she learns better than Tony and she goes to bed early.In my opinion,Gina learns better in class and has more free time to enjoy herself,so I prefer her learning way.改错改错1.Tony is often tired in class./Tony of
11、ten gets/feels tired in class.2.he misses lots of important points 3.Gina listens carefully4.Because of this,she learns better than Tony.2021/3/114 1.good words:Suitable conjunctions:3.Wonderful sentences:hardlystay up late butas a resultsoandhowever1 points that the teacher(定语从句定语从句)2 Its too for s
12、b to 3catch what the teacher says.(宾语从句宾语从句)4 better than (比较级比较级 )Writingskill:使用好词好句能使你的文章加分增加文采。使用好词好句能使你的文章加分增加文采。2021/3/115 Tony and Gina are two middle school students.They both work hard but they have different learning ways.Tony is often tired in class.He hardly listens to the teacher,hemiss
13、es lots of important points that the teacher makes.As a result,Its too difficult for him to finish the homework quickly.So he hasto stay up late and doesnt get enough sleep.However,Gina listens carefully and tries to catch what the teacher says in class.Because of this,she learns better than Tony an
14、d she goes to bed early.In my opinion,Gina learns better in class and has more free time to enjoy herself,so I prefer her learning way.Its too difficult for him to finish the homework quicklyIts too difficult for him to finish the homework quicklytries to catch what the tries to catch what the teach
15、er says in classteacher says in classmisses lots of important points that the teacher makesmisses lots of important points that the teacher makesShe learns better thanShe learns better thanTonyTony2021/3/116Our school lives are nearly ending.school lifeWhat do you think of your school life?What are
16、important things in your school life?Do you have any dreams now?What are they?2021/3/1172021/3/118activities2021/3/119 三年的初中学习生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊三年的初中学习生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊成长记录袋中应该增成长记录袋中应该增添一份你自己满意的答案添一份你自己满意的答案,请以请以My school life 为题写一篇短文为题写一篇短文,记下你的校园记下你的校园生活，字数。生活，字数。写作指导：写作指导：Before writing：(细读试题，认真审题细
17、读试题，认真审题)2021/3/120写作指导：写作指导：While writing：3 After writing：（）（）拟提纲，分好段落拟提纲，分好段落（）连句成篇（）连句成篇 检查全文检查全文,注意逻辑和文采注意逻辑和文采2021/3/121 Dont give up,youll be successful.Dont give up,youll be successful.2021/3/122Homework:1.根据中考评分标准，四人一组互评作文根据中考评分标准，四人一组互评作文并订正个自的错误及找出同组作文中好并订正个自的错误及找出同组作文中好词、好句词、好句。（记录在作文本）。（
18、记录在作文本）2.再为你的作文另写一段开头和结尾再为你的作文另写一段开头和结尾.2021/3/123Thank you2021/3/124附作文评分标准（供参考）：附作文评分标准（供参考）：第五档（很好）：第五档（很好）：13151315分分 表达清楚，行文连贯，复合句运用自如正确，有文采，用上全部关键词，表达清楚，行文连贯，复合句运用自如正确，有文采，用上全部关键词，语言得体，基本无误或错误很少。语言得体，基本无误或错误很少。第四档（好）：第四档（好）：10121012分分 表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，尚能运用复合句，语言有少量错误。表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，尚能运用复合句，语言有少量错误。第三档（还好）：第三档（还好）：7979分分 只能运用简单句表达，语言有较多错误，但尚能答意。只能运用简单句表达，语言有较多错误，但尚能答意。第二档（较差）：第二档（较差）：4646分分 能写出几个要点，但语言错误较多，影响了意思表达。能写出几个要点，但语言错误较多，影响了意思表达。第一档（差）：第一档（差）：0303分分 白卷或文不对题，错误百出，不知所云。白卷或文不对题，错误百出，不知所云。2021/3/125THANKS FOR WATCHING谢谢大家观看为了方便教学与学习使用，本文档内容可以在下载后随意修改，调整。欢迎下载！时间：20XX.XX.XX汇报人：XXX
