1、 Writing a letter of advice写作攻略写作攻略1 1：什么是建议信？：什么是建议信？1.建议信是写信人建议信是写信人针对某事针对某事向收信人向收信人提出提出建建议和忠告议和忠告。2.建议信有可能是建议信有可能是写给个人写给个人，就其遇到的某，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写写给某个组织和机构给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。或忠告。3.建议信要写出建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由提出建议的理由。提出的理由要。提出的理由要入情入理入情入理，语气
2、一定要语气一定要礼貌当先礼貌当先。n三段式：三段式：第一段：第一段：点明主题：点明主题：表明写作意图表明写作意图，（有时要简单介绍自己）。（有时要简单介绍自己）。第二段：第二段：陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由 第三段：第三段：总结全文，表明希望总结全文，表明希望写作攻略写作攻略2 2：建议信常用句式：建议信常用句式A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料，表明意图照应材料，表明意图)1.After I read your letter,I am sorry to know that 2.I know you have trouble inafter readi
3、ng your letter.3.You have asked me for my advice on how toand Ill try to make some suggestions.4.I am writing to express my views on/concerning1.Have you considered doing./So why not do.?2.Youd better do./It is/seems better for you to do.3.The best way to do sth is to do 4.It would be a good idea if
4、.B.建议信正文常用句式建议信正文常用句式（详述建议，合情入理）（详述建议，合情入理）C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式（归纳总结，提出希望）（归纳总结，提出希望）1.I believe you will take my advice into consideration.2.I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.3.I am looking forward to your early reply.写作攻略写作攻略3 3：建议信常用常用关联词：建议信常用常用关联词1.表示表示总结总结/归纳归纳的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短
5、语:in a/one word,all in all,on the whole,to sum up，in conclusion，in short2.表示表示递进递进/增补增补的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短语moreover;whats more;besides;in addition;whats worse;worse still;to make matters worse;3.表示表示转折转折/让步让步的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短语:4.表示表示原因原因的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短语:5.表示表示结果结果的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短语:6.表示表示条件条件的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短语:however;
6、although;even so/not;because,because of,thanks to,due to（由于）（由于）,as a result oftherefore,consequently,for this reason,as long as,on condition that.,once.7.表示表示时间时间的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短语:8.表示表示论述顺序关系论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短语:9.表示表示解释说明解释说明的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短语:10.表示表示强调事实强调事实的过渡词或短语的过渡词或短语:first,second,third,firstly,sec
7、ondly,thirdly,first of all;to begain with;to start withwhats more important;in addtionlast but not least,lastlyin the beginning，and then,after that,next,finally,in the end,in other words;that is(to say);namely;.in fact,to tell you the truth,to be honest/frank,as a matter of fact,actually1.在下面空格中填入正确
8、的连接词，使句子的衔接更加紧密 1.The boss asked him to leave._，he was fired.2.He is a great scientist._，he is good at playing the violin.3.He thought about going to Greece or Spain,but _ decided on Canada.4.I didnt go to the party with them._，I went to help an old lady with her housework.5.Some people are overambi
9、tious._，they are usually unhappy.Whats more/Besides/In additionIn other words/That is to sayfinallyInsteadTherefore/later 2.请阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空并补充横线上的内容second,as a result,despite,on(the)one hand,whats more,in a word,on the other hand As a new way of shopping,online shopping is becoming more and mo
10、re popular in our daily life._,online shopping has many advantages.First,online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things._ _ ,it is much faster for us to do shopping._ _ Third,we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time._ _,online shopping also has many disadvantages
11、.The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are._ ,we can be cheated easily._ we cannot see the things in detail._ ,_ the disadvantages of online shopping,I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.So we should develop it.On(the)one hand On(the)one hand on the othe
12、r handas a resultwhats moreIn a worddespitesecondInstead of searching a crowded store,we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like.spend a lot of time going to shops.We dont have to Dear Li Hua,Ive received your letter,saying you have some difficulties in learning English.
13、Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.My suggestions are as follows.Firstly,you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class.Secondly,the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of i
14、t.Thirdly,you can speak English with your classmates and teachers,which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.Whats more,the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Yours,xxx 3.找出文章中的模板句
15、子建议信写作模板建议信写作模板(1)Dear_,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _./Im glad to write the letter to you on _.Here are a few suggestions for your reference.First,it is important to _.As youll _.Then,it also helps if you _.Besides,it should be a good idea to _.Because_.you can also _.Im s
16、ure that_.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.yours Sincerely Dear Li Hua,Ive received your letter,saying+你碰到的问你碰到的问题题.Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.My suggestions are as follows.Firstly,_,because_.Secondly,youd better_,because_.Thirdly,youd better _.Only in this
17、 way can you _.Whats more,_.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Yours,xxx 建议信写作模板建议信写作模板(2)假设你是李华，最近收到了你的朋友假设你是李华，最近收到了你的朋友BobBob的来信，他在信的来信，他在信中说，进入高中后，不能适应高中的学习生活，学习遇中说，进入高中后，不能适应高中的学习生活，学习遇到到 障碍，因而情绪低落，甚至有了放弃学业的想法，请障碍，因而情绪低落，甚至有了放弃学业的想法，请你给他回信，内容如下：你给他回信，内容如下：1 1 向向BobBob表示问候
18、和安慰表示问候和安慰2 2 针对他的问题提出建议，要点如下：针对他的问题提出建议，要点如下：1)1)要了解高中正确的学习方法，并学会把知识转化成能要了解高中正确的学习方法，并学会把知识转化成能 力。力。2 2）上课认真听讲，遇到问题及时向老师和同学求助）上课认真听讲，遇到问题及时向老师和同学求助3 3）不要丧失信心。不要丧失信心。注意：注意：词数词数 100100左右左右 可对要点进行适当扩充可对要点进行适当扩充参考词汇：参考词汇：适应适应 adjust to(sth/doing)adjust to(sth/doing)学习方法学习方法 learning methodslearning met
19、hods课后练习课后练习Dear Bob,Im sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering senior high school.You should remember that it is very common and other students may face the same problem,so you dont have to worry too much about it.Here are some tips to help you.First of all,it is necessary to know about the
20、proper learning methods in senior high school and learn to turn knowledge into ability.Secondly,it is a good idea to listen to the teachers attentively and turn to your teachers and classmates for help when meeting with any difficulties in study.Im sure they will be willing to help you.Finally,never
21、 lose confidence.After all,confidence is the first step to success.I hope you will find my ideas helpful.yours,Li Hua(115 words)n1.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。n2.不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更
22、清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。n3.动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。n4.
23、议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。n5.记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言
24、，无法体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。n6.大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。n7.7.由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。
25、写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。n8.8.提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多。提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多。n9.9.抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。
