1、2023中考英语专项训练书面表达之中考英语专项训练书面表达之叙事类叙事类叙事类如何写开头如何写开头 思维点拨思维点拨话题内容突出特点适用开头时间较近的个人活动直接交代活动背景正面意义的团队活动突出意义和收获时间较长的难忘经历回味往事、成长经历开门见山型开门见山型设置悬念型设置悬念型以情动人型以情动人型如何写开头开门见山型时间，Sb.(with sb.)visited/had/paid a visit to 某人地方某人地方.时间，Sb.enjoyed a wonderful trip to+地方 with sb.时间，Sb.(with sb.)did sth.to do sth.目的 +地点.
2、EXERCISE上周六，九年级的学生们走进敬老院开展志愿者服务活动。假如你是李平，你也参加了此次活动，请根据表格内容给你的美国笔友Mike写一封邮件，向他介绍这次活动。Hows it going?Id like to tell you something about my last Saturday.Last Saturday，I with my classmates took part in a volunteer activity to help the old people.What would you do if sb.did sth?设置悬念型如何写开头EXERCISE假如你是李华，
3、上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana，请根据表格内容，写一篇短文。Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.What would you do if your parents were not at home？Everyone has their own unforgettable memory.To me,it happened(时间状语时间状语).I can still remember it clearly.(Looking back on t
4、he past,)I cant help smiling/feeling warm/moved/happy when I remember that+sb.did sth+时间时间/地点地点.以情动人型如何写开头EXERCISE初中的学习和生活中总有很多你的第一次经历，有些让你感动，有些让你尴尬，但都难以忘 却。某 杂 志 社 以 “M y First _”为题，举办征文活动。请根据提示问题和要求，写一篇英语作文，描述你第一次做某事的经历。Looking back on the past,I cant help feeling moved when I remember that I gave
5、 a speech in public for the first time.过渡句以情动人型Here is what I did that day.Now,I would like to/Im eager to share it with you.如何写正文如何写正文 思维点拨思维点拨 句型句型+模板模板 动作动作+从句从句 时间时间+顺序顺序 场景场景+万能句万能句（同时发生、先后发生）（同时发生、先后发生）Key 1.句型When sb.was doing sth.,sb.did sth.正文句型正文句型【使用说明】两个动作同时发生：【使用说明】两个动作同时发生：was doing是延续
6、动词；是延续动词；did是瞬间动词。是瞬间动词。E.g.当我们正在爬山时，突然看到了树上有些猴子。当我们正在爬山时，突然看到了树上有些猴子。When we were climbing the mountain,we saw some monkeys in the trees .While sb.was doing sth.,sb.was doing sth.正文句型正文句型【使用说明】两个动作同时发生：【使用说明】两个动作同时发生：was doing是延续动词。是延续动词。E.g 当一些同学帮助老人打扫房间时，另一些同学就在做饭。当一些同学帮助老人打扫房间时，另一些同学就在做饭。While s
7、ome students were cleaning the rooms,other students were cooking a meal for the old.notuntil.正文句型正文句型 特别注意：先发生的事情永远写在特别注意：先发生的事情永远写在until的后面。的后面。原始写法：原始写法：notuntil【使用说明】后发生的事情(写成否定句)+until+先发生的事情。E.g.直到太阳落山，我们才回家。直到太阳落山，我们才回家。先发生：the sun set.后发生：we went home.We didnt go home until the sun set.notunt
8、il.正文句型正文句型 强调句写法：强调句写法：It wasnt untilthat先发生：the sun set.后发生：we went home.It wasnt until the sun set that we went home.【使用说明】It wasnt until+先发生的事情 that+后发生的事情。notuntil.正文句型正文句型 倒装句写法：倒装句写法：Not until 否定词前置引起的部分倒装先发生：the sun set.后发生：we went home.Not until the sun set did we go home.【使用说明】Not until 先发
9、生+后发生（疑问语序：从顺序上变一般疑问句）as soon as Sb.did sth as soon as sb.did sth.正文句型正文句型【使用说明】（就）【使用说明】（就）后发生动作后发生动作 as soon as（一）先发生动作（一）先发生动作E.g.我们一到达老人院，就把礼物给了老人们。我们一到达老人院，就把礼物给了老人们。先发生：we got to the old peoples home后发生：we gave gifts to the old there.We gave gifts to the old there as soon as we got to the old
10、peoples home.It is the first time 正文句型正文句型 It is ones first time to do sth.It is the first time that sb.have done sth.E.g.这是我第一次给妹妹煮面条。这是我第一次给妹妹煮面条。It is my first time to cook noodles for my sister.It is the first time that I have cooked noodles for my sister.【使用说明】【使用说明】一般写在正文第一句或最后一句一般写在正文第一句或最后一句
11、Key 2.模板模板模板=句型句型+序列词序列词（+细节感受细节感受/原因原因/目的）目的）先后顺序起始：At first/at the beginning/to begin with过程：After that/Then/later/besides/Whats more最后：At last/finally/in the end时间序列词时间顺序In the morning/On Sunday morningAt noonIn the afternoonIn the evening 时间序列词（单日的活动、题目已给）正文模板 We did the following things to spen
12、d/enrich our activity.At first,we did XX as soon as we got there.After that,we did XX.While sb.was/were doing XX,sb.was/were doing XX.In this activity,doing XX was the happiest/most meaningful thing in our activity.Finally,did XX.We didnt end our activity until the sun set.EXERCISETime上周六早上Transport
13、ation乘坐大巴车People九年级的学生们Activities打扫房间、下象棋、聊天FeelingsEXERCISE We did the following things to spend our activity.We went to the old peoples home by bus in the morning.At first,we gave gifts to the old people there as soon as we get there.After that,we did some housework for the old people.While some s
14、tudents were cleaning the rooms,other students were cooking a meal.In this activity,talking with the old about their daily life was the happiest thing.Finally,we played chess with them.We didnt end our activity until the sun set.如何写结尾如何写结尾What can you learn from our experiences?happinesshelping othe
15、rsgrowth 思维点拨思维点拨经历所得适用结尾一件事带来了快乐、幸福一件事带来了难忘、收获一件事带来了成长、道理Happy EndingUnforgettable EndingMeaningful endingHappy EndingWhat a pleasant day we had!Although I was tired that day,I felt very happy.Im looking forward to visiting XXX again next time.Doing sth.is a small thing,but in my heart it is a big
16、happiness.Happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.Happy EndingDoing sth.is a small thing,but in my heart it is a big happiness.Happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.【使用说明】以小见大的幸福，尤其适用于发生在个人身上的【使用说明】以小见大的幸福，尤其适用于发生在个人身上的小事或助人为乐的好事。小事或助人为乐的好事。Unforgettable E
17、ndingWhat an unforgettable thing it is in my life!We spent such an unforgettable day that it will be in my mind forever.Meaningful endingIt was more than an experience!All in all,I benefited a lot from todays activity.Ive learned a lot from this experience,which benefits me a lot.“鱼与熊掌”兼得型It was rea
18、lly an unforgettable day/activity/experience for me/us.And I really benefited/learned a lot from it.Whenever I look back on what happened that day,I still believed it is adj.unforgettable/meaningful/right/valuable+to do sth.用于志愿性活动（做好事）用于志愿性活动（做好事）场景句型场景句型I was so proud to have done what I could for
19、 this volunteer activity.All in all,Ive learned more than I can say.Ill value it forever.Through this activity,I realize that its not easy but meaningful to be a volunteer.用于户外活动（学校）用于户外活动（学校）场景句型场景句型When you are enjoying the camp/hiking/climbing,dont forget how to keep yourself safe.I think this activity offered me/us a good experience to develop abilities as well as open our mind.
