1、1Unit 1 A new start23九寨风光45热带风情67North Pole北极风光89英伦风情Writing旅游日记旅游日记 日记是以记叙一天生活中所见、所闻、所做或所思为内容的一种文体。写英语日记一般要注意以下几点：1.规范的格式：英语日记通常由两部分组成，即书端和正文。书端用于记载写日记的日期、星期和天气情况。它位于正文上面的第一行，日期、星期和天气写在第一行的右上角。2.正确的人称：日记是对生活的记录，是把自己一天中最有意义的事情记录下来所形成的书面材料，故写日记多用第一人称。3.正确的时态：日记一般记叙当天发生的事，因此多用过去时态。但如谈论个人感悟或说明客观事实、普遍真理
2、时，可用现在时态。假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问，期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。1.旅行的地点、人物、时间。2.你对小镇的印象；小镇的建筑物。3.你的感受。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：leave a deep impression on pay a visit to参观 match搭配 第一步：布局谋篇很关键 审题1.确定体裁：本文为一篇_；2.确定中心人称：本文主要人称为第一、三人称；3.确定主体时态：以_为主。构思第一部分：概括今天过得很愉快，Camden Town给我留下了深刻的
3、印象。第二部分：_。第三部分：对旅行做出评价，谈谈自己的感受。英文日记一般过去时记叙当天的参观过程第二步：核心词汇想周全1._给留下深刻印象2._ 与不同3._ 参观leave a deep impression onbe different frompay a visit to第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.This morning,_,we started to go to Camden Town by bus.今天早上，吃过早饭后，我们乘公共汽车去了卡姆登镇。（时间状语从句）2._我们到达的时候是八点钟。3.The town was clean and tidy.It was differen
4、t from _.这个小镇干净、整洁，与我以前在其他地方见过的小镇不一样。（what引导宾语从句）after we had breakfastIt was eight o clock when we arrived.what I had seen in other places before4.After a short break,_.短暂休息后，我们参观了这个小镇。(pay a visit to)5.Strangely enough,_.You even feel _.奇怪的是，它们搭配得如此巧妙，你甚至感觉它们就像一幅油画一样。(match；宾语从句)we paid a visit to
5、 the townthey match each other very wellthey make a beautiful picture第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用which引导的定语从句改写句3The town _ was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.2.用so.that.引导的结果状语从句改写句5Strangely enough,they match each other _ they make a beautiful picture.which was clean and tidyso well
6、 that you even feel第五步：过渡衔接连成篇April 14th,Sunday Fine 第一部分，开篇点题，指出旅行的地点，人物，时间。We had today.Camden Town left me.第二部分，详细讲述，详细讲述所参观的景点及活动。This morning,after ,we started to .It was eight o clock .The town was different from in other places before.The people here were .After a short break,.There are and .
7、Strangely enough,they so well that you even feel .第三部分，对旅行做出评价，谈谈自己的感受。Although .By taking part in activities,I developed .佳作欣赏April 14th,Sunday Fine We had a wonderful time today.Camden Town left a deep impression on me.This morning,after we had breakfast,we started to go to Camden Town by bus.It w
8、as eight o clock when we arrived.The town which was clean and tidy was different from what I had seen in other places before.The people here were friendly and kind.After a short break,we paid a visit to the town.There are high buildings and old-style houses.Strangely enough,they match each other so
9、well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.Although I was tired,I felt excited.By taking part in these interesting activities,I developed a deep interest in British culture.21为了使同学们的课外生活更加丰富多彩，让同学们更加了解平昌，热爱家乡，上周末，我们学校组织了一次到平昌驷马双城村(Two Cities)的文化之旅(cultural hiking)，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。1.旅行的地点、人物、时间。2.你对小镇的印象；小镇的建筑物。3.你的感受。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：leave a deep impression on pay a visit to参观 match搭配 学生体验23平昌驷马双城村 Two Cities24Thank you罗中立美术馆Art Gallery2526Entertainment休闲娱乐27有很多高的和旧的建筑搭配得很巧妙，感觉像一幅美丽的画。
