1、“英语必修4Unit1 Women of achievement 人物写作 人物写作之基础写作Welcome to class!Basic WritingCharacter Introduction(人物介绍）人物介绍）课型:基础写作课教学目标:通过本节课的讲授,让学生掌握如何用英语介绍描写人物.重点:讲授描写人物的步骤和常用句型.难点:灵活运用所学词组及句型写一篇短文.教学方法:顺序法，对比法，归纳演绎法授课时间:星期五(1课时)Teaching contents Lead-in:Lets do a fast reading Just guess the person who is desc
2、ribed by the following sentences.1.Born on the 18th of January,1979 in Taiwan,he was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.2.Showing interest in music,he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.3.When his first album(唱片 lbm）was released in 2000,he got the world
3、s attention.4.He becomes very popular with the young,and has received many awards for his songs.5.His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled（无法匹敌的）by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes a chance on trying new things.Jay Chou(周杰伦周杰伦)Brainstorming:What do you think of when
4、introducing somebody?Introduction ofa personagebirthdaybirthplaceAppearance外貌外貌Personality(性格性格)experiencesEvaluation(评价评价)educationname Liu Xiang,a Shanghai native,_ (出生于1983.7.13).His _ (身高1.88米，体重74千克),and he _ _(爱好唱歌和电脑).Because he_（有 天赋）running,in March,1999,he entered the Shanghai track and fi
5、eld team and one year later,_ (他入选了)the National Youth Team where Sun Haiping has been training him.In 2002,he _(获得金牌)in the mens 110m hurdles at the Asian Games and at the Athens Olympic Games on August 27,2004,Liu won the mens 110m hurdles final in 12.91 seconds,equaling the world record(平世界 纪录)an
6、d _(打破奥运会纪录).He will _(致力于)winning more medals for Chinas track-and-field(田径)in the future.was born on July 13,1983height is 1.88 meters，weight 74Kgis interested in singingand computerhe was admitted to has a gift ofwon the gold medalbreaking the Olympic recorddevote himself to Liu Xiang,a Shanghai
7、native,was born on July 13,1983.His height is 1.88 meters，weight 74Kg and he is interested in singing and computer.Because he has a gift of running,in March,1999,he entered the Shanghai track and field team and one year later,he was admitted to/entered the National Youth Team where Sun Haiping has b
8、een training him.In 2002,he won the gold medal in the mens 110m hurdles at the Asian Games and at the Athens Olympic Games on August 27,2004,Liu won the mens 110m hurdles final in 12.91 seconds,equaling the world record and breaking the Olympic record.He will devote himself to winning more medals fo
9、r Chinas track-and-field in the future.A.Basic Information(Birth-name,time,place)B.Appearance,personality or hobbies C.Education D.Experiences or Achievements E.Evaluation 人物简介的写作内容：人物简介的写作内容：A.Basic Information 概况 B.Appearance,personality or hobbies 外貌、性格或爱好 C.Education 教育 D.Experiences or achievem
10、ents 经历或成就 E.Evaluation 评价语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tipstipsA.Basic Information 概况概况钱学森,1911年12月11日出生于杭州一个富裕之家,是一位伟大的科学家。A:Qian Xuesen was born on December 11,1911 into a poor family in Hangzhou and he was a great scientist.B:Born on December 11,1911 in Hangzhou,Qian Xuesen was a great scientist.Which one do yo
11、u think is better?Imitation(仿写)：我们英语老师于1985年12月24日出生在湖南一个幸福的家庭，她是一位很可爱的老师。Born on December 24,1985 into a happy family in Hunan,our English teacher is very lovely.Useful patterns(有用句式有用句式)：1)Born on _in _,_ is/was a _.2)XXX,the son/daughter of a _ family,was born in _ on _.Sentence making:Rowan Atki
12、nson,the son of a middle-class family,was born on January 6,1955.罗温.艾金森(Rowan Atkinson)，于1955年1月6日出生在一个中产阶级家庭。海子是一位很受欢迎的诗人，他于1964年3月26日出生在安徽省一个贫困的小村庄。Born on March 26,1964 in a poor village in Anhui Province,Hai Zi was a popular poet.B.Appearance and personality 外貌、性格外貌、性格 他长得高高瘦瘦，戴着一副眼镜。他看上去很害羞。A:H
13、e is very tall and thin,and wears a pair of glasses.He looks very shy.B:With a pair of glasses,the tall and thin boy looks very shy.C:He is a tall and thin boy with a pair of glasses,looking very shy.Which one do you prefer?B.Useful patterns:1)With _,XXX looks/is_.2)XXX is/was a/an_ with _,looking_.
14、Imitation:仿写仿写范冰冰是个漂亮的女演员，有着大大的眼睛,长长的头发。With big eyes and long hair,Fan Bingbing is a good-looking actress.巧用巧用withwith做定语，可尽量使用从句。做定语，可尽量使用从句。罗温(Rowan)长得高高瘦瘦的，有着大眼睛和浓眉毛(eyebrow)，看上去很搞笑。Rowan Atkinson is a tall and thin guy with big eyes and thick eyebrows,looking very funny.C.Education 教育教育 刘平2001年
15、毕业于中山大学，后来留学东京大学并取得艺术硕士学位。A:Liu Ping graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001,and then went to Tokyo University for further study and gained a masters degree in art.B:Having graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001,Liu Ping went to Tokyo University for further study,where he gained a masters d
16、egree in art.Which one do you prefer?C.Education(教育教育)1)XXX graduated from _in_ and gained a masters/doctors degree in _.2)Having graduated from_with_,XXX _.3)After graduating from _with_,XXX _.尽量使用定语或状语从句。尽量使用定语或状语从句。Imitation:仿写仿写罗温罗温 (Rowan)(Rowan)获得了牛津大学工程系的硕士学位之后获得了牛津大学工程系的硕士学位之后,决决定开始表演喜剧。定开始表
17、演喜剧。After graduating from Oxford University with a masters degree in engineering,Rowan decided to act in the comedy.D.Experiences 经历经历1）侯耀文不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。Hou Yaowen is not only interested in science,but also is gifted in music.仿:罗温不仅擅长表演，而且在写作方面也很有天赋。2）祖龙涛创造了新的游泳世界记录，为国家作出了贡献。Zu Longtao set a new
18、world record of swimming,which makes great contributions to the country.仿:朱雅伦在演讲比赛中得了一等奖，为我们班作出了贡献。Rowan is not only good at acting,but also is gifted in writing.Zhu Yalun won the first prize in the speaking competition,which made great contributions to our class.E E评价评价1）班长为我们设立了榜样,大家都赞扬他。Our monit
19、or sets us a good example,so everybody speaks highly of him.仿：陈豪为我们打扫了班级和宿舍，大家都表扬他。2）鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一,对世界文学影响很大.As one of the greatest novelists in China,Lu Xun has a great influence on the world literature.仿：罗温是全世界最伟大的喜剧演员之一，对喜剧界影响 很大。注意运用一些动词注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语形容词等短语/词组词组。As one of the greatest comedy a
20、ctors in the world,Rowen has a great influence on the world of comedy.Chen Hao cleans the classroom and the dormitory for us,so everyone speaks highly of him.Summary of the structures:生平生平：1)Born on 月 日，年 in 地点,XXX is/was a _.2)XXX,the son of a _ family,was born in _ on _.外貌、性格：外貌、性格：1)With _,XXX lo
21、oks/is_.2)XXX is/was a/an_ with _,looking_.教育：教育：1)Having graduated from_ with _,XXX gained a masters/doctors degree in _.2)After graduating from _with_,XXX _.Summary of the structures:经历：经历：devote oneself in doing sth.achieve great success;break a world record;win the first prize in.评价：评价：speak hig
22、hly of;has a/an influence on;set a/an example for;Now its your turn!根据下列内容，根据下列内容，用英语写一篇介绍安徒生用英语写一篇介绍安徒生(Hams Christian Anderson)的短文。的短文。出生时间出生时间 18051805年年出身地点出身地点一个贫穷的家庭一个贫穷的家庭逝世时间逝世时间 18751875年年外貌、性格外貌、性格 丑陋、不自信丑陋、不自信荣誉称号荣誉称号 世界著名童话世界著名童话(fairy tales)作家之一作家之一 生平生平18281828年被哥本哈根大学年被哥本哈根大学(the Univ
23、ersity of Copenhagen)录取。毕业后致力于写作，获得录取。毕业后致力于写作，获得很大成功。很大成功。主要事迹主要事迹 一生创作了一生创作了160160多个故事。多个故事。他的作品被译为他的作品被译为150150多种语言。多种语言。评价评价给孩子带来了欢乐，被高度赞扬给孩子带来了欢乐，被高度赞扬。写作要求写作要求 只能使用只能使用5 5个句子表达全部的内容。个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准评分标准 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。Presentation&Peer assessment作品展示与互评Criteria(标准)Marks(15
24、points)Content(内容)5 4 3 2 1Language(语言)8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0Coherence(连贯性)2 1 0Writing steps(写作步骤写作步骤):Step 1.审题:确定人称和时态：第三人称、一般过去式为主，评价用一般现在时第三人称、一般过去式为主，评价用一般现在时.Step 2.Rearrange the information 信息重组并翻译5句话：1)安徒生1805年出生在一个贫穷的家庭，死于1875年;他样子丑陋，所以不自信。Born into a poor family in 1805 and died in 1875,Hams C
25、hristian Anderson was ugly so that he was not self-confident.2)他1828年被哥本哈根大学录取。毕业后致力于写作，这使他获得很大成功。In 1828,he was admitted to Copenhagen University and devoted himself to writing after graduation,which made him achieve great success.Writing steps(写作步骤写作步骤):3)他一生创作了160多个故事，其中一些作品被译为150多种语言。In his whol
26、e life,he created more than 160 stories,some of which were translated into more than 150 languages.4)他给孩子带来了欢乐，因此被人们高度赞扬。He brought joy and happiness to children,for which people speak highly of him.5)他是世界著名童话作家之一。He is one of the most famous writers of fairy tales in the world.Step 3.连句成文、检查语法错误连句成
27、文、检查语法错误Sample Essay Born into a poor family in 1805 and died in 1875,Hams Christian Anderson was ugly so that he was not self-confident.In 1828,he was admitted to Copenhagen University and devoted himself to writing after graduation,which made him achieve great success.In his whole life,he created
28、more than 160 stories,some of which were translated into more than 150 languages.He brought joy and happiness to children,for which people speaks highly of him.Therefore,he is one of the most famous writers of fairy tales in the world.Conclusion:1.人物简介的写作步骤:概,貌,育,平,评2.5个句子整合语言点：1）姓名性别教育经历 2）个人特点爱好 3
29、）工作表现，特点 4）业绩（荣誉）5）评价3.用非谓语/同位语结构;巧用with做定语;倒装4.记住常用描写人物的形容词 Homework Use what you have learned today to write an introduction of American president Barack Obama姓名巴拉克奥巴马（Barack Obama）出生时间1961年8 月4 日出生地点夏威夷檀香山(Honolulu,Hawaii)家庭父亲是肯尼亚黑人，母亲是美国白人小时梦想当总统教育哈佛法学院(Harvard Law School),博士职业毕业后一直从政。2008年11月4日
30、,在大选(the general election)中击败麦凯恩(John McCain),成为美国第44任总统,首位黑人总统。意义 鼓舞人们努力工作，实现理想。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。Thanks for your attention!Some useful words and phrases:概况（出生情况、年龄、背景等）概况（出生情况、年龄、背景等）be born in 地点地点 on 月月 日，年日，年;be born into a family;20岁：岁：at the age of 20;一个一个25岁的年轻人：岁的年轻人：a twenty-five-year-o
31、ld young man；在某人童年时代：在某人童年时代：during ones childhood；在某人在某人50多岁的时候：多岁的时候：in ones fifties；外貌、性格：外貌、性格：漂亮的：漂亮的：beautiful 相貌好看的：相貌好看的：good-looking健康的：健康的：healthy头发花白的：头发花白的：white-haired诚实的：诚实的：honest 积极的：积极的：active勇敢的：勇敢的：brave 细心的：细心的：careful善良的：善良的：kind/nice幽默的：幽默的：humorous 勤劳的：勤劳的：hard-working 慷慨的：慷慨的
32、：generous耐心的：耐心的：patient 聪明的：聪明的：clever/wise/bright/smart热心的：热心的：warm-hearted 外向的：外向的：outgoingEducation&experiences 教育、经历：教育、经历：被某大学录取：被某大学录取：be admitted to XXX University；获得硕士学位：获得硕士学位：gain/receive a Masters Degree获得博士学位：获得博士学位：gain/receive a Doctors Degree；出国进修：出国进修：go abroad for further study；从某大
33、学毕业：从某大学毕业：graduate from University；主修某专业：主修某专业：major in破世界纪录：破世界纪录：break a world record；在比赛中获得第一名：在比赛中获得第一名：win the first prize in the competition；Evaluation 评价：评价：为为做出巨大贡献：做出巨大贡献：make great contributions to致力于：致力于：devote oneself to被奖赏：被奖赏：be rewarded被尊为：被尊为：be honored as被认为是：被认为是：be regarded/considered as树立好榜样树立好榜样:set a good example for高度赞扬高度赞扬:speak highly of 以以闻名：闻名：be famous/well-known for
