1、 By the end of this class, Ss will be able to： 1. talk about past events; 2. know how to write a trip diary. 3. know how to write a better composition (作文作文). had lunch took photos Step1 Lead in (video) Peters school trip Helens diary Jims diary Who: When: Where: How: What: Feelings: June 15th the s
2、cience museum by train learned a lot about robots; took photos; bought gifts exciting six key points(六要素) my classmates and I Step2 Reading before writing A School Trip Who Where How What (did took photos; bought gifts great Bobs trip: My school (My classmates and I) Sally: where did you . Bob: I .
3、Pair work: Who: When: Where: How: What: Feelings: June 23rd (yesterday) the zoo by bus saw animals; took photos; bought gifts great My school (My classmates and I) June 23rd Yesterday my classmates and I went to the zoo. We got there by bus. At the zoo, we saw many animals. We took some photos of th
4、em and bought some gifts in the gift shop. It was an great day. Step3 Story-telling June 23rd Yesterday I went to the zoo and saw many animals. The animals were very cute. I took some photos of them. I went to a gift shop, too. I bought many gifts. It was an exciting day. Level _ E How to get A? Ste
5、p4 Writing examples: 1. Better the words My school went to the zoo. My school the zoo. My school the zoo. 1) 2) We saw many animals. We saw animals. 3) I took some photos of them. I took photos of them. visited went on a trip to many different kinds of quite a lot of took us about half an hour to ge
6、t to the zoo. 2. short sentences long sentences We saw many animals. The animals were very cute. We saw _ animals _ cute pandas, friendly giraffes, smart elephants and so on. We went to the zoo by bus. _ , we took a bus. I bought many gifts. I bought many gifts _. The gifts were _, so I bought some
7、for my parents many different kinds of like To get there for my parents beautiful and cheap The bus ride June 23rd Yesterday I visited the zoo with my classmates. We took a bus. The bus ride took us about half an hour to get to the zoo. We saw all kinds of animals like cute pandas, friendly giraffes
8、, smart elephants and so on(等等). I like them so much and I took quite a lot of photos of them. We went to the gift shop. The gifts there were beautiful and cheap. I bought some for my parents. It was an exciting day. Level _ D June 23rd Yesterday I visited the zoo with my classmates. _, we took a bu
9、s. The bus ride took us about half an hour to get to the zoo. _, we saw all kinds of animals like cute pandas, friendly giraffes, smart elephants and so on(等等 ). I like them so much and I took quite a lot of photos of them. _, we went to the gift shop. The gifts there were beautiful and cheap, _ I b
10、ought some for my parents. _, it was an exciting day. We had great fun! 3. Use phrases to make it logical(有逻辑的) To get there At the zoo After that so All in all all in all; after that; to get there; at the zoo; so Level _ C June 23rd Yesterday I visited the zoo with my classmates. To get there, we t
11、ook a bus. The bus ride took us about half an hour to get to the zoo. At the zoo, we saw all kinds of animals like cute pandas, friendly giraffes, smart elephants and so on(等等). I like them so much and I took quite a lot of photos of them. After that, we went to the gift shop. The gifts there were b
12、eautiful and cheap, so I bought some for my parents. All in all, it was an exciting day. 4. Add a good beginning and ending I will never forget my school trip to the zoo. It was an unforgettable(难忘的) day for me. We all had great fun! Level _ A?B? 假如你叫Peter，上个星期天(5月28日)你班 组织了一次乘车去阳光农场（Sunshine Farm）
13、的郊游活动。请写一篇旅游日记。 要求：1. 包含所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2. 时态正确，用词准确，行文流畅； 3. 不少于80词。 (unforgettable, like, and, but, so, many different kinds of) Step5 Writing (实战演练实战演练): How many scores can you get? Come to show us your writing! ? Scores(分数分数)_ Write a trip diary. Go over the words. We all need to relax! Lets have more relaxing trips! F E D C B A Writing levels:
