1、满分作文怎样得 四步作文法 书信邮件类 题目要求 (2017 全国卷 ) 假定你是李华,想邀请外教 Henry 一起参观中国剪纸(pa per cutti ng) 艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括 : 1 展览时间、地点; 2 展览内容。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 解题思路 四步作文法 第一步 审题谋篇 1 体裁 邀请信 2 时态 一般现在 时和将来时 3 人称 第三人称 为主 第二步 要点要全 1 我是你的学生李华。 Im _ Li _ Hua, _ one _ of _ your _ stude n ts . 2 我写信想邀请你参观中国剪纸艺
2、术展。剪纸是中国的传统艺术形式之一,我确信你一定会喜欢剪纸。 Im writ ing to invi te _ you _ to _ visit _ th e _ paper cutt ing _ exhi bi tion . Paper cu tt in g is one of _ Chinese _ tr aditional _ a rt _ form s _ an d _ Im _ sur e _ you _ will _ lik e _ it . 3 艺术展将在下星期六上午 8 点到 11 点在当地博物馆举行。 The exhi bi tion will _ be _ hel d _
3、in _ th e _ loc al _ m useu m _ fro m _ 8 :00 _ am _ to _ 11 : 00 _ am _ next _ Satur d a y . 4 有一些著名的艺术家将当场表演如何剪纸。 There _ ar e _ s o m e _ fa m ou s _ ar tists . T hey wil l per form _ ho w _ to _ cut _ p aper _ on _ the _ spot . 5 从全国各地收集的一些漂亮的剪纸艺术画将被展出。 So m e beaut iful paper cu tting work s ,
4、which _ were _ col lected _ f rom _ al l _ over _ the _ coun try , _ will _ be _ on _ show . 6 如果你喜欢,你也能参加剪纸活动。我相信对你而言 将是一个令人难忘的经历。 If you li ke, you _ can _ al so _ jo in _ in _ paper c utt ing . Im _ sur e _ it _ will _ be _ an _ unfor get ta bl e _ exper ienc e _ for _ you . 7 盼望着收到你的来信。 Im _ loo
5、ki ng _ forward _ to _ hear ing _ fr o m _ you . 第三步 句式要美 1 句 4 合并升级为定语从句 There _ ar e _ s o m e _ fa m ou s _ ar tists _ wh o _ will _ per f orm _ ho w _ to _ cut _ pa per _ on _ the _ spot . 2 句 5 升级为过去分词作定语 So m e _ beaut iful _ paper c utt ing _ work s, _ col lected _ fro m _ al l _ over _ the _
6、 coun try , _ will _ be _ on _ show . 第四步 衔接要顺 One possi bl e ver sion : Dear Henr y , Im Li Hua, one of your stude n ts. I m writ ing to invi te you to visi t the pa per cu tting exhi bition. Paper cu tt in g is one of Chines e tr aditional a rt f orm s and Im sur e you wil l like it. The exhi bi t
7、ion will be h el d in the lo cal m useu m fro m 8 : 00 am to 1 1 : 00 a m next Satur day . There ar e som e fa mous ar ti s ts who wil l per form ho w to cut pa per on the s pot . Mea nw hil e, som e beaut iful paper cu ttin g works, col le c te d fro m a ll over th e count ry , w il l be o n show t
8、he re . If you li ke, you can al so joi n in paper cutting. I m sur e it will be an unf or get ta ble exper ie n ce for you. Im looki ng fo rwar d to he ar ing from you. Y ours , Li Hua 现场阅卷 作文升格 学生答卷 Dear He nr y , Im Li Hu a , on e of y our s tud e nts.I m wr it ing to in vite you to the pa per cu
9、tti ng e xhibit ion . Pape r c utti ng is one of c hin ese t rad it io ns a nd Im su r e you will li ke it .Th e ex hi biti on will be held in the loc al m us eum nex t sat ur day s ome fam ous chinese arti sts will perform on that day .Mea nwhile , so m e beau ti f ul pap e r cutti ng works , c ollec te d f ro m al l ov er the co untry , will be ex hib i te d there .If yo u li ke ,you can al s o join in pa pe r c utti ng . Im su re it will be an unfor getta ble e xp e rienc e for yo u.Im loo king fo rw a rd to hear i ng fro m you. Y ours , Li Hua