1、 高三年级英语学科2020朝阳一模应用文讲评CONTENTSCONTENTS目目 录录1评标解读2审题构思3写作对策4语言支撑（补充）评标解读评标解读01应用文：应用文：内容内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确第一档13分-15分完全完成了试题规定的任务。内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。北京高考应用文评分北京高考应用文评分标准标准情景作文：内容完整、上下文连贯、词汇句式多样、语言准确情景作文：内容完整、上下文连贯、词汇句式多样、语言准确共四档，先定档后微调，词数不少于共四档，先定
2、档后微调，词数不少于5050writer写信人写信人addressee收信人收信人message如何做到交际得体？如何做到交际得体？简洁简洁 concise 精准精准 to the point 总分总分 topic Sentence+supporting details1.接收了多少信息？接收了多少信息？2.接收信息时的感受？接收信息时的感受？文字文字单线条传输单线条传输线团缠绕线团缠绕说话说话逻辑逻辑简洁简洁精精准准先先总后总后分分先主先主后次后次writer写信人写信人addressee收信人收信人message如何做到交际得体？如何做到交际得体？语用学语用学 Pragmatics DPR
3、 亲疏远近、权利大小、不便程度亲疏远近、权利大小、不便程度 DPR（Distance,Power,Ranking of Imposition）换位思考换位思考 put yourself into his shoes 弱化不便弱化不便 lower the ranking of imposition1.接收了多少信息？接收了多少信息？2.接收信息时的感受？接收信息时的感受？目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确基调：清爽、舒服基调：清爽、舒服 精准简洁、先总后分、弱化不便精准简洁、先总后分、弱化不便 审题构思审题构思0220202020朝阳一模应用
4、文朝阳一模应用文 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友 Jim 对中国文化十分感兴趣,你在英文报纸 China Daily 上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(The China Daily Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：1.介绍稿件要求；2.告知投稿时间和方式；3.询问对方意向。20202020朝阳一模应用文：审题朝阳一模应用文：审题 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友美国笔友 Jim 对对中国文化十分感兴趣中国文化十分感兴趣,你在英文你在
5、英文报纸报纸 China Daily 上看到上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛中华文化表情包设计大赛(The China Daily Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：1.介绍稿件要求；2.告知投稿时间和方式；3.询问对方意向。写作背景写作对象写作目的详略略 应用文：3-5段为宜 寒暄+要点段+尾段，要点3常和尾段结合 可一点一段，但不建议行数差过大(3)可合为一段，但标志词需简洁抓人2020朝阳一模应用文：构思我笔友Jim邀
6、请 invite中华文化中华文化表情包表情包设计设计大赛大赛内容：含有中国文化元素内容：含有中国文化元素功能：模拟表情、表达心情功能：模拟表情、表达心情格式：格式：线上线上使用使用jpg/png/gif/jpge兴趣兴趣特长特长收获收获有意愿能做好有好处锁定对象、建立勾连、拆解关键词内涵：设计理念内涵：设计理念外形：吸引人、可爱外形：吸引人、可爱投其所好、赞美对方、描述益处投其所好、赞美对方、描述益处写作对策写作对策03目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确 内容完整内容完整翻译二字是精髓翻译二字是精髓 应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；你是谁写给
7、谁，写信目的见动词。条理清晰条理清晰先总后分顺序写先总后分顺序写 事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。交际得体交际得体换位思考若不便换位思考若不便 首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连锁定对象巧勾连。应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。I have some good news for you.An emoji design contest of Chinese cultural symbols held by the China Daily is now calling for entries w
8、orldwide.Given your keen interest in Chinese culture,Im writing to invite you to participate in it/have a try.【2020朝阳一模应用文】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友美国笔友 Jim 对中国文化十分感兴趣,你在英文报纸 China Daily 上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(The China Daily Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请邀请他参加投稿，内
9、容包括：1.介绍稿件要求；2.告知投稿时间和方式；3.询问对方意向。BackgroundGreetings Purpose内容完整内容完整9类信件对应目的动词 推荐/建议信：recommend sth.to sb.=make a recommendation of sth.suggest/recommend sb.(should)do sth./suggest doing sth.provide you with some suggestions/a piece of advice U 邀请信：invite sb.to do sth.咨询信：inquire sth.=ask for infor
10、mation about 申请信：apply for sth.=make an application for sth.介绍信：introduce sth.to sb.=make an introduction to sth.祝贺信：congratulate sb.on sth.感谢信：thank sb.for sth./doing sth.express my gratitude U(to you)for sth.道歉信：apologize(to sb.)for sth.=make an apology for sth.投诉信：complain about sth.=make a compl
11、aint about sth.难词的翻译难词的翻译 泛化、回归本质泛化、回归本质 I have some good news for you.An emoji design contest of Chinese cultural symbols held by the China Daily is now calling for entries worldwide.Given your keen interest in Chinese culture,Im writing to invite you to participate in it/have a try.【2020朝阳一模应用文】假设
12、你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友美国笔友 Jim 对中国文化十分感兴趣,你在英文报纸 China Daily 上看到“中华文化表情包设计大赛(The China Daily Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols)征集来自世界各地参赛作品的活动，请给他写一封邮件，邀请邀请他参加投稿，内容包括：1.介绍稿件要求；2.告知投稿时间和方式；3.询问对方意向。BackgroundGreetings Purpose征集/招募 look for/search for/call for/seek We are searching for vol
13、unteers,who are willing to help us on the 7th German Chamber Soccer Cup 2019 in Tianjin.We are seeking entries worldwide/from all over the world.recruit v./n.We are recruiting new members to our club.We are seeking new recruits.New recruits are wanted/needed.1.The requirements for the works/entries/
14、submissions are as follows.2.As for/Regarding/Concerning/When it comes to the requirements,Chinese cultural symbols should be included in your submitted works.3.You are required/expected/supposed to give your work a name and explain designing ideas and its culture meanings.4.Aiming to spread Chinese
15、 culture in a(n)vivid/innovative way,the competition requires participants to perfectly blend/incorporate Chinese cultural elements into charming emojis that can express peoples feelings in online communication.5.The emojis should be centered around the subject of Chinese culture,presenting classic
16、or popular cultural images in the form of emojis.要点一：介绍稿件要求要点一：介绍稿件要求 Topic Sentence目的目的内容内容功能功能外形外形词性转换词性转换应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。内容完整内容完整 The requirements for your works are threefold.The requirements for your works are as follows.For one thing,First,For another,Second,Still another,Third,B
17、esides/Apart from that/On top of that,First and foremost,Apart from that,Last but not least,In addition,(常放最后一条，表补充添加)Link事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。横向展开纵深入。条理清晰条理清晰事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。横向展开纵深入。条理清晰条理清晰【2020朝阳标范】I am writing to tell you about T
18、he China Daily Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols organized by China Daily.I know youre keen on traditional Chinese culture,so why not have a try?You may choose any symbol that best represents Chinese culture in your eyes,such as the panda,kung fu,the Great Wall and so on.There is no l
19、imit on the style,but be sure to give your work a name and explain designing ideas and its culture meanings.Your work should be submitted online with required personal information by the end of September.All winning designs will be shared and promoted on the China Daily app,and winning designers wil
20、l receive prizes!Are you interested?If you need any help,I would be very glad to help.Let your creative juices flow!抽象抽象具象具象事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再细节，横向展开纵深入。横向展开纵深入。条理清晰条理清晰时空延展时空延展形式形式内涵内涵详写的要点详写的要点横向展开横向展开2-3条条【2020朝阳标范】I am writing to tell you about The China Daily Emoji Design
21、 Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols organized by China Daily.I know youre keen on traditional Chinese culture,so why not have a try?You may choose any symbol that best represents Chinese culture in your eyes,such as the panda,kung fu,the Great Wall and so on.There is no limit on the style,but be su
22、re to give your work a name and explain designing ideas and its culture meanings.Your work should be submitted online with required personal information by the end of September.All winning designs will be shared and promoted on the China Daily app,and winning designers will receive prizes!Are you in
23、terested?If you need any help,I would be very glad to help.Let your creative juices flow!首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连。交际得体交际得体【2020朝阳标范】I am writing to tell you about The China Daily Emoji Design Contest of Chinese Cultural Symbols organized by China Daily.I know youre
24、 keen on traditional Chinese culture,so why not have a try?You may choose any symbol that best represents Chinese culture in your eyes,such as the panda,kung fu,the Great Wall and so on.There is no limit on the style,but be sure to give your work a name and explain designing ideas and its culture me
25、anings.Your work should be submitted online with required personal information by the end of September.All winning designs will be shared and promoted on the China Daily app,and winning designers will receive prizes!Are you interested?If you need any help,I would be very glad to help.Let your creati
26、ve juices flow!基调：清爽、舒服基调：清爽、舒服 精准简洁、先总后分、弱化不便精准简洁、先总后分、弱化不便 目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确目标：内容完整、条理清晰、交际得体、语言准确 应用文重审题，翻译二字是精髓；我是谁写给谁，写信目的见动词。事实简内涵多，顺序陈述控比例；先要点再先要点再细节细节，横向展开纵深入。首尾分靠交际，换位思考弱不便换位思考弱不便；中段分拼内容，锁定对象巧勾连锁定对象巧勾连。Pragmatics:DPR（Distance亲疏远近亲疏远近,Power权利大小权利大小,Ranking of Imposition不便程度）不便程度）清爽、舒服清爽
27、、舒服 感谢聆听！感谢聆听！本视频课程中的部分图片、视频引自有关图书、网络，特向这些图片、视频的制作者和有关图书的出版者和相关网络表示感谢；因多种原因，事先未与作者和出版社取得联系，特向他们表示歉意。语言支撑（补充）语言支撑（补充）041.Works should be submitted online.2.A maximum of three works can be submitted by each applicant.Only one prize will be awarded to participant even if more than one work by the same
28、designer is selected.3.Submitted works must be a group,with 8 to 16 emojis in each group.4.Formats:jpg/png/gif/jpge.Size:240 x240px.Each picture should not exceed 100k,and the size of each group should not exceed 1.6M.5.Work title,designing ideas and cultural meanings/connotations should be submitte
29、d as required.要点1.介绍稿件要求 细节补充中华文化中华文化表情包表情包设计设计大赛大赛内容：含有中国文化元素内容：含有中国文化元素功能：模拟表情、表达心情功能：模拟表情、表达心情格式：线上使用格式：线上使用jpg/png/gif/jpge内涵：设计理念内涵：设计理念外形：吸引人、可爱外形：吸引人、可爱补充：活动补充：活动宗旨宗旨 This design contest aims to spread Chinese culture in a(n)vivid/innovative way.This competition is aimed at putting Chinese cu
30、ltural symbols into everyday use.With the aim/purpose/objective of igniting peoples passion for Chinese culture,this contest is tailor-made for design enthusiasts like you.This contest serves the purpose of bridging the gap between traditional Chinese culture and advanced technology.Aiming to spread
31、 Chinese culture in a(n)vivid/innovative way,the competition requires participants to perfectly blend/incorporate Chinese cultural elements into charming emojis that can express peoples feelings in online communication.1.Your work should be submitted online with required personal information by the
32、end of September.All winning designs will be shared and promoted on the China Daily app,and winning designers will receive prizes!2.The deadline for submission is 1st July.3.Dont forget to upload your entries onto the homepage of China Daily before 1st July.4.The submission of your works will end/wi
33、ll be due on 1sth.July.5.You are expected to submit your works before 1st July.6.You can send your designs to .7.Works should be submitted online.Visit and you will find the entry for“Submission of Work”to upload your designs.要点2.说明截止时间和提交方式赏析要点1：介绍活动要求 As for the requirements,you are expected to ch
34、oose a particular feature that could unveil the beauty of Chinese culture,ranging from traditional architecture like Suzhou gardens to intangible cultural heritage like martial arts,behind which lie Chinese spirits.Besides,you are supposed to enclose a piece of note explaining your design ideas and
35、the works cultural meanings/connotations.(Class 3 周文心)Here are some requirements for the design.Firstly,as the title of the competition suggests,the emojis submitted must contain elements in Chinese culture,whether it is a historic figure you like,traditional components such as Chinese knots,or magn
36、ificent architecture like the Great Wall.Furthermore,it will be highly expected if your design carries rich meanings in an eye-catching and up-to-trend manner.With your creativity and enthusiasm about Chinese culture,Im sure you can come up with the most innovative and elaborate design!(Class 1 吴依涵)
