1、2021届全国新高考英语复习备考书面表达之亮点词汇和并列句高中英语写作高级表达之一：亮点词汇使用高级表达 一篇高考作文往往在1分钟内就被判定。大众化的词汇、平庸的表达会使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生觉疲劳。词汇方面：如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬；句式方面：如果考生多运用一些并列句和复合句等高级句式，并注意句式的灵活多变，使文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将你的作文定位于五档线之上。写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象。如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上，能够
2、将一些常用词汇进行升华，就将成为高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。高级表达之一：不落俗套的亮点词汇使用亮点词汇的4种方法“语”众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。However,a plan isnt useful without being actually carried out.However,a plan can bear no fruit 结不出果实 without being actually carried out.(2016浙江高考书面表达范文)I finally won the first prize.I finall
3、y came out of the contest as the first prize winner.(2016浙江高考书面表达范文)更新换代，避免重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.We may have different opinions in organizing cla
4、ss activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.(2015浙江高考书面表达)Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set up a library where th
5、e old playground used to be.单词与短语巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。Quite a few things caused the traffic problem.Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic problem.(2015江苏高考书面表达)We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future.We should take pai
6、ns to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.(2015福建高考书面表达)We can look at this problem in many ways.We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有“内涵”)We all live on one and the same planet.We all share one and the same planet.(share比live on更有“味感”)用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的
7、词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中或小学阶段学过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。We brought to our classroom old clothes,pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles.We brought to our classroom wornout clothes,pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles.(2016北京高考书面表达范文)We offer hot water 24 hours every day in our hot
8、el and the swimming pool is free to use any time you want.Hot water is available 24 hours every day in our hotel and you can have free access to the swimming pool any time you want.使用亮点词汇的2点注意1注意增加亮词的“出镜率”，变消极词汇为积极词汇 阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇，写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇，也就是平常所说的“第一反应词”。积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低。现在
9、很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背到的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌生词汇。因此在备考过程中，我们要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇。很多考生作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的简单词汇，背了大量的亮词妙语而不用。这是一种懒惰的表现。建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”。例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful”，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达，如“attractive”或“charming”等。再如表达“
10、困难的”时，大家常用“difficult”，那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更与众不同呢？2注意亮点词汇使用的场合 写作时，在用词上不可随心所欲，决不能为追求“高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握的词语，也不能满篇堆积所谓的“高级”词汇，否则给人过分炫耀之嫌，得不偿失。一般来说，一篇文章能用好三五个高级词汇就可以了。另外，为能更好地“完成规定的写作任务”，减少错误，特提醒同学们在使用“高级词汇”时，一定要注意遵循“准确、恰当”的原则，并且要注意使用的场合，难词和生僻词汇并不一定就是高级词汇，例如：一大早我们买了些圣诞礼物。Early in the morning we purchas
11、ed some Christmas presents.(purchased太过于书面化，改为bought更地道)名名词词普通词汇普通词汇高级词汇高级词汇普通词汇普通词汇高级词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualsresultconsequenceeffectinfluence动动词词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withunderstandmake sense ofdeveloppromoteconsidertake into ccount高分必备的亮
12、点词汇形形容容词词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/significantinterestingabsorbing/appealingdifficultchallenging副词副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyin a flashnowadayscurrently连词连词sothereforeandas well asIn the coming three years,our school life will be difficult.In the coming
13、 three years,our school life will be challenging.(2014江西高考书面表达)在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性。用高级词汇替换下列句子中划线部分1We all have the same opportunity.2More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.3The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.4Well try our best to devel
14、op the traditional friendship between us.1We all have the same opportunity.2More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.3The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.5I can no longer bear
15、the way he speaks to us.6Would you please help me to turn down the radio？7He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.8Developing very quickly,the Internet causes the breakdown of facetoface communication.9When you are bored with the people sometimes,youd better find a quiet place,listening to s
16、ome classical music.5I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.6Would you please help me to turn down the radio？7He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.8Developing very quickly,the Internet causes the breakdown of facetoface communication.9When you are bored with the people sometimes,you
17、d better find a quiet place,listening to some classical music.10He didnt listen to what I said in the class.11Suddenly I thought of an idea that someone had broken into my house.12As soon as he arrived,he began his research.10He didnt listen to what I said in the class.11Suddenly I thought of an ide
18、a that someone had broken into my house.12As soon as he arrived,he began his research.用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文(2017厦门一中5月热身训练)假如你是中学生李明，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的故乡London，并希望了解你家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。回信必须包括以下内容：1自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；2发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；3存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；4对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。注意：1请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；2可适当
19、加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3词数100左右；书信格式已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise buildingDear Jason，_ Yours，Li Ming考生作文Dear Jason，Im _happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its e
20、conomy has been developing _during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been _,highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city._schools and hospitals are _for the native people.升级后Dear Jason，Im happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now Id like to tell y
21、ou something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been ,highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city._ _ schools and hospitals are for the native people.available a
22、n increasing number ofIt is developing into a modern and _ city._there are still some problems,such as heavy traffic in rush hours and _air pollution,which have a bad _on peoples daily life._Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically,so that we could have a better hometown in future.Yours，
23、Li MingbeautifulButeffectI thinkseriousIt is developing into a modern and _city.,there are still some problems,such as heavy traffic in rush hours and air pollution,which have a bad _on peoples daily life._,Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically,so that we could have a better hometown
24、in future.Yours，Li Mingattractive charminginfluence/impactIn my opinion/As far as Im concernedsevereHowever高中英语写作高级表达之二:并列句类型类型连词连词并列关系并列关系(递进关系递进关系)and,both.and.,not only.but also.,neither.nor.转折关系转折关系but,yet,whereas并列句是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，在这一句型中需要注意连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。高级表达之二：整齐和谐的并列句类型类型连词连词选择关系选
25、择关系or,otherwise,or else,either.or.,not.but.因果关系因果关系for,so,therefore,thus对比关系对比关系whileSince then,maths has become one of my favorite subjects,and I have also made rapid progress in maths.(2015湖南高考书面表达)从那时起，数学就成为我特别喜爱的学科之一，而且我在数学上进步也很快。Everyone in our society should help those in need,but it is more i
26、mportant to be sincere and earnest.(2016江苏高考书面表达范文)社会上的每一个人都应该帮助有困难的人，但是真诚、认真更为重要。It is beneficial to some people,while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.(2016江苏高考书面表达范文)这对于一些人来说是有益的，然而却使其他人陷入两难的境地，他们不知道是该投票还是不该投票。用适当的并列连词填空1(2015福建高考满分作文)Some choose to avoid them others deci
27、de to deal with them.2(2016江苏高考书面表达范文)Online voting becomes increasingly popular,many competitions get people involved in it.3It must have rained last night,it is wet all over.并列句的常用句型1both.and.既又When exposed to stress,in whatever form,all of us react both mentally and physically.当面临压力时，不管以什么形式，我们所有
28、的人都会从精神和身体上作出反应。2either.or.或者或者；不是就是People can either give them as gifts or hang them in their houses.(2013全国卷书面表达)人们可以把它们当做礼物送出去，或者挂在自己的房间里。3neither.nor.既不也不In autumn,its neither too hot nor too cold.秋天，天气既不太热也不太冷。4not only.but(also).不仅而且Besides,it can not only benefit our health but also shape our
29、 character.除此以外，它不仅有益于健康而且还有助于塑造我们的性格。5not.but.不是，而是It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most.对我们的工作最有益的，不是我们做了多少，而是我们把多少爱投入进去。6.while/whereas 而，却Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.(2015浙江高考书面
30、表达)我的大部分同学都想去公园，而我想去一个更好的地方。7祈使句/名词词组and/or/otherwise陈述句(1)祈使句and陈述句(祈使句相当于一个条件状语从句，and后面的句子相当于一个表示结果的主句)Work hard and you will succeed.(If you work hard,you will succeed.)努力学习，你就会成功。(2)名词词组and陈述句(名词词组相当于一个条件状语从句，其中常含有more,another等词)Another try,and youll achieve a success.再试一次，你就会取得成功。(3)祈使句or/other
31、wise陈述句Hurry up,otherwise youll be late.快点，否则你会迟到。(4)名词词组or/otherwise陈述句More care,otherwise the dog will die soon.给予更多关照，不然这条狗很快就会死掉。8when.这时(1)sb.was doing sth.when.某人正在做某事，这时I was listening to music when a car hit me and I fell down.(2017绍兴模拟书面表达)我正在听音乐，这时突然一辆车把我撞倒了。(2)sb.was about to do sth.when
32、某人正要做,这时.I was about to telephone you when your email arrived.我正要准备给你打电话，这时你的电子邮件来了。(3)sb.had just done sth.when.某人刚做完某事，这时I had just finished sweeping the floor when the telephone rang.我刚刚拖完地，这时电话铃响了。用并列句补全句子1.(2016全国卷书面表达)但是这是我第一次写申请书和个人简历，所以我不知道有哪些问题要注意。But this is the first time that I have writ
33、ten an application and the personal resume,I dont know if there are something to pay attention to.2正像我们所知道的，生气不仅有害健康，而且还严重影响人们之间的关系。As we know,getting angry does harm to ones health has a bad effect on the relationship between people.3是你所说的话而不是你所做的事使你的同学感到生气。It is what you had said that annoyed your
34、 classmates.用适当的并列连词填空1Stand over there youll be able to see the oil painting better.2Start out right away,youll miss the first train.3I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practicing it,I failed to pass the midterm examination.4About 9:00 last night,I was busy preparing for my T
35、omorrows test_suddenly loud noises came into my room.5Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,48%of the boys favor sports stars.用并列句补全句子1(2014江西高考满分作文)首先，作为一名学生，最重要的是学习，因此你们所有人都有必要在学习中建立一个有效的方式。Firstly,as a student,the most important thing is to study,_ _ for all of you to build an
36、 effective method in your study.2我们正打算动身，突然天下起雨来了。We it suddenly began to rain.3找方法经常表扬你的孩子，你就会发现他们会向你敞开心扉。_,and youll find they will open their hearts to you.4(2013江西高考满分作文)它不仅给了我们接近大自然的机会，而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。It ,but also gave us relaxation from our study.5(2013重庆高考满分作文)因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常
37、与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。So,from now on,lets _ have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while.not waste our time on unimportant things but请按以下内容要点写一封电子邮件，尽可能多地使用并列句。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。现在请根据以下要点给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件：1未及时回复的原因；2你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。Dear Tom，How is
38、 everything going?I feel terribly sorry for Ive missed answering your letter in time.You know,Ive been preparing for the final exams these days,so I forgot to write back.In your letter,you asked me for my plans on summer vacation.Now,I am writing to tell you some specific details.Overall,three thing
39、s will make my summer vacation meaningful.To start with,doing a parttime job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman.Not only can I earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons.In addition,it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vaca
40、tion,in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends.What is more,doing voluntary work,I think,will help me make a great contribution to the society,and enrich my life.I sincerely apologize again for my delay in answering your email.By the way,whats your plan to spend your summer vacation?I am looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua
