1、Beihai,a coastal city in the south of China,has fantastic scenery and the unique culture.Day 1:The old streetDay 1:The Silver beachDay 2:Weizhou IslandDay 2:Weizhou IslandTravel experience in Beihai1.I promised to tell my friend Li Ming more details about my travel experience in Beihai by email.Now
2、please help me complete this email.Travel experience1.Time,place&people2.General introduction3.Things they did4.FeelingsBrainstorm what-to-writeWriting 2.Im pleased that you are interested in my visit to Beihai.Now Im writing to.Beginning:1.Im glad to receive your letter and Im writing to.2minsBeiha
3、i is/lies in the south of China.It the south of China.Where is it?Vientianeis located/situated inDay1:Old street The street,_,is _ for the old colonial buildings.这条街这条街建于建于19世纪世纪，以老式的殖民地风，以老式的殖民地风格建筑而格建筑而闻名闻名。built in the 19th centuryfamousDay1:Old street I was thrilled by _ _ _.我为我为这里这里有趣的雕像、有历史感的建
4、筑有趣的雕像、有历史感的建筑及其里面的酒吧及其里面的酒吧感到惊讶感到惊讶。the wonderful statues,historical architecture and the pubs thereDay 1:on the Silver Beachhad great funtook photos/picturesDay 1:on the Silver Beach我沿着银滩我沿着银滩散步散步，结束了这一天，那里有干净，结束了这一天，那里有干净的沙滩和柔和的海浪。的沙滩和柔和的海浪。I finished the day by the Silver Beach,which has clean s
5、ands and gentle waves.walking along Day 1:on the Silver BeachI also there,and with clear blue water,I had a refreshing .我还在那儿打沙滩排球，并在清澈我还在那儿打沙滩排球，并在清澈的蓝色海水游泳。的蓝色海水游泳。played beach volleyball swimmingDay 2:Weizhou IslandWeizhou Island is one of the _,_ from the city area._.涠洲岛是中国最大最年轻的火山岛之一，远离市区。涠洲岛是中
6、国最大最年轻的火山岛之一，远离市区。乘船是去那里的唯一方式。乘船是去那里的唯一方式。(volcanic isles)largest and youngest volcanic isles in Chinafar away The only way to the island is by ship.Day 2:Weizhou IslandApart from _ on the island,I also_.admiring the breathtaking scenery had seafood and dived under the water.除了欣赏岛上迷人的风景，你还可以吃海鲜，潜水除了
7、欣赏岛上迷人的风景，你还可以吃海鲜，潜水.（Brainstorm nice adjectives）,because I learned a lot from this journey,which .Though tiredI was very happy widened my eyes尽管很累，但我感到非常高兴，因为我从这尽管很累，但我感到非常高兴，因为我从这次旅行中学到了很多东西，使我开拓了眼界。次旅行中学到了很多东西，使我开拓了眼界。Ending:Travel experience1.Time,place&people2.General introduction3.Things I did
8、4.FeelingsBrainstorm what-to-writeA Sample Dear David,Im pleased that you are interested in my visit to Beihai.Now Im writing to tell you something about it.(Greetings and Purpose)Beihai is a coastal city in the south of China with the fantastic scenery and the unique culture.(General introduction)I
9、 went to the old street and the Silver Beach on the first day.The street,built in the 19th century,is famous for the old colonial buildings.I was thrilled by the wonderful statues,historical architecture and the pubs there.Time,place&peopleThings you did I finished the day by walking along the Silve
10、r Beach and I also played beach volleyball there,and with clear blue water,I had a refreshing swimming.On the second day,I went to the Weizhou island.Weizhou Island is one of the largest and youngest volcanic isles in China,far away from the city area,so the only way to the island is by ship.Apart f
11、rom admiring the breathtaking scenery on the island,I also had seafood and dived under the water.Time,place&peopleThings you did I had a wonderful trip there.Though tired,I was very happy because I learned a lot from this journey,which widened my eyes.I am ready for my next destination and will keep
12、 you updated.Best wishes,Li HuafeelingsRevision of the language in Revision of the language in ParaIntroduction(location.P33)Vivid ExpressionsPart1(Para1)Part2(2-5)Part3(para6)location,feature,climate 1.It is a popular tourist draw that receives.2.The climate is mild all year round,meaning.1.history
13、2.ethnic groups3.attractions4.business5.foodHistorically,.What started as.then turned into.The majority of residents in.are.,many of whom.1.famous sites include.to name but a few.2.visitors can also spend hours exploring.3.is a key site as well/a good place to visit,with结构结构4.is a good place to visi
14、t,where.offer a unique range/diversity of.;all kinds of.can be found1.What is treasured most in.is.2.There is food to suit everyones taste,with 结构结构diverse culture.allow(s)people who.to.to experience.first hand1.1.北海最初是客家人的居住地，后来成为华南地区最具吸引力的北海最初是客家人的居住地，后来成为华南地区最具吸引力的海滨休闲度假胜地之一。海滨休闲度假胜地之一。2.2.千百年来，客
15、家人以渔业为生，创造了丰富的海洋文化，传统千百年来，客家人以渔业为生，创造了丰富的海洋文化，传统的海味烹饪和举世闻名的贝壳工艺品深受游客的喜爱。的海味烹饪和举世闻名的贝壳工艺品深受游客的喜爱。3.3.北海有很多旅游景点，如著名的银滩，中国最年轻最大的火山北海有很多旅游景点，如著名的银滩，中国最年轻最大的火山岛岛-涠洲岛，和老街，仅举几例。涠洲岛，和老街，仅举几例。4.4.其中，老街每年接待许多游客，出售其中，老街每年接待许多游客，出售(提供提供)各式特色纪念品、各式特色纪念品、传统服装和海鲜产品，并以中西结合的建筑风格为特色。传统服装和海鲜产品，并以中西结合的建筑风格为特色。5.5.然而，很多
16、游客最钟爱的或许是北海的美食。然而，很多游客最钟爱的或许是北海的美食。6.6.在侨港，你可以找到各种各样的海鲜和小吃，它们是由曾经是在侨港，你可以找到各种各样的海鲜和小吃，它们是由曾经是移民的归国华侨提供的。移民的归国华侨提供的。7.7.北海拥有令人惊叹的自然海景和海滨生活，是一个多元文化的北海拥有令人惊叹的自然海景和海滨生活，是一个多元文化的城市，欢迎所有游客欣赏。城市，欢迎所有游客欣赏。1.1.北海最初是客家人的居住地，后来成为华南地区最具吸引力的北海最初是客家人的居住地，后来成为华南地区最具吸引力的海滨休闲度假胜地之一。海滨休闲度假胜地之一。2.2.千百年来，客家人以渔业为生，创造了丰富
17、的海洋文化，传统千百年来，客家人以渔业为生，创造了丰富的海洋文化，传统的海味烹饪和举世闻名的贝壳工艺品深受游客的喜爱。的海味烹饪和举世闻名的贝壳工艺品深受游客的喜爱。For thousands of years,Hakka people have lived on fishery and created a rich ocean culture,of which the seafood cooked in a traditional way and world-renowned crafts made in seashells are treasured by tourists.Beihai
18、started as a residential area for Hakka people and then turned into one of the most attractive coastal tourist resorts for leisure and holiday among South China.3.3.北海有很多旅游景点，如著名的银滩，中国最年轻最大的火山北海有很多旅游景点，如著名的银滩，中国最年轻最大的火山岛岛-涠洲岛，和老街，仅举几例。涠洲岛，和老街，仅举几例。4.4.其中，老街每年接待许多游客，出售其中，老街每年接待许多游客，出售(提供提供)各式特色纪念品、各式
19、特色纪念品、传统服装和海鲜产品，并以中西结合的建筑风格为特色。传统服装和海鲜产品，并以中西结合的建筑风格为特色。Among them,the Old Street receives many visitors each year,offering a unique range of souvenirs,traditional clothing and seafood products，and featuring a mix of Chinese and Western architectural style.There are many tourist attractions in Beiha
20、i,such as the famous Silver Beach,the youngest and biggest volcanic island in China-Weizhou Island，and the Old Street，to name but a few.5.5.然而，很多游客最钟爱的或许是北海的美食。然而，很多游客最钟爱的或许是北海的美食。6.6.在侨港，你可以找到各种各样的海鲜和小吃，它们是由曾经是在侨港，你可以找到各种各样的海鲜和小吃，它们是由曾经是移民的归国华侨提供的。移民的归国华侨提供的。Diverse seafood and snacks,provided by t
21、he returned overseas Chinese who used to be immigrants to other countries,can be found in Qiaogang.But perhaps what many tourists treasure most about Beihai is its food.7.7.北海拥有令人惊叹的自然海景和海滨生活，是一个多元文化的北海拥有令人惊叹的自然海景和海滨生活，是一个多元文化的城市，欢迎所有游客欣赏。城市，欢迎所有游客欣赏。With amazing natural seascapes and coastal life,Beihai is a multicultural city for all welcomed visitors to appreciate.
