1、Writing Workshop-A Personal EmailWriting Workshop-A Personal EmailTeacher：Miss Wu01Get ready for writing1.Who are you going to write to?2.What do you want to tell him/her?3.What do you want to know from him/her?You are going to write an email to a junior secondary school classmate about your new sch
2、ool.1.Who is Fang Lan?Why is Wang Ying writing to her?Fang Lan is the writers friend.Wang Ying is writing to share her new senior secondary school life with Fang Lan.2.Is the email formal or informal?Why is it written this way?It is informal.It is written this way because they are friends.3.How can
3、we tell the email is formal or informal?the greeting(Hi)contractions(Hows,its,theres)dashes()and exclamation points(!)informal words and phrases(Guess what,You know,well.)Read the email and answer questions.02Focus on structure and languagePlease label the elements(ag)of the email.a ending and wishe
4、s b greetingc subject line d reasons to finish writinge questions about the other person f information about ones own life g signatureFromFrom:Wang Ying:Wang Ying ToTo:Fang Lan:Fang Lan SubjectSubject:Hello from an old friendHello from an old friendHi Fang Lan,HowsHows your life in Canada?I hope you
5、 have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school.I love my new senior secondary school.Its much bigger than my junior secondary school and therestheres a huge gym!Do you remember Xie Zijun?Guess what-Guess what-we are in the same school!Its always good to have a friend,right?
6、right?Life in senior secondary school is very different from junior secondaryschool!You knowYou know,we dont have a fixed classroom!We go to different classes for different subjects and also for different levels.()()()()From:Wang Ying From:Wang Ying To:Fang Lan To:Fang Lan Subject:Subject:Hello from
7、 an old friendHello from an old friendHi Fang Lan,Hi Fang Lan,Hows your life in Canada?I hope you have adapted well to Hows your life in Canada?I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school.the new situation and are enjoying your new school.I love my new senior s
8、econdary school.Its much bigger than I love my new senior secondary school.Its much bigger than my junior secondary school and theres a huge gym!Do you my junior secondary school and theres a huge gym!Do you remember Xie Zijun?Guess what-we are in the same school!remember Xie Zijun?Guess what-we are
9、 in the same school!Its always good to have a friend,right?Life in senior Its always good to have a friend,right?Life in senior secondary school is very different from junior secondary school is very different from junior secondaryschool!You know,we dont have a fixed classroom!secondaryschool!You kn
10、ow,we dont have a fixed classroom!We go to different classes for different subjects and also We go to different classes for different subjects and also for different levels.for different levels.Im in the same class with Zijun for English and Im in the same class with Zijun for English and physics bu
11、t in different classes for Chinese and physics but in different classes for Chinese and maths.We also have many different clubs after class.maths.We also have many different clubs after class.You know,l like dancing,so Im in the Dancing Club.You know,l like dancing,so Im in the Dancing Club.At the m
12、oment,we meet twice a week and were At the moment,we meet twice a week and were preparing to preparing to attend a competitionattend a competition.I think my new.I think my new school gives me a chance to become a different person school gives me a chance to become a different person and I like the
13、new me.and I like the new me.Well,I must go now.Ive got a presentation tomorrow Well,I must go now.Ive got a presentation tomorrow and I need to finish my and I need to finish my slidesslides.I.I look forward to look forward to hearinghearing all about whats happening with you soon.all about whats h
14、appening with you soon.All the best!All the best!Wang YingWang YingIm in the same class with Zijun for English and physics but in different classes for Chinese and maths.We also have many different clubs after class.You know,l like dancing,so Im in the Dancing Club.At the moment,we meet twice a week
15、 and were preparing to attend a competition.I think my new school gives me a chance to become a different person and I like the new me.WellWell,I must go now.Ive got a presentation tomorrow and I need to finish my slides.I look forward to hearing all about whats happening with you soon.All the best!
16、Wang Ying()()()Sentence BuilderSentence BuilderSentence StructureSentence StructureWe dont have a We dont have a fixe dclassroom.fixe dclassroom.We are We are in the same school.in the same school.There is There is a huge gym.a huge gym.My new school gives me a chance.My new school gives me a chance
17、.主语主语谓语谓语(动词动词)宾语宾语主语主语系动词系动词表语表语ThereTherebebe动词动词真正主语真正主语主语主语谓语谓语(动词动词)间接宾语间接宾语直接宾语直接宾语主语 subject表语 predicative宾语 object直接宾语direct object间接宾语indirect object句子的基本结构（5大句型）：1.主语+谓语动词（不及物动词）2.主语+谓语动词+宾语3.主语+谓语动词+直接宾语+间接宾语4.主语+谓语动词+宾语+宾语补足语5.主语+系动词+表语1.1.主语主语+谓语动词（谓语动词（不及物动词不及物动词）The course of life is
18、like the sea;men come and go;tide rise and fall;and that is all the history.人的一生如同大海；人来又人往，潮涨又潮落，构成了全部历史主语主语不及物动词不及物动词主语主语不及物动词不及物动词2.2.主语主语+谓语动词谓语动词+宾语宾语Farmers in our area grow lots of vegetables.You can put the dishes in the kitchen.主语主语及物动词及物动词宾语宾语主语主语及物及物动词动词宾语宾语3.3.主语主语+谓语动词谓语动词+直接宾语直接宾语+间接宾语间
19、接宾语Will you please pass me the book on the desk?My parents bought me a nice Christmas present.Fetch me some wine.主语主语动词动词 间接间接宾语宾语直接直接宾语宾语主语主语动词动词间接间接宾语宾语直接宾语直接宾语动词动词间接间接宾语宾语直接直接宾语宾语4.4.主语主语+谓语动词谓语动词+宾语宾语+宾语补足语宾语补足语I find him a reliable man.I will have all my clothes washed this afternoon.主语主语 动词动词宾
20、语宾语宾补宾补主语主语动词动词宾语宾语宾补宾补5.5.主语主语+系动词系动词+表语表语The weather continues windy and rainy.The leaves turned red,orange and yellow in the autumn.主语主语系动词系动词表语表语主语主语系动词系动词表语表语03Compose your writingOutliningSubject line:_Subject line:_Greeting:_Greeting:_Questions to ask:_Questions to ask:_Informaton about you:_
21、Informaton about you:_Reasons to finish writing:_Reasons to finish writing:_Ending:_Ending:_DraftingWriting an Informal EmailIts important to:Its important to:write informal emails only to someoneyou are close to,like your friends andfamily;use simple and informal expressions,like dont,well;use prop
22、er email format with a subject line,a greeting,questions to ask,information to give and end with a reason appropriately;remember that you can use special punctuation to show your feelings.Writing HelpPeer Editing122intend/ntend/vt计划，打算，想要(intend to do sth)123junior/duni/adj.低年级的124formal/fml/adj.正式的，官方的125informal/nfml/adj.非正式的126adapt/dpt/vi.(使)适应127 adapt to sth适应某事128gym/dm/n体育馆，健身房129moment/mmnt/n某一时刻130 at the moment此刻，目前，眼下131presentation/preznten/n报告；陈述，说明132slide/slad/n幻灯片133forward/fwd/adv向前：进展134 look forward to(doing)sth期待，盼望
