1、漂亮作文的定义：书写漂亮。（字迹工整，没有涂改）分段漂亮。（Hamburger Writing汉堡写作)内容漂亮。（要点齐全，字数够）词句漂亮。（亮点词，亮点句子-“死去活来”）步骤一：审题审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生，我要说的是审题一定要做到五个方面：一审 主题（写什么），二审体裁（记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议），三审时态（时态 两个扣一分，三个降一档），四审人称（别犯低级错误）。步骤二：找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点开始写作之前一定认真阅读题目中所有信息（中文提示。图示，注意事项等），一定要在试卷中画出，免得写的时候忘记，导致跑题；如果是图标题型，认真审 图，从图中找出要表达的信息要点，如
2、事件发生的背景，人物衣着，表情，动作，位置，年龄，外貌及图中英汉文字等，如果参考词汇，一定要用上。步骤三：打草稿中考一定要打草稿，两大优势中考不准在试卷更改，涂改带、橡皮、胶条、小刀，而中考时落笔错误是难免的，涂改就会后卷面分，打草稿就可以避免这个情况了。正式写作是对草稿的在梳理，语言的进一步锤炼。步骤四：检查：英语写作检查的原则：内容要点：缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档语法错误：名词查单复数和冠词问题，动词查时态语态和三单问题。变换句式：过于简单的结构要试着变化中考作文文体：1.记叙文2.议论文3.说明文4.应用文5.中考作文应试题型：6.图画作文7.图表作文8.提纲作文9.开放作文“
3、根据下表用英语写一篇根据下表用英语写一篇8080词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City ACity A和和City BCity B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。你的暑假旅游目的地。_ _ is he better place to spend my summer_ _ is he better place to spend my summerIn my opinion,In my opinion,holiday.holiday.“认 真 审 题确定体裁及
4、主题本文体裁为本文体裁为 ；主题是；主题是 。确定主体人称和主体时态主体人称是“”；主体时 态是“”确定结构层次-确定写作重点 应为写作重点“认 真 审 题确定体裁及主题本文体裁为议论文；主题是通过本文体裁为议论文；主题是通过 对对ABAB两城的比较，确定其中一两城的比较，确定其中一 个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地确定主体人称和主体时态主体人称是“I”；主体时态是 “一般现在时”确定结构层次选择自己更喜欢的城市-陈述原 因，并作比较-提出愿望确定写作重点对A城B城进行比较应为写作重点。“In my opinion,City A is the better place
5、to spend my summer holiday.There are two reasons why I choose City A.Firstly,it only takes me two hours to fly to City A,which will make me less tired during the journey.Secondly,although the temperature is higher and the food is less delicious than those of City B,I have more things to do in City A
6、.For example,I can visit many places of interest and meet many interesting people.I hope that I will spend an unforgettable holiday in City A.请找出你认为写得“漂亮”的地方！更请找出一个缺点！“In my opinion,City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday.There are two reasons why I choose City A.Firstly,it only takes
7、me two hours tofly to City A,which will make me less tired during the journey.Secondly,although the temperature is higher and the food is less delicious than those of City B,I have more things to do in City A.For example,I can visit many places of interest and meet many interesting people.I hope tha
8、t I will spend an unforgettable holiday in City A.精彩提分要点:（从句大集中）Why引导的定语从句It takes。句型which引导的非限定性定语从句Although 引导的让步状语从句比较级的灵活使用I hope that。宾语从句逻辑连接词使用准确:Firstly,Secondly词汇短语积累：Unforgettableadj.难忘的“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）1.尽管那里的气温更高，酒店不太舒适，甚至食物也不及城市B美味，我 依然选择城市A。1.Although the temperature there is highe
9、r,the hotel is less comfortable,and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B,I still choose City A.“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）2.最重要的原因是我在城市A可以做更多的事情。“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）2.The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A.“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）3.我可以欣赏更优美的风景，并且参加更多活动。“写
10、作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）3.I can enjoy more beautiful scenery(风景，景色;)and do more activities.“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）4.另外，坐飞机去城市A只需要两个小时，这帮我节省了很多时间。“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）4.Besides,it takes me only two hours to fly there,which saves me a lot of time.“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）5.我希望这个假期将会是一次难忘的经历。“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）
11、5.I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）三、三、The reason why The reason why 从句从句is that+is that+从句从句的原因是的原因是例：例：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they The reason why we have to grow trees is that they cancanprovide us with fresh air.provide us with fres
12、h air.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。“写作练习：（写句子）写作练习：（写句子）“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：三三.The reason why.The reason why 从句从句is that+is that+从句从句的原因是的原因是练习：练习：1.1.他迟到的原因是他生病了。他迟到的原因是他生病了。“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：三三.The reason why.The reason why 从句从句is that+is that+从句从句的原因是的原因是练习：练习：1.The reason why he
13、 was late was that he was ill.1.The reason why he was late was that he was ill.“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：三三.The reason why.The reason why 从句从句is that+is that+从句从句的原因是的原因是练习：练习：2.2.我迟到的原因是因为我的车在半路上抛锚了。我迟到的原因是因为我的车在半路上抛锚了。“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：三三.The reason why.The reason why 从句从句is that+is that+从句从句的原因是的原因是练习：
14、练习：2.The reason why I was late was that my car broke down on 2.The reason why I was late was that my car broke down on thetheway.way.“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：三三.The reason why.The reason why 从句从句is that+is that+从句从句的原因是的原因是练习：练习：3.3.我们（之）所以没有去，是因为我们得到通知太晚了。我们（之）所以没有去，是因为我们得到通知太晚了。“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：三三.The
15、 reason why.The reason why 从句从句is that+is that+从句从句的原因是的原因是练习：练习：3.The reason why we didnt go was that we were informed 3.The reason why we didnt go was that we were informed tootoolate.late.“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：四、四、That is the reason why.That is the reason why.那就是那就是的原因。的原因。例：例：Summer is hot.That is
16、the reason why I dont like Summer is hot.That is the reason why I dont like it.it.夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：四、四、That is the reason why.That is the reason why.那就是那就是的原因。的原因。练习：练习：1.1.冬天很冷。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。冬天很冷。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：四、四、That is the reason why.That is t
17、he reason why.那就是那就是的原因。的原因。练习：练习：1.Winter is cold.That is the reason why I dont like 1.Winter is cold.That is the reason why I dont like it.it.“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：四、四、That is the reason why.That is the reason why.那就是那就是的原因。的原因。练习：练习：2.2.这就是他这样做了的理由。这就是他这样做了的理由。“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：四、四、That is the reas
18、on why.That is the reason why.那就是那就是的原因。的原因。练习：练习：2.This is the reason why he did 2.This is the reason why he did so.so.“中考写作经典句式中考写作经典句式：四、四、That is the reason why.That is the reason why.那就是那就是的原因。的原因。练习：练习：3.3.这也就是为什么我决定与你联系。这也就是为什么我决定与你联系。“中考写作经典句式中考写作经典句式：四、四、That is the reason why.That is the r
19、eason why.那就是那就是的原因。的原因。练习：练习：3.This is the reason why I decided to contact 3.This is the reason why I decided to contact you.you.“中考写作经典句式中考写作经典句式：五、五、So+So+形容词形容词+be+be+主词主词+that+that+句子句子 如此如此以致以致于于例：例：So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.So precious is time that we cant afford to
20、waste it.时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。“中考写作经典句式中考写作经典句式：五、五、So+So+形容词形容词+be+be+主词主词+that+that+句子句子 如此如此以致于以致于例：例：1 1、西施是如此美丽，以致于我们都喜欢她。、西施是如此美丽，以致于我们都喜欢她。“中考写作经典句式中考写作经典句式：五、五、So+So+形容词形容词+be+be+主词主词+that+that+句子句子 如此如此以以致于致于例：例：1 1、So beautiful is Xi Shi that we all like her.So beautiful is Xi
21、 Shi that we all like her.“中考写作经典句式中考写作经典句式：五、五、So+So+形容词形容词+be+be+主词主词+that+that+句子句子 如此如此以致于以致于例：例：2 2、我太累了，我想马上休息。、我太累了，我想马上休息。“中考写作经典句式中考写作经典句式：五、五、So+So+形容词形容词+be+be+主词主词+that+that+句子句子 如此如此以致以致于于例：例：2 2、So tired am I that I d like to have a rest rightSo tired am I that I d like to have a rest
22、rightaway.away.“中考写作经典句式中考写作经典句式：六、六、By+V-ing,By+V-ing,can can，能够能够例：例：通过阅读，我们可以扩大视野。通过阅读，我们可以扩大视野。By reading,we can broaden our horizon.By reading,we can broaden our horizon.horizonhhorizonhraraznn.znn.地平线地平线;范围范围;界限界限;眼界眼界;“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：六、六、By+V-ing,can，能够能够例：例：练习：练习：通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。“中考写作经典句式：中考写作经典句式：六、六、By+V-ing,can，能够能够例：例：练习：练习：By taking exercise,we can always stay healthy.By taking exercise,we can always stay healthy.
