1、定语从句在基础写作中的运用nLead innHe,who knows nothing but pretends to know everything,is indeed a good-for-nothing.n不懂装懂不懂装懂,永世饭桶。永世饭桶。nLead innNo man or woman is worth your tears,and the one who is,wont make you cry.n没人值得你没人值得你流泪流泪，如果有，他如果有，他/她她不不会让你哭。会让你哭。n基础作文的潜规则基础作文的潜规则n fewer sentences,but more informati
2、on.n句子个数少，信息量大。句子个数少，信息量大。n写好基础作文第一神器写好基础作文第一神器nAttributive Clausesn定语从句n实战实战n一个最古老的故事一个最古老的故事n从前有座山，山上有座庙nDo you know the story?n故事精简版故事精简版n从前有座山，山上有座庙，从前有座山，山上有座庙，n庙有有俩和尚，一个大和尚，庙有有俩和尚，一个大和尚，n一个小和尚，小和尚要大和尚讲故一个小和尚，小和尚要大和尚讲故事，故事里面说事，故事里面说n生词提示n和尚和尚 monkn庙庙 templen要求要求:一个英文句子写完这个故事。一个英文句子写完这个故事。n One
3、possible versionOne possible versionnLong long ago,there was a mountain,on which stood a temple,in which lived two monks:an old one,a young one,who asked the other one to tell him a story,which goes like thisn Put it back into ChinesePut it back into ChinesenLong long ago,there was a village,in fron
4、t of which stood a big tree,in which lived two birds,the young one of whom asked the old one to teach him a song,which goes like thisn从这里，你可以体会到定语从句不愧为第一神器的称号。从这里，你可以体会到定语从句不愧为第一神器的称号。Time to have another try!【写作内容写作内容】请根据以下信息，介绍一位热门人物。请根据以下信息，介绍一位热门人物。姓姓 名：名：莫言（管谟业）莫言（管谟业）出生日期：出生日期：1955年年2月月17日日出出
5、生生 地地：山东省高密一个穷苦人家：山东省高密一个穷苦人家兴趣爱好：兴趣爱好：自幼喜欢阅读、书法自幼喜欢阅读、书法(calligraphy)性格特征：性格特征：开朗、幽默开朗、幽默教育经历：教育经历：1986年毕业于解放军艺术学院（年毕业于解放军艺术学院（PLA Academy of Arts）；1991年毕业于北京大学并获文年毕业于北京大学并获文学硕士学位（学硕士学位（Masters Degree of Arts）。）。主要成就：主要成就：2011年凭借年凭借蛙蛙获中国最高文学奖获中国最高文学奖“矛盾文学奖矛盾文学奖”；2012年获诺贝尔文学奖。年获诺贝尔文学奖。评评 价价：第一位获得诺贝尔
6、文学奖的中国作家，：第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家，被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一。被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一。1.审：时态审：时态_ 人称人称_2.抓抓：抓要点，：抓要点，定表达定表达。3.合合：整合信息，连词成句。：整合信息，连词成句。4.连：连句成篇，注意连贯。连：连句成篇，注意连贯。Basic writing一般过去时一般过去时一般现在时一般现在时第第 三三 人人 称称2.2.抓：抓要点，定表达。抓：抓要点，定表达。be born in Gaomi on February 17,1955,show great interest in,graduate from
7、,obtain a degree/receive a degree,win the award of/obtain the prize of,the first person to do，be honored as,make great contributions to,姓姓 名：名：莫言（管谟业）莫言（管谟业）出生日期：出生日期：1955年年2月月17日日出出 生生 地：地：山东省高密一个穷苦人家山东省高密一个穷苦人家兴趣爱好：兴趣爱好：自幼喜欢阅读、书法自幼喜欢阅读、书法(calligraphy)性格特征：性格特征：开朗、幽默开朗、幽默教育经历：教育经历：1986年毕业于解放军艺术学院（年
8、毕业于解放军艺术学院（PLA Academy of Arts）；1991年毕业于北京大学并获文年毕业于北京大学并获文学硕士学位（学硕士学位（Masters Degree of Arts）。主要成就：主要成就：2011年凭借年凭借蛙蛙获中国最高文学奖获中国最高文学奖 “矛盾文学奖矛盾文学奖”；2012年获诺贝尔文学奖。年获诺贝尔文学奖。评评 价：价：第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家，第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家，被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一。被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一。3.3.合：整合信息。合：整合信息。3.Mo Yan,originally named Guan
9、Moye,was born into a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955.2.Mo Yan,whose original name is Guan Moye,was born into a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955,1.Mo Yan named Guan Moye firstly and he was born into a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on Febru
10、ary 17,1955.句型多样化、高级化句型多样化、高级化1.Mo Yan has been interested in reading and calligraphy since childhood and is outgoing and humorous.2.Mo Yan,who has been interested in reading and calligraphy since his childhood,is outgoing and humorous.句型多样化、高级化句型多样化、高级化3.Not only has Mo Yan been interested in readi
11、ng and calligraphy since his childhood but he is also outgoing and humorous.2.Mo Yan,who graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986,went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five years later.1.Mo graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986 and wen
12、t to Beijing University to gain a Masters Degree of Arts in 1991.3.Having graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986,Mo Yan went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five years later.句型多样化、高级化句型多样化、高级化 Mo Yan,originally named Guan Moye,was born into
13、a poor family in Gaomi,Shandong Province on February 17,1955.Whats more,not only has he been interested in reading and calligraphy since childhood but he is also outgoing and humorous.Having graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986,Mo Yan went on further education and received a Masters Degree
14、 of Arts from Beijing University five years later.4.连：连句成篇，注意连贯。连：连句成篇，注意连贯。With a talent for literature,he won Chinas highest literary prize,Mao Dun Literature Prize by his book Frog in 2011.To all Chineses excitement,this year he became the first Chinese writer to be awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature,which will certainly make great contributions to the development of Chinese literature.4.连：连句成篇，注意连贯。连：连句成篇，注意连贯。Practice makes perfect!Thank You!
