1、应用文写作之建议信应用文写作之建议信Write a Letter of AdviceCriteria ContentOrganization Language Diction 假如你是苏州中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友Mike对汉语学习产生了兴趣，来信向你咨询。请给Mike写一封回信，内容包括：1.学习汉语的好处。2.对汉语学习的建议。3.预祝学习成功，并邀请来苏州玩。Possible Structure Dear Mike,Para1:greeting and writing purposePara2:benefitsPara3:suggestionsPara4:wishes and inv
2、itationYours,Li HuaLearning Chinese can help youI am more than delighted to hear from you.Having known that youYou can/should/had better.I hope that you can开门见山开门见山根据题设，合理构建根据题设，合理构建DiscussionA Having known that you are learning Chinese,I am writing to give you some advice on Chinese learning,which
3、hopefully could be of help.BHaving known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese,I am more than delighted and I would like to tell you something about it.What style of letter would you write?A.Informal B.FormalHaving known that you have a keen interest in learning Chinese,I am more than de
4、lighted and here I would like to share some of my thoughts with you.题目信息：你的美国朋友Mike对于汉语学习产生了兴趣，来信咨询。Background informationWriting purposeMake the purpose of your letter clear and show understandingUseful set phrases that can be used in the first paragraph:Having read your problem in I was sorry to r
5、ead about your problem I understand how you are and You have asked for some advice concerning.and I am writing to express my views.I am writing in reply toI was in the same situation you are a few years agoPara2 Benefits 学习汉语的好处学习汉语的好处What benefits can you think of?1 Chinese is one of the most impor
6、tant languages in the world.Therefore,being able to speak Chinese can help you高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信Para3Suggestions 给出建议给出建议What suggestions can you make?1.Take some Chinese courses.2.Listen to Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies.3.Read more Chinese books.4.Make a study plan and keep to it.5
7、.高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信How can you make suggestions in complete sentences?1.It would/might be a good idea if2.You can/should/had better do3.Doing something can help you4.I strongly advice you to/not to5.The best thing for you to do is6.高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信Which is better?A.It is a good ide
8、a to make more Chinese friends.B.It will be enormously helpful if you try to make more Chinese friends,with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese.高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信Which is better?A.Also,it is necessary for you to make a study plan and follow it.B.To attain a high level of fluency and ac
9、curacy in Chinese,youd better make a study plan and keep to it.高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信How can we link the suggestions together?To begin with/First and foremostIn addition/Whats more/Besides高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信Possible versionDear Mike,Having known that you have a keen interest in learning C
10、hinese,I am more than delighted and here I would like to tell you something about it.As we all know,Chinese has become one of the most important languages in the world with rapid development of China.Therefore,being able to speak Chinese can help you stand out and get ahead both in your college and
11、future career.I have some suggestions on learning Chinese to share with you.To begin with,it will be enormously helpful if you try to make more Chinese friends,with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese.Also,to attain a high level of fluency and accuracy in Chinese,youd better make a study plan
12、and keep to it.I wish you success in Chinese learning and hope you can come to Suzhou soon.I am willing to be your guide.Yours Li Hua高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信建议信的结尾建议信的结尾1.I hope these suggestions will be useful/helpful.2.I would be ready further discuss this matter.3.Please inform me when you have
13、 made a decision.高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信About writing a letter of advice建议信：根据有关问题进行分析进行分析并提出自己的看法和建议。对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务或针对某个问题提出建议。框架Beginning-开门见山 State your ideaBody -分析和建议 Analysis and adviceEnding -重申观点或表达祝愿等 Restate your opinion or express wishes高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考
14、一轮复习之应用文建议信难点：1）做出的分析入情入理。2）给出的建议角度多样化，需具备合理性和说服力。2）语言注重得体，基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信Practice假设你是苏州中学学生李华。看到校园网英文讨论区一位同学发的帖子，谈到复课复学后自己的学习情况。请你用英语给他回帖。After a super long staycation,I returned to school on May.Studying at home is not as efficient as at school.I have been feeling nerv
15、ous about the school life and the intense stress from study.I think I am totally left behind.I should have worked hard,but sometimes I just cant concentrate on what the teacher is saying in the classJohn1.表示理解并鼓励他2.给他提出相关建议建议（如保持良好心态；认真上好每一节课；向老师同学寻求帮助等）3.期待他能够取得进步。注意：1.词数80字左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。高考一
16、轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信Dear John,Its very normal that you feel stressed and nervous after such a long staycation.Li Hua高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信Dear John，Its very normal that you feel stressed and nervous after such a long staycation.I had the same feelings because many changes have been made not o
17、nly to our schedules but also to our mindset.So try to face it and keep positive.Here I want to give you some pieces of advice.First you should keep a good mood,which helps to lower your stress level.Next,take every lesson seriously.At present,learning is affected but everyone is in the same situati
18、on.Dont think too much,JUST DO IT.You should set up your daily tasks,and improve your concentration by practice.Finally,if you have any problem,turn to your friends and teachers when you get anxious.I hope itll help you and expect your improvement.Li Jin高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信高考一轮复习之应用文建议信
