1、读后续写练习写作：A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicke
2、n porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of
3、water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started
4、 frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The
5、next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he
6、gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Paragraph 2:
7、 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.考场优秀文展示1.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Knowing the situation, dad comforted the two immediately and asked, “Why not make your division of work clear?” Dads words were like a hammer blow, re
8、minding them what contributed to their former failure. It was their hurry and confusion that messed everything in the kitchen up. Having tidied up the stove, they assigned the tasks at a great lickJeff stared at the pot attentively; Jenna had another two slices of toast fried. Thankfully, at this ti
9、me, they finished their cooking smoothly with dads patient guidance.When Jeff put shredded chicken onto the porridge and Jenna laid the toast on the place, they smiled into each others eyes.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. With great bleary eyes, mom was surprised t
10、o find that her two children had prepared breakfast for her, not very delicious as it seemed. But her kids expectant faces seemingly added flavor to this breakfast as she had a taste of it. “Not bad.” She thought in mind, after a sip of the porridge. Finishing the breakfast, she expressed gratitude
11、to her twins, moved and touched. They were also excited with their moms praise. They thought there was nothing to it when it came to making breakfast, but from the experience, they finally knew how laborious their mother was at ordinary times. Since then, the whole family became tightened and cheris
12、hed each other all the more.2.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Glancing at the disordered kitchen, he grinned with joy. “Are you making breakfast for you mother, kids?” The twins nodded, “But all of our efforts were in vain.” Jenna sighed in frustration. “Don
13、t worry. You still have ample time.” The father said encouragingly. Under the instruction of the father, Jeff adjusted the fire carefully and put the porridge pot onto it. Next Jenna cut off another two slices of bread, immersing it into the egg mixture. While Jeff watching the stove carefully, Jenn
14、a fried bread to an appropriate color, which is so tempting. Finally, they put some chicken into the porridge and the breakfast was done.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Upon opening eyes, what greeted her instantly was a plate of hot and tasty breakfast. “Happy Mot
15、hers Day!” exclaimed the kids excitedly. “Thank you. Its really a big surprise!” said mom, as if choked to tears. With the company of the two kids, mom devoured the breakfast quickly. The fried French toast was soft and thick, while chicken porridge was warm and juicy. Hugging Jenna and Jeff tightly
16、, mom smiled, “This is the best Mothers Day”. With a heart filled with love, you are bound to give your beloved mother an unforgettable Mothers Day surprise, no matter how arduous it might be.3.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Shocked by this terrible scene,
17、father widened his eyes and asked in disbelief, “What on earth are you doing?” Jenna stuttered with timid voice, “We just want to give mom a surprise, but we mess it up.” Dad checked Jeffs hand first and let out a sigh of relief. “Ill help.” Dad said, stroking Jennas head affection ally. The twins s
18、prang to their feet and restarted all over again merrily. Under the dads guidance, they successfully prepared French toast and chicken porridge.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Rubbing her eyes unconsciously, their mother was a little bit confused to be awaken. Then
19、 the fragrance of the delicate breakfast floated into her nose. “Happy Mothers Day. We love you forever!” The twins handed mom the plate with radiant smile. The moist red eye indicated mothers happiness and pride. Seeing the splendid surprise and enjoying the delicious breakfast, four of the family
20、eventually understood the meaning of family-everyone cherishes others devotion and is willing to show gratitude and pay back unconditionally.4.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Their father seemed to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next. He
21、grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of butter to melt before putting another slice of cup. Then he swiftly removed the burnt porridge away, and poured another cup of rice, starting to cook it all over again. In between, he kept silent and focused on what he was doing. The twins stood str
22、aight and awe, watching the hustle and bustle from their father. At 7 oclock, everything was done and perfect. The twins took over the tray, feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing the house chores.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother
23、up. They presented the well-cooked breakfast in front of Mother. Their mother beamed from ear to ear, praising and appreciating childrens nice act of gesture. However, the twins lowered their heads, shoulders drooping down. It didnt turn out as they had planned. Finally, Jenna broke out the silence,
24、 confessing“Mother, we have taken it for granted for so long that the breakfast that you make for us every morning is a super easy job.”Jeff cut in“But it wasnt.”Jenna continued“On this Mothers day, we would like to thank you for your dedication and care for us.”“And from tomorrow, we will learn to
25、make our own breakfast in order to take back our responsibility from you.”Mothers eyes were welled up with tears and nodded.5.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the mess, their father froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. But soon he realized the
26、ir intention. In consequence, he joined the twins in preparing the Mothers Day surprise. Though he had never been seen cooking, actually, he was expert in doing so. The twins assisted their father with the breakfast with great curiosity, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. Eventually
27、, they could smell how good the dishes were.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They said“Happy Mothers Day”, with their eyes twinkling with excitement. Their father laughed heartily and told her the twins had prepared breakfast for her. Then the twins whispered to her
28、 that they loved her so much and they were eager to see her smile every day. Hearing the words, so glad was she that her face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. At that moment, they all sensed how beautiful something living could be. What a sweet surprise!6.As the twins looked around them
29、in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the black bread and the spilled porridge, Dad suddenly figured out their secret. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. Without a second thought, Dad offered to help. A ripple of excitement ran through them. They helped clean the kitchen wh
30、ile their father cooked a sandwich and some porridge skillfully. Soon, the delicious smell of breakfast filled the kitchen. Dad hinted to show that it was a secret and went back to the bedroom, asking the twins to go on to carry out their great plan.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke
31、their mother up. They yelled“Happy Mothers Day, darling Mummy! A big surprise for you!”When she saw the breakfast, her eyes widened up and twinkled with excitement. Dad was pretending to be surprised to see such delicious food. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted and praised th
32、at it was the best breakfast she had ever had. The twins smiled to their father secretly. A feeling of love filled the whole room. What a beautiful surprise!7.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.One look andhe knew what they were up to. Seeing their gloomy faces,
33、 he advised them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins immediately cheered up and did as told. Within half an hour, the kitchen was as clean as a new pin, and at the same time, Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneak
34、ed back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, adding a delicate card they had made, and then carried the tray upstairs to their parentsbedroom.The twins carried the breakfast and woke their mother up.They hugged her and yelled“Happy Mothers Day! Room service!”Mother hugged back the twins, s
35、leepy-eyed. An inviting smell of breakfast hanging in the air, Mothers eyes automatically rested on the breakfast tray. So sweet was the surprise that she excitedly shook Father, who was pretending to snore? He feigned astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and exclaimed
36、it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff instantly begged to have a bite. Jenna exchanged a glance with Fatherand they winked at each other secretly.8.As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their fatherappeared.Secure in the knowledge that no blister was developing on Jeffs hand, father
37、took command of the kitchen. Sweepingthe stove clean, he grabbed a handful of rice into the pot and left it tosimmer.Father then dippedtwo slices of fresh bread into the egg mixture, slipped them onto the pan and constantly flipped them until both sides were golden brown.As father was dancing around
38、 in the kitchen, Jenna and Jeff stoodbeside in awe, their eyes roundin admiration. It was merely twenty minutes later that everything was set on a tray. Winking at the twins, father sank his voice to a whisper, take it to your mother!The twins carried the breakfastupstairs and woke their mother up.R
39、ubbing her bleary eyes and sitting up, mother was greeted bya bowl of steaming porridge, two pieces of crunchy bread and some fruits, all neatly arranged on a tray.Happy Mothers Day! the twins presented the tray to their mother, a touch of shame etched on their smiling faces, we never knew how hard
40、it was for you to prepare meals for us every day. Thank you mum, for what you have done for us!Hands tightly pressed on the chest, mum could hardly utter a complete sentence, her face streaked with tears of genuine happiness. It was truly the most delightful Mothers Day surprise.9.As the twins looke
41、d around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Their fathers jaw dropped in amazementwhen he saw everything before him. Jenna explained to their father their plan for Mothers Day and the accident that had just happened.Having handled Jeffs injury, theirfather told him to rest for a while in
42、the living room while Jenna continued to stay in the kitchen to help.They cleaned the messystove, andafter about an hour, the golden toast and the thick porridge were made.At that moment, broad smiles spread across their faces.(87words)The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother u
43、p.“Mom, happy Mothers Day!”they said with one voice. The mother looked at the sweet-smellingbreakfast- the French toast and the chicken porridge, saying,“My God, you are so great!”Her voice shook with emotion, awave of happiness floodingher.She suddenly felt her childrenhad grown up!Seeing joy and p
44、rideon theirmothersface, Jennaand Jeffcouldnt hide their excitement.The Mothers Day program also made them aware of the value of labor.(82 words) 169 words10.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. They pretended to be poised,trying to blockthe messy scene from his
45、fathers sight.However, the odor of burning betrayed them.Questioned byhis father, Jeff narrated the whole story,twiddling with his fingersnervously.“Oh, man. You guys are so sweet. Now lets get mom a surprise!”their father said in a soothing manner,his previous anger giving place to ecstasy.Without
46、hesitation, their father guided them to prepare for the festive feast.Not long after that, an inviting cuisine was ready.Thentheir father retired into the bedroom.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.“Happy Mothers Day!”the twins exclaimed together. Their mother got out
47、of the bed,hardly able tobelieve the gift before her. She felt a warm upsurge in her heart,tears streaming down her cheeks.Stretching outher arms, she lapped them in her arms.“Thank you, sweethearts. It is thebest meal Ive ever had,”she saidaftersavoring the sandwich.At that moment, proud and overjo
48、yed, Jeff and Jenna stealthily winked at their father standing beside them.Actually, not onlyis the meal a surprisebuta secret bonding the father with his twins.11.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Catching sight of their father, Jennas gloomy face turned into
49、big smile while Jeff was trying hard to fight back tears. Confused about what had happened, the father darted to check Jeffs hand and at the same time listened to Jennas explanation carefully. An expression of intense joy illuminating the fathers eyes after getting to know the lovely heart of his twins, he patiently guided them to make attem
