1、学 习 目 标123通过词汇和句式的提升提高写作语言的丰富性 能够根据所学内容自主完成一篇书面表达学习准备：笔记本，作文纸，黑笔，红笔，你的专注学习准备：笔记本，作文纸，黑笔，红笔，你的专注相关模块：相关模块：7A Module 4;8B Module 4;9B Module 5;9B Module 6 通过审题谋篇提升写作的整体意识与框架意识checklistin this lesson，you will.How to keep healthy?Have healthy eating habitsRelax and have a good moodDevelop healthy lifest
2、ylesimportanthelpfulnecessaryIt is important/helpful/necessary to.How to keep healthy?Be healthy physically and mentally.Be healthy both in body and mind.How to keep healthy?Have healthy eating habitsRelax and have a good moodDevelop healthy lifestylesHow?regularEnjoy some hobbiesHave some friends.B
3、e happy.How to keep healthy?How?How?Lets practise小练笔.BeginningBodyEndingBodyThe introduction of the topic&the importance of healthOur hope for people to be healthyTo complete the passage.Its important to have healthy eating habits.We should have three meals a day on time.Wed better eat more _but les
4、s_.Its helpful to develop healthy lifestyles.Relaxing ourselves is necessary.When we are stressed out,we can make ourselves happy by_music or talking with our friends.First,itsSecond,its fruit and vegetables junk foodgo to bedlistening to Whats more,relaxingTips：1.适当的过渡词可以让文章要点层次鲜明，逻辑清晰。2.通过拓展句（deta
5、ils/examples/reasons/results）进一步给出建议。Writing skills 写作提升策略一词汇提升：beneficialregularlyA We shouldnt eat junk food.B We should_junk food.keep away from 1.have three meals a day on time.2.helpful3.be good for4.be bad for5.keep healthy6.make sb fall ill easily7.be unhealthyTips：1.高级词替换2.词性替换3.短语替换2 minsa.
6、I like to listen to music to relax myself.b.Listening to music is a good way to relax.写作提升策略二 句式提升：a.We should keep a good mood every day.b.I find it important to keep a good mood every day.Writing skills 用特定句型或者改变句子的主语时表达更清晰用特定句型或者改变句子的主语时表达更清晰用被动语态可以加强语气。用被动语态可以加强语气。避免中式英语（定语从句）避免中式英语（定语从句）a.First
7、,we should eat healthily.b.Eating healthily should be put in the first place.it 作形式宾语句型改变句子主语主动改被动Which one is better?现在中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍现在中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：内容包括：1.缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；2.缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；3.
8、针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。参考词汇参考词汇 be short of 1.重点：如何增补校外实践，培养良好的运动习惯。重点：如何增补校外实践，培养良好的运动习惯。2.时态：一般现在时时态：一般现在时 3.人称：第三人称复数人称：第三人称复数How to organize your writing.审How to organize your writing.列 Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now.They have to do too much homework after s
9、chool,or have too many after-school classes.So there is no time for them to do exercise.Being short of exercise may cause many problems,such as putting on weight and poor health.Even though they are too busy with their school-work,it is still necessary to do exercise to make their bodies strong and
10、healthy.First,theyd better ride or walk to school on weekdays.Second,they can go swimming or take a walk in the park on weekends.Whats more,they can exercise by doing daily housework.which can help to refresh their mind and be more energetic.Possible version ReasonsInfluencesEndingTopicsentencesSugg
11、estions 如今，青少年的健康问题受到了社会的普遍关注，请仔细观察下面如今，青少年的健康问题受到了社会的普遍关注，请仔细观察下面两幅漫画，分析问题并提出你的合理建议。两幅漫画，分析问题并提出你的合理建议。Your turn to write.ReasonsInfluencesAdviceTeenagers health 1.时态：一般现在时时态：一般现在时&现在完成时现在完成时 2.人称：第三人称人称：第三人称3.分析问题的原因及其影响分析问题的原因及其影响并给出建议并给出建议话题复习一话题复习一 书面表达篇书面表达篇 Food,drinks and health Homework 根据以
12、下提醒再次根据以下提醒再次修改润饰你的文章，将它发给你的英语老师修改润饰你的文章，将它发给你的英语老师。1.文章的整体框架结构是否如下图所示？可以再加个Ending哦！2.我有没有用上适当的过渡词，我有没有就主题句进行拓展？3.我的语言是不是还可以更丰富？有可替换的词吗？有更好的句子吗？我尝试用被动语态和定语从句了吗？4.我满意我的书写吗？ReasonsInfluencesAdviceTeenagers healthCheck list(How many stars can you get?)1.我能了解并运用本节课写作策略。2.我能全程参与课堂互动并擅于记笔记。3.我对Health这个话题有了新的认识并想成为一个健康的青少年。话题复习一话题复习一 书面表达篇书面表达篇 Food,drinks and health
