1、By Leager 2019.10.18Section 1一、高考英语作文分级标准一、高考英语作文分级标准1、内容全、内容全+句子正确句子正确15分；分；2、高级词汇、高级词汇+高级结构高级结构20分；分；3、具有连贯性、具有连贯性23分；分；4、书写、书写+标点标点25分分你想写一篇高分作文吗？你想写一篇高分作文吗？切记：切记：1、熟记、熟记1909个高频词汇个高频词汇2、熟练掌握句子基本结构（、熟练掌握句子基本结构（5种简单句）种简单句）3、记背一些通用句型、记背一些通用句型4、精通三大从句（状从、定从、名从）、精通三大从句（状从、定从、名从）简单句的节奏简单句的节奏主主+谓谓 12主主+
2、谓谓+宾宾 123主主+系系+表表 123主主+谓谓+宾宾+宾宾 1234+万能模板万能模板=高分作文高分作文 二、写作步骤：方法二、写作步骤：方法三步：三步：1、先改成正确的中文；、先改成正确的中文；2、再写成正确的英文；、再写成正确的英文；3、最后改成漂亮的英文。、最后改成漂亮的英文。想正确，先简单（长变短）想正确，先简单（长变短）例如：来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫例如：来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。人称李哥。Come so many students,this teacher speak real good,teacher call Leager
3、,people call Li Brother.来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。人称李哥。这么多学生来了，这老师教得真好，他的名字叫这么多学生来了，这老师教得真好，他的名字叫Leager,人们叫他李哥。人们叫他李哥。Many students have come.This teacher teaches well.His name is Leager.People call him Brother Li.先改成正确的中文先改成正确的中文再写成正确的英文再写成正确的英文再写成漂亮的英文再写成漂亮的英文 Plenty of stu
4、dents have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly.His name is Leager,therefore,he is called Brother Li.三、写作技巧三、写作技巧 1 1 升级句子升级句子1.It is universally acknowledged that 众所周知众所周知2.It goes without saying that 无须说无须说 3.As far as Im concerned,我个人认为（就我个人而言），我个人认为（就我个人而言），It is universall
5、y acknowledged that wed better study English with.It goes without saying that we should protect the environment.一）在中心句前加主句，中心句成为主语从句一）在中心句前加主句，中心句成为主语从句二）在中心句后加从句（状语、定语从句等）二）在中心句后加从句（状语、定语从句等）1.due to the reason that 因为因为2.which can 这样能这样能 It goes without saying that we should protect the environmen
6、t due to the reason that it is beneficial for us to do so.It is universally acknowledged that wed better study English with Leager,which can make our English excellent.三）用高级词汇代替初级词汇三）用高级词汇代替初级词汇扩充词数扩充词数1.be of great significance很重要很重要=very important,excellent 好极了好极了2.be supposed to/ought/Youd better
7、 应该，最好应该，最好=should do3.As far as I am concerned.我认为我认为=I think/in ones opinion4.It is beneficial for you to do 这样做有好处这样做有好处5.be crazy about/be fond of 喜欢喜欢=like/love6.spare no efforts to do 不遗余力不遗余力=try to do/try ones best to do用状语从句或定语从句合并句子用状语从句或定语从句合并句子升级句子升级句子 Many students have come.This teache
8、r teaches well.His name is Leager.People call him Brother Li.Plenty of students have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly.His name is Leager,therefore,he is called Brother Li.三、写作技巧三、写作技巧 2 2 合并句子合并句子一）万能过渡句：1.Its not only meaningful,but also entertaining.这件事不仅有意义，而且这件事不仅有意义，而且
9、有趣。有趣。2.Its just like a window opening a new world through which XXX can better understand XXX.这件事就像一扇窗户打开了一个世界，通过这个世界，这件事就像一扇窗户打开了一个世界，通过这个世界，XXX能更好地理解能更好地理解XXX.二）连贯性1.First and foremost,首先首先2.Besides,其次其次3.Last but not least,最后最后加上一些过渡句，扩充文章的内涵，增加文章的连续性 三、写作技巧三、写作技巧 3 3 过渡与连续性过渡与连续性附：写作技巧图表中心中心 句前
10、句前1.It is universally acknowledged that 众所周知众所周知It goes without saying that 无须说无须说 中心中心句后句后due to the reason that is that 因为因为which can 这样能这样能 Therefore/consequently 高级高级词汇词汇be of great significance很重要很重要=important,excellent 好极了好极了be supposed to/ought/Youd better 应该，最好应该，最好=should doAs far as I am c
11、oncerned.=I think/in ones opinion我认为我认为be crazy about/be fond of 喜欢喜欢=like/loveIt is beneficial for you to do 这样做有好处这样做有好处spare no efforts to do 不遗余力不遗余力=try to do/try ones best to do万能万能过渡过渡Its just like a window opening a new world through which XXX can better understand XXX.这件事就像一扇窗户打开这件事就像一扇窗户打开
12、了一个世界，通过这个世界，了一个世界，通过这个世界，XXX能更好地理能更好地理解解XXX.Its not only meaningful,but also entertaining.这件事不仅有这件事不仅有意义，而且有趣。意义，而且有趣。连贯性连贯性First and foremost,首先首先 Second/Besides,其次其次/Whats more,还有还有 Last but not least,最后最后高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件Section 2高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件2019年全国卷假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要
13、举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。.The Analysis of the Writing Task(写作任务分析写作任务分析)：1.type of writing(体裁体裁)：2.writer:3.background：4.writing task：5.notes：a letter of applicationLi Hua,a Chinese student The Chinese painting exhibition is looking for
14、some volunteers.Li Hua intends to be one.the purpose of writing the advantages Li Hua has what he can do if admitted 100 words add some details高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件6.the structure of a letter of application Opening lines 开场白开场白Body Paragraph主体段主体段 Closing lines 结束语结束语 P1 P2Point 1Point 2Point 3
15、 P3高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件 7.the contents of each paragraph(每段写作内容）每段写作内容）Dear Sir/Madam,P1:P3:self introduction,background,purpose of writing P2:topic sentence bodyLooking forward to receiving a reply advantages:A,B,C things you can do if admitted Yours，Li Hua高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件8.tense（时态
16、）（时态）9.person（人称）（人称）the future tense,the present tense,the first person(第一人称第一人称)，the second person(第二人称第二人称)高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件.The guidance of writing 写作指导万能自我介绍引出主题：万能自我介绍引出主题：As you know,I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in a high school,who is crazy about art .你知道的，我
17、是一个正在读高中的你知道的，我是一个正在读高中的17岁的青年，我热爱岁的青年，我热爱艺术艺术，我的名字叫李华。，我的名字叫李华。写信目的万能模板：写信目的万能模板：As a student who is crazy about art ,I am writing this letter to apply fora chance of a volunteer.作为一个热爱作为一个热爱艺术艺术的学生，我正在写信申请做志愿者的机会。的学生，我正在写信申请做志愿者的机会。protecting environment高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件万能开头句：万能开头句：There
18、are several reasons that can account for my application .有以下几个原因能说明我的有以下几个原因能说明我的申请申请。12大信件万能模板大信件万能模板信件类型信件类型V.n.辞职辞职resign/quitresignation求职求职/申请申请applyapplication请求请求askrequest道歉道歉apologizeapology感谢感谢appreciateappreciation推荐推荐recommendrecommendation投诉投诉complaincomplaint邀请邀请inviteinvitation订购订购ord
19、erorder建议建议suggestsuggestion倡议倡议advocateadvocation祝贺祝贺congratulatecongratulation高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件中间段：要点内容中间段：要点内容 （重点）（重点）First and foremost,it is universally acknowledged that art is of great significance in our life.Besides,I am crazy about art.As far as I am concerned,art is just like a
20、window opening a new world through which art can better understand art.Last but not least,I am delighted that my parents taught me art when I was a child,which was not only meaning but also entertaining.(个人优势）个人优势）结尾部分结尾部分 I believe I can be of great help to the art show/exhibition,such as cleaning
21、the floor and showing guests around.（能做的事）（能做的事）I will be grateful if you take my application seriously.Im looking forward to your reply.高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件 As you know,I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in a high school,who is crazy about art .I am writing this letter to a
22、pply fora chance of a volunteer.First and foremost,it is universally acknowledged that art is of great significance in our life.Besides,I am crazy about art.As far as I am concerned,art is just like a window opening a new world through which art can better understand art.Last but not least,I am deli
23、ghted that my parents taught me art when I was a child,which was not only meaning but also entertaining.I believe I can be of great help to the art show/exhibition,such as cleaning the floor and showing guests around.I will be grateful if you take my application seriously.Im looking forward to your
24、reply.满分作文满分作文高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件高分作文高分作文Dear Sir or Madam,As you know,I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in a high school,who is crazy about art .I am writing with purpose of being accepted as a volunteer.There are several reasons that can account for my application .First
25、 and foremost,I have a good command of English,so I can express myself fluently,which helps me communicate with the visitors efficiently.Whats more,I have learnt Chinese painting for more than ten years.If I am accepted,I can share my professional knowledge with visitors.I think I am the very person
26、 for the position.I hope you can give me a chance.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件.Summary.Tips on how to write a letter of application:1.The structure of a letter of application 高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件实战演习实战演习 假 如 你 叫 李 华，你 市 博 物 馆 正 在 招 募 兼 职 解 说 员假 如 你 叫
27、李 华，你 市 博 物 馆 正 在 招 募 兼 职 解 说 员（interpreter），在周末为外国游客进行英语解说服务。请根），在周末为外国游客进行英语解说服务。请根据下面的写作提示，用英语写一封自荐信。内容包括：据下面的写作提示，用英语写一封自荐信。内容包括：1.写信意图；写信意图；2.个人优势；个人优势；3.希望获准。希望获准。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,_ Yours，Li Hua 高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件【参考范文参考范文】Dear Sir/Mad
28、ame,I am Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School.I know from your website that the city museum needs some part-time interpreters at weekends.I am writing to recommend myself.There are several reasons that can account for my recommendation.First,I am friendly and helpful,which makes it easy for me
29、 to get along with others.Second,I speak English so fluently that I can communicate with foreign visitors without difficulty.More importantly,I have worked as a volunteer before,so I have some experience.I think I am qualified to be an interpreter.Please give me a chance.Looking forward to your earl
30、y reply.Yours,Li Hua高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件1.巧用名言，亮出论点。作者引用贴切的名言，巧妙地提出中心论点，言简意赅，简明易懂，便于读者把握主旨。2.古今对举，例证典型。为了让论点得以有力的凸显，文章采用古今中外的名人名言与事例作为论据，纵横捭阖，让人心服口服，不容置疑。3.句式多变，感情充沛。行文中，作者多处使用了设问句、反问句和感叹句，分别起到了不同的表达作用，字里行间洋溢着作者的立场、观点与情感，增强了语言的表现力与论证色彩和力度。4娜塔莎失望和狂喜都有所准备的焦急的面色，忽然明朗起来，露出了快乐、感激、小孩般的笑容。5对于自己的专业精通又专注几乎就是自己对生命最好的馈赠，因为不仅它能让自己得到更多机会，而且能为这世界创造更多价值，这或许就是生命意义所在。6小说中的娜塔莎是托尔斯泰笔下的一个经典形象，她出身于贵族家庭，是一个充满浪漫与幻想且多愁善感的女性。7.推行自主招生改革,扩大学校的招生自主权,有助于高校根据自己的办学定位、育人要求,选拔适合本校培养目标的学生。高考英语书面表达ppt课件高考英语书面表达ppt课件
