1、 Book 4 Unit 1 基础写作系列如何写人物介绍如何写人物介绍Discussion 1.人物介绍通常写哪几方面的情况人物介绍通常写哪几方面的情况 (写作要点写作要点)?2.人物介绍常用的人物介绍常用的词汇和句型词汇和句型有什么有什么?人物简介的一般步骤：人物简介的一般步骤：Give the right order()教教育育：education()外外貌貌性格性格appearance,character()生生平平big events in his or her life (in order of time)()评评估估evaluation()概概况况age,sex,birth-pla
2、ce,background概概,貌貌,育育,平平,估估 平（估）菇平（估）菇概貌（盖帽）概貌（盖帽）概概,貌貌,育育,平平,估估介绍人物步骤记忆技巧：介绍人物步骤记忆技巧：审题的步骤是什么？审题的步骤是什么？、文体文体主体时态主体时态人称人称信息点整合信息点整合不要打草稿，但应有提纲不要打草稿，但应有提纲1.A.概况概况:译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941,Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong
3、Nanshan,one of the greatest doctors in China,was born in Guangzhou in 1941.B.外貌外貌,性格性格:译：译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发*语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺顺 My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.巧用巧用with做定语做定语C.教育经历：
4、教育经历：1）Majoring in Science,he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years,he went abroad for further studies.2）Graduating from the department of English of Zhongshan University,she went on further education and received a doctors degree.D生平：生平：1）Not only is he interested in sci
5、ence,but also he has a gift for music.2）He set a new world record of swimming,which won a gold medal for China Team.注意尽量用非谓语动词注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼使文章精炼尽量用复合句倒装尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章非限定定语从句等，润色文章E评估：评估：1）Leifeng set us a good example,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him.2）He is one
6、 of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.3）Lishizhen makes great contributions to Medical literature.注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组2.仿写：假如你叫白云，从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师。仿写：假如你叫白云，从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。(1)姓名：白云，出生于广州市越秀区，年龄姓名：白云，出
7、生于广州市越秀区，年龄27岁。岁。(2)2001年毕业于中山大学，后来留学英国伦敦大学。年毕业于中山大学，后来留学英国伦敦大学。(3)2005年数学方面成果显著，获博士学位。年数学方面成果显著，获博士学位。(4)英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了。英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了。(5)为了报效祖国，于为了报效祖国，于2006年毅然回国。（年毅然回国。（6）有数学天赋。）有数学天赋。注意：注意：1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。文章）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。文章首位已经给出，不算字数。首位已经给出，不算字数。写作要求写作要求只能使用只能使用5个句子表
8、达全部的内容。个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准评分标准 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。牛刀小试牛刀小试；Now comes your turn!Group work:In groups of 4 or 5,write the composition in ten minutes:Correct with your partners(How to correct?)1、是否恰好五句话？是否恰好五句话？、是否每句都含必要信息？、是否每句都含必要信息？、可否自由发挥？、可否自由发挥？、纠错原则：、纠错原则：1）句型是否用对）句型是否用对2）主谓是否一致）主谓是
9、否一致3）时态语态是否正确）时态语态是否正确4）单词拼写是否正确）单词拼写是否正确lWho will be volunteer to show your composition to the class?Dear Sir,How do you do?Through the ad.I know your company needs an engineer.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the o
10、pportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely yours,BaiyunIm Bai Yun,born in Yuexiu District,Guangzhou City,Im Bai Yun,born in Yuexiu District,Guangzhou City,aged 27.After graduating from Zhongshan aged 27.After graduating from Zhongshan University in
11、 2001,I was sent to London University University in 2001,I was sent to London University in the UK.Through 4 years hard work,I achieved in the UK.Through 4 years hard work,I achieved extraordinary achievement in maths because of my extraordinary achievement in maths because of my gift for maths and
12、received a doctors degree.A gift for maths and received a doctors degree.A British company tried hard to invite me with a good British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary,but I refused it.To devote myself to offer of salary,but I refused it.To devote myself to my motherland,I
13、 came back without any hesitation my motherland,I came back without any hesitation in 2006in 2006.基础写作注意事项：基础写作注意事项：1）能写几句就写几句，不留空白）能写几句就写几句，不留空白2）主要评分要素包括内容的）主要评分要素包括内容的完整性完整性和和连贯性连贯性、句、句子结果的子结果的正确性正确性。3）每句占）每句占2.5分，每分，每0.5分为一档分为一档4）连贯性共占）连贯性共占2.5分分5）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，决不要自我发）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，决不要自我发挥。挥。6）文
14、不对题给）文不对题给0分，写出相关短语给分，写出相关短语给0.5分。分。7）每个句子要含有所给的信息，否则该句不得分。）每个句子要含有所给的信息，否则该句不得分。8）不要生搬硬套，强加关联词）不要生搬硬套，强加关联词。Home workl请以请以“Madame Curie”为题，写一篇英语短文，要为题，写一篇英语短文，要点如下：点如下：l1居里夫人居里夫人1867年出生于波兰年出生于波兰(Poland)的一个的一个教师家庭，于教师家庭，于1934年去世。她是世界著名的女科学年去世。她是世界著名的女科学家，从小爱学习并希望成为科学家，家，从小爱学习并希望成为科学家，16岁中学毕业岁中学毕业，24
15、岁赴巴黎就读于巴黎大学，生活俭朴，学习刻岁赴巴黎就读于巴黎大学，生活俭朴，学习刻苦。苦。l2一生致力于科学研究，于一生致力于科学研究，于1903年和年和1911年年两次分别荣获诺贝尔物理奖和诺贝尔化学奖。两次分别荣获诺贝尔物理奖和诺贝尔化学奖。l注意注意 只能用只能用5个句子表达全部内容。个句子表达全部内容。Madame CurieMadame Curie was a world famous woman scientist，who was born in a teachers family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.From her early c
16、hildhood，she loved to study and hoped to become a scientist.She finished middle school at the age of 16.She left for Paris and entered Paris University when she was 24.Also,she lived a very simple life and studied very hard.Madame Curie devoted her whole life to the study of science，and won the Nobel Prize for physics and for chemistry in 1903 and in 1911.Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.
