1、第13讲上贯下联,浑然一体过渡在写作中的应用,一、魔法导航(一)合理使用连词增加句子之间的连贯性。连词是增加句子之间连贯性的重要手段,它主要包括并列连词和从属连词。1.并列连词:用来连接并列的词与词、分句与分句或句子与句子,常用的并列连词有:and,or,but,yet,for,while,neither.nor,not only.but also。如:(1)I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic(但是我的绝大部分同学想去野餐). (2)它不仅影响我们的日常生活,而且
2、也可能威胁人们的生命。It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten peoples lives.2.从属连词:常用来引导各种状语从句。如:(1)We can set out early so that we will have more time (以便我们有更多的时间)to read and select books. (2016课标全国卷),(2) If you are interested in it(如果你对它感兴趣的话),you can visit the school website to sign up.
3、 (2017课标全国卷)(3)Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony(当视频在毕业典礼上被播放的时候), it was well received.,(二)恰当地使用过渡语。过渡语可增强句子之间的连贯性,它主要包括起连接作用的副词和起过渡作用的插入语等。如:(1) Meanwhile(同时), some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there. (
4、2017课标全国卷)(2)The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to several factors. Firstly/To begin with/To start with(首先),the quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. In addition/Besides/Whats more(另外),filming technology has advanced and mo
5、re quality films are on offer. Moreover/Also (此外),the Internet plays a vital role.,同学们要熟记下表中在写作中常用的过渡语:,(三)正确使用段落主题句和总结句。段落主题句和总结句可以使文章首尾呼应,在意义上形成一个整体,从而在宏观层次上达到增强句子连贯性的目的。如: April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning,we bicycled to the suburbs to
6、plant trees,talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival,we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering them.After getting the work done,we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos
7、to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees,we all had a sense of achievement.We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.,【评析】在段落的开头作者用一个句子点出了段落中心思想,在文章的结尾再次用一个句子表达了自己参加“绿色行动”的感受,从而升华了主题。另外,在中间部分作者通过合理运用in the morning,upon arrival,after getting the work done,before leaving
8、和seeing the lines of trees等过渡语把活动的整个过程以时间的顺序有机地融为一体,很好地体现了文章的连贯性,值得大家学习和模仿。,二、学以致用1.完美文章 在横线上填上合适的过渡语或过渡句使上下句连贯。(1)In order to study well,we need to play sports so that/in order that we can keepfit.(2)Many people suggest that the parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand
9、them better.(3)Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.,(4) There are basically two ways to get wo
10、rk done.One is to work individually. In this way,people can decide by themselves when to start work and how to do it. Whats more,they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides/I
11、n addition ,they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.,2.话题写作【本期话题】地点介绍【写作微练】请根据下面的提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。1.我们的祖国位于亚洲的东部,面积约为960万平方千米,人口约为13亿;2.历史悠久,文化丰富;,3.有很多闻名世界的旅游资源,如长城、九寨沟等;4.在过去的三十年发生了巨大变化。注意文章的连贯性。,答案One possible version:Located in the east of Asia,our homeland is a great countr
12、y with a long history and rich culture.It covers an area of about 9,600,000 square kilometers with a population of about 1.3 billion.In addition,there are a lot of worldfamous tourist sites in China,such as the Great Wall,Jiuzhaigou and so on,which attract a good many visitors all over the world eve
13、ry year.Much to our pride,great changes have taken place in our country in the past 30 years.,本文档仅为全套资料之一，欢迎点击下方按钮链接，下载全套资料！,请点此到下载本文全套资料,三、实战提能假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意:1.词数120左右,开
14、头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。,我会审题,我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)乐意willing(2)胜任be qualified for(3)获得二等奖win prize(4)建议advice/suggestion/tip(5)养成的习惯form the habit of(6)合理使用make proper use of,2.句型搭桥(1)I am convinced that.(2)When it comes to.(3)My advice is that.(4)Just as the saying goes,.我会表达Hi,Sharon,T
15、his is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.,Li Xia,答案One possible version:Hi,Sharon,This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am more than willing to lend a helping hand to you.I am convinced I can perfectly live up to your ex
16、pectations.I have such a good command of Mandarin that not only was I elected the broadcaster of the radio station of our school,but I also won second prize in the Mandarin Contest held in our city last year.When it comes to improving Mandarin,my advice is that you should listen to Mandarin every da
17、y and practice speaking it whenever possible.Just as the saying goes,practice makes perfect.,By the way,I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability,especially the proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar.Looking forward to your reply.Li Xia美句必背1.Learning that you want to improve your Mandarin,I am more than happyto lend you a hand.2.So good was my Mandarin that I was elected the broadcaster of the radio station of our school.3.How I wish that I could improve my writing ability with the help of you.,
