1、Revision for Writing practiceRevision for Writing practice Learning objectivesHow to use five steps of writing?We should graspWe should knowHow to correct and comment the passage?How to write a good composition?Lets see the writing standard for Chongqing High school entrance examination第四档第四档(优优13-1
2、5)完全完成了完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容 要点。要点。准确准确使用使用丰富的丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，使用了语句间的连接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具符合英语交际习惯；具 备较强的语言运用能力。备较强的语言运用能力。第三档第三档(良良 9-12分分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内 容要点。容要点。恰当恰当使用使用较丰富的较丰富的词汇和语言结构。词汇和语言结构。适当适当运用了运用了 语句间的连接成份，语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。较
3、好地达到了交际的目的。第二档第二档(中中 5-8分分)基本完成了基本完成了试题规定的任务。试题规定的任务。没能覆盖所有没能覆盖所有 内容要点内容要点。词汇和语言结构。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足不能完全满足写作任务的写作任务的要求要求。文章文章不够连贯不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。，影响对写作内容的理解。第一档第一档(差差 0-4分分)未完成未完成试题规定的任务。试题规定的任务。漏掉较多内容要点漏掉较多内容要点 或或写的内容与规定任务无关写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构。词汇和语言结构错误较多错误较多。内容不连贯，内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息无法传达有效信息。Review five st
4、eps of writing(写作五步骤）写作五步骤）1.Cross-question(审题审题)Style Verb tense Person Main idea 2.Seize the main points(抓要点抓要点)figure out the outline(拟提纲拟提纲)passage4.Ensure the fluency and beautify(添加过渡，确保连贯。美化文章，漂亮地道）添加过渡，确保连贯。美化文章，漂亮地道）Conjunctions/conjunctive adverbspassage5.Error correcting (查错改错查错改错)3.Sente
5、nces connection(连句成文连句成文)words/phrases sentencesStep 1 Cross-question(审题审题)1.Style(体裁体裁)2.Verb tense(时态时态)3.Person(人称人称)4.Main idea(主题主题)lettersimple present tensefirst personask for joining summer camp 假如你是张红，你想参加学校组织的假如你是张红，你想参加学校组织的走进美国家庭走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，请你用英语写一份申请。申请的开头和结尾夏令营活动，请你用英语写一份申请。申请的开头和结尾已给
6、出。内容应包括：已给出。内容应包括：1你参加这次活动的目的；你参加这次活动的目的；2你的兴趣、特长；你的兴趣、特长；3你希望住在什么样的美国家庭，为什么你希望住在什么样的美国家庭，为什么?要求：要求：1词数：词数：80词左右；词左右；2文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。提示词语：夏令营提示词语：夏令营summer campDear Sir/Madam,_ Yours,Zhang Hong重庆中考重庆中考2006 假如你是张红，你想参加学校组织的假如你是张红，你想参加学校组织的走进美国家庭走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，请你用英语写一份申请。申请的开头和结尾夏
7、令营活动，请你用英语写一份申请。申请的开头和结尾已给出。内容应包括：已给出。内容应包括：1你参加这次活动的目的；你参加这次活动的目的；2你的兴趣、特长；你的兴趣、特长；3你希望住在什么样的美国家庭，为什么你希望住在什么样的美国家庭，为什么?要求：要求：1词数：词数：80词左右；词左右；2文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。提示词语：夏令营提示词语：夏令营summer campStep 2 Size the main points(抓要点抓要点)Figure out the outline(拟提纲拟提纲)How many main points?Three
8、.Whatre they?1.你参加这次活动的目的你参加这次活动的目的2.你的兴趣、特长你的兴趣、特长3你希望住在什么样的美国家庭，为什么你希望住在什么样的美国家庭，为什么?Task-find out useful words and phrases for each point.Point 1-Why to join the summer camp?Eg:improve English Point 2-Whatre your interests and hobbies?Point 3-What kind of family to choose to live?Why?Discuss in g
9、roups,Groups 1-3 for point 1;Groups 4-6 for point 2;Groups 7-9 for point 3.Then come to the Bb to have a competition.Write down your discussion quickly,each group just write one expression each time.When the other two finish,the first group come to write again.Point 1:improve English/learn more abou
10、t culture/make friends/visit/places of interest/broaden ones horizon/taste different foodPoint 3 family:funny/with more children /have big garden/have a dog why:outgoing/play with children,not feel lonely/like plants/like petsPoint 2:like playing the piano/like doing sports/like surfing the Internet
11、/be good at swimming/favorite Step 2 Form the outline in detailYou think of so many expressions,but you neednt use them all.Just choose 2 or 3 for each point to form an outline in detail.(从列举的表述中选择从列举的表述中选择2-3个，形成文章的详个，形成文章的详细提纲。细提纲。)Heres an example:.why to join the summer camp 1.improve my English
12、 2.3.Whatre your interests and hobbies?1.listen to music 2.3.What kind of family to choose to live?Why?1.family:funny 2.why:outgoing Example Step 4 Ensure the fluency (添加过渡，确保连贯添加过渡，确保连贯)1.表递进表递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容 Whats more;besides,also,as well2.转折关系转折关系：but,however,yet,instead,while on the othe
13、r hand3.因果关系因果关系:since,as,because (of),so,therefore4.条件关系条件关系 if,unless5.时间关系时间关系 when,while,after,before,until,as soon as,later,soon,lately,recently,since,from then on6.顺序关系顺序关系 first of all,secondly,then,next,finally,in the end7.换种方法表述换种方法表述 in other words,that is to say8.举例说明举例说明 for instance,for
14、 example,like,such as9.陈述事实陈述事实 in fact,actually,to tell you the truth10.进行总结进行总结 in short;all in all,in general,in a word Write your own article in 8 minutes If all the members in your group have finished writing,put up your hand,the first group is winner.Dear Sir/Madam,I want to.Thank you.Yours,Zh
15、ang Hong 反复检查，仔细核对。反复检查，仔细核对。要点是否齐全？要点是否齐全？语法是否有误？语法是否有误？格式是否规范？格式是否规范？单词是否拼错？单词是否拼错？大小写是否正确？大小写是否正确？标点是否得当？标点是否得当？When correct,pay attention to:Cap 大写字母大写字母 capital letterSp 拼写拼写 spellingSV 主谓一致主谓一致 subject-verb agreementStr 句子结构句子结构sentence structureVT 动词时态动词时态 verb tenseP 标点标点 punctuationA 冠词冠词 a
16、rticleWW 错词错词 wrong wordNum 数数(=单数单数/复数复数)number(=singular/plural)缺成分缺成分1.Correct and comment the writing in groups according to the standard of Chongqing entrance exam for high school.(小组内交换修改小组内交换修改,根据评分标准根据评分标准给出分数给出分数)2.Show time.Choose some articles to comment together in class.书面表达有技巧，五个步骤别忘了。
17、书面表达有技巧，五个步骤别忘了。下笔之前先审题，一审体裁与结构，下笔之前先审题，一审体裁与结构，二审人称和时态。分析要点须全面，二审人称和时态。分析要点须全面，草拟提纲很重要，关键词组不可少。草拟提纲很重要，关键词组不可少。连词成句合规范，关联词语增流畅。连词成句合规范，关联词语增流畅。要想文章添风采，修改修改再修改。要想文章添风采，修改修改再修改。How to write a good article?1.Grasp five steps of writing.What are they?2.Know how to correct and comment an article.What sh
18、ould you know about a good article?1.Go on correcting your writing,and copy your writing.2.Share your writing with others.Remember:Practice makes perfect!Dear Sir/Madam,I want to take part in the Summer Camp.Itsa good way to improve my English and it can also help me know more about the American cul
19、ture.I like surfing the Internet for something new.I love sports and pop music,too.I do quite wellin English and I can talk with our foreign teacherfreely.I hope to stay with a large American familywith three or four children because I like playingwith children and we can have a great time.Thank you.Yours,Zhang Hong
