1、LOGO中考英语书面表达高分策略中考英语书面表达高分策略让过程更有方法让过程更有方法!LOGO80-100字数要求字数要求话题符合中学生的生活话题符合中学生的生活 开放性人文性传播正能量开放性人文性传播正能量能根据提示，要求整合信息能根据提示，要求整合信息特点特点 书面表达题型特点书面表达题型特点话题作文，图表作文，应用作文话题作文，图表作文，应用作文LOGO中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第四档第四档(1215(1215分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连
2、接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能连接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。力。第三档第三档(811(811分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。地达到了交际的目的。第二档第二档(47(47分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。对写作内容的理解。第一档第一档(03(03分
3、）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任分）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息传达有效信息。LOGO高分作文的几大要素：紧扣主题。覆盖所有的要点。词汇使用正确。句式结构丰富。有效运用连词。段落清晰，层次分明。LOGO 圈出要点，提炼关键圈出要点，提炼关键 分清层次，首尾呼应分清层次，首尾呼应具体步骤具体步骤 高分书面表达解题技巧高分书面表达解题技巧 复核要点，不要遗漏复核要点，不要遗漏 根据中英，审题扣题根据中英，审题扣题 理顺词句，巧用连词理顺词句，巧用连词LOGO真题解析真题解析1 1安
4、全对每个人都很重要。安全对每个人都很重要。写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。提示：提示：1.1.体育锻炼体育锻炼 2.2.上下楼梯上下楼梯 3.3.交朋结友交朋结友 4.4.食品卫生食品卫生要求：要求：1.1.语句通顺，内容连贯；语句通顺，内容连贯；2 2短文适当发挥包含要点。短文适当发挥包含要点。3 3词数：词数：8010080100词。词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。难点是：提示词全是难点是：提示词全是中文且较短。中文且较短。LOGO安全对每个人都很重要。安全对每个人都很重要。写一篇关于校园安全的英语写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文
5、。小短文。第一步第一步 审题扣题审题扣题主题是校园安全！主题是校园安全！时态是一般现在时，主语为学时态是一般现在时，主语为学生们生们students/we!students/we!LOGO提示：提示：1.1.体育锻炼体育锻炼 2.2.上下楼梯上下楼梯 3.3.交朋结友交朋结友 4.4.食品卫生食品卫生解题思路：第二步，圈要点解题思路：第二步，圈要点要点为要点为避免危险避免危险的一些建议！的一些建议！提炼校园提炼校园危险危险的四个方面！的四个方面！LOGO动笔列出关键词：动笔列出关键词：do sports,do exercisego upstairs and downstairsmake fri
6、endseat healthy food,avoid junk food第三步理顺词句，巧用连词第三步理顺词句，巧用连词1.1.运动：运动：first,should,take care,get injured.2.2.上下楼：上下楼：second,there are,many students,narrow,crowd each other 3.3.交友：交友：besides,we must,be friendly,get on well with,4.4.健康食品：健康食品：Last but not least,weshould,eat more healthy food,stay away
7、 from junk foodLOGO体育锻炼体育锻炼(take care,get injured)We should take care not to get injured.We have many sports activities.调整为：调整为：We have many suggestions.First,we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports.如何丰富句式？如何丰富句式？LOGO上下楼（上下楼（there are,many students,crowded,push）Se
8、cond,There are too many students at school.Our hallways are too crowded.When we go upstairs and downstairs,dont push.调整为：调整为：Second,There are too many students at school,and our hallways are too narrow.So dont push each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs.Or there may be an accident.L
9、OGO调整为调整为Besides,we should be friendly and get on well with others,dont argue or even fight.交友：（交友：（must,be friendly,get on well with,）We must be friendly.We should get on well with others.We cant quarrel or fight.LOGO健康食品：健康食品：should,eat healthy food,stay away from junk food We should eat more heal
10、thy food,but stay away from junk food.调整为：调整为：Last but not least,We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food which is harmful to our health.LOGO 第四第四 分清层次，首尾呼应分清层次，首尾呼应1.1.开头已给出，已点题！（不计入字数？）开头已给出，已点题！（不计入字数？）总总2.2.中间为文章的中间为文章的4 4个方面：（小层次，可以用顺序个方面：（小层次，可以用顺序连词）连词）运动（运动（2-32-
11、3句话）：小心，避免受伤句话）：小心，避免受伤上下楼（上下楼（2-32-3句话）：人多，走廊上不打闹句话）：人多，走廊上不打闹 分分交友（交友（2-32-3句话）：友好，好好相处句话）：友好，好好相处食品健康（食品健康（2-32-3句话）：多健康食品，句话）：多健康食品，远离垃圾食品。远离垃圾食品。3.3.结尾点题：记住以上要点很重要！结尾点题：记住以上要点很重要！总总LOGO开头已给已点题！开头已给已点题！Safety has become the focus to us all.How to be safe at school is especially important to us s
12、tudents.分层次叙述，用必要连词！分层次叙述，用必要连词！We have some helpful suggestions.First,we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports.Second,There are too many students at school,and our hallways are too crowded.So dont push each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs.Or the
13、re may be an accident.Besides,we should be friendly and get on well with others,dont fight or even fight.Last but not least,We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food which is harmful to our health.In a word,its important to remember these for us all.最后再次点题，首尾呼应！最后再次点题，首尾呼
14、应！第五步第五步 复核要点复核要点 不要遗漏不要遗漏LOGO真题解析真题解析针对社会上人们对针对社会上人们对9090后年轻人的某些后年轻人的某些评论，英语课上同学们与老师就此展评论，英语课上同学们与老师就此展开了讨论。作为一名开了讨论。作为一名9090后的中学生，后的中学生，请参考下面的提示词写一篇英语发言请参考下面的提示词写一篇英语发言稿，展示真实的你。稿，展示真实的你。要求：要求：1.1.语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。2.2.不能出现真实校名、姓名相关信息不能出现真实校名、姓名相关信息。3.3.不少于不少于8080词。开头和结尾不计数。词。开头和结尾不计数。L
15、OGO参考词汇：参考词汇：selfish(自私的自私的);Internet;believe in oneself;high ideals(崇高理想崇高理想);in style,creativeAs we know,most of us are the only child in our families now.We are growing up.We are sure to do better.难点是：难点是：1.1.只有少量的英文提示词，要大胆推只有少量的英文提示词，要大胆推测出词与词之间的逻辑关系，是因测出词与词之间的逻辑关系，是因果果/并列并列/转折等。转折等。2.2.开头结尾已经给出
16、，需要大量扩开头结尾已经给出，需要大量扩充细节。充细节。3.3.大层次已有，注意细节的分层。大层次已有，注意细节的分层。LOGO第一步审题第一步审题+第二步要点第二步要点从中文材料中捕捉主题是从中文材料中捕捉主题是对对9090后的看法：后的看法：从英文提示中探出以下细节：从英文提示中探出以下细节：1.1.从英文提示中主题：从英文提示中主题：9090后有缺点也有优点！后有缺点也有优点！2.2.selfish大胆推测：大胆推测：9090后的性格特点！缺点！后的性格特点！缺点！3.3.Internet:多电脑网络，少沟通交流！多电脑网络，少沟通交流！4.high ideals:我们有崇高的理想。我们
17、有崇高的理想。5.believe in oneself:相信自己，不轻言放弃！相信自己，不轻言放弃！6.in style,creative：我们容易接受新事物我们容易接受新事物/新新观观 点点/思维创新。思维创新。7.7.补充补充1-21-2点，符合字数要求：点，符合字数要求：我们应尊重父母老师之间的关系。我们应尊重父母老师之间的关系。LOGOAs we know,most of us are the only child in our families now.selfish父母宠爱给予一切父母宠爱给予一切导致导致变得自私变得自私Parents love us very much.They
18、do everything for us.It makes us selfish.调整为：调整为：Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us.It makes us become selfish.第三步，理顺，连词！第三步，理顺，连词！LOGO调整为：调整为：Usually we spend so much timeon the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others.Internet:关注网络缺乏交流关注
19、网络缺乏交流We usually spend too much time on theInternet.So we have less time to communicate.LOGO自然的过渡：自然的过渡：有缺点也有优点。有缺点也有优点。There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well.有理想相信自己不言放弃！有理想相信自己不言放弃！We teenagers have high ideals.We always believe in ourselves and never say“give up”.LOGO应调整为：应调整为：
20、New ideas can be easily accepted by us.You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life.We also know how to respect your parents and teachers.We are growing up.We are sure to do better.接受新事物，思维创新接受新事物，思维创新尊重父母老师尊重父母老师We can accept new ideas.Our thinking is creative.We must respect parents
21、 and teachers.LOGO开头开头父母宠爱给予一切，父母宠爱给予一切，导致：导致：变得自私关注网络缺乏交流变得自私关注网络缺乏交流9090后后的普的普遍缺遍缺点点自然的过渡：自然的过渡：有缺点也有优点。有缺点也有优点。相信自己，不言放弃相信自己，不言放弃 接受新事物，思维创新接受新事物，思维创新 字数不够补充字数不够补充尊重父母老师尊重父母老师结尾：我们长大会做的更好结尾：我们长大会做的更好 呼应主题呼应主题优点是：有理想！优点是：有理想！分层次说明！分层次说明！第四步：首尾呼应第四步：首尾呼应LOGOAs we know,most of us are the only child
22、in our families now.Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us.It makes us become selfish.Usually we spend so much time on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others.LOGO There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well.We teenagers hav
23、e high ideals.We always believe in ourselves and never say give up.Meanwhile we are in style.New ideas can be easily accepted by us.You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life.We also know how to respect your parents and teachers.We are growing up.We are sure to do better.LOGO练一练：练一练
24、：在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：父母、老师、同学、朋友等等。父母、老师、同学、朋友等等。学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助那么你对那么你对“友善待人友善待人”是怎样理解的呢？是怎样理解的呢？谈谈你的看法。谈谈你的看法。要求：要求：1.1.文中不可出现真实人名与校名。文中不可出现真实人名与校名。2.2.语句通顺语句通顺,意思连贯意思连贯,书写规范。书写规范。3.3.词数：词数：8010080100。短文开头部分已给出。短文开头部分已给出,不计入总词数不计入总
25、词数 。LOGO参考词汇：参考词汇：respect,understand,help,relationship,contribute to(有助于有助于),get on well withThere is no doubt that a friendly relationship is of great importance in our life._难点是：要从大量的中文提难点是：要从大量的中文提示和少量的英文提示词中，示和少量的英文提示词中，扣紧题目，捕捉细节！扣紧题目，捕捉细节！LOGO在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：父母、老师、同学、朋友等等。父母
26、、老师、同学、朋友等等。学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助那么你对那么你对“友善待人友善待人”是怎样理解的呢？是怎样理解的呢？谈谈你的看法。谈谈你的看法。扣紧主题：友善待人扣紧主题：友善待人围绕以下几个方面展开：围绕以下几个方面展开：尊重他人相互理解提供帮助尊重他人相互理解提供帮助第一步？第一步？第二步？第二步？LOGO参考词汇：参考词汇：respect,understand,help,relationship,contribute to(有助于有助于),get on well with如何围绕提
27、如何围绕提示和参考词示和参考词汇展开？汇展开？How to get on How to get on wellwellwith?with?4 4个个why?why?尊重他人尊重他人respect others,respect others,contribute to contribute to，good relationshipsgood relationships相互理解相互理解understand each otherunderstand each other提供帮助提供帮助help others help others 补充一点补充一点bring happinessbring happi
28、ness第三步？第三步？LOGO第四步？第四步？还有，应帮助有困难的人，因为每个人都会遇到麻烦。还有，应帮助有困难的人，因为每个人都会遇到麻烦。首先，尊重他人是必要的，人们常说，首先，尊重他人是必要的，人们常说，尊重他人即尊重自己。尊重他人即尊重自己。另外，我们应理解他人，尽管不同人有不同观点。另外，我们应理解他人，尽管不同人有不同观点。我们应学会如何与他人友好相处？我们应学会如何与他人友好相处？开头开头同时，帮助他人也会让我们收获快乐。同时，帮助他人也会让我们收获快乐。总之，友善待人让我们的生活变得更美好！总之，友善待人让我们的生活变得更美好！结尾结尾中间中间LOGO已给已给There is
29、 no doubt that a friendly relationship is of great importance in our life.We should learn how to get on well with others.First of all,respecting others is very necessary.As people often say,respecting others means respecting ourselves,which can contribute to good relationships.Besides,we should unde
30、rstand each other.Different people have their own views,which can cause disagreements.Whats more,its a pleasure to offer help to those who are in trouble.Everyone can meet with ups and downs.Meanwhile,helping others can also bring us happiness.In a word,being kind and friendly is just like bright su
31、nlight.Only by doing so will we live better and better.第五步？第五步？LOGO1.1.慎用慎用谚语名言谚语名言。2.2.尽量用新目标尽量用新目标课本中的佳句课本中的佳句。3.3.避免避免ChinglishChinglish!4.4.句子句子成分的缺失成分的缺失。5.5.认真检查认真检查拼写，语法错误拼写，语法错误。6.6.试卷草稿，答题卡上试卷草稿，答题卡上认真书写认真书写！复核时应避免的问题LOGO1.词汇短语词汇短语“攻关秘笈攻关秘笈”音型义音型义 加强中考加强中考 坚持阅读，积累坚持阅读，积累2.有效的句式教学有效的句式教学认清认清
32、中考相关话题中考相关话题3.“多样多样”的句式变换的句式变换学会使用感叹句学会使用感叹句/定语从句定语从句/宾语从句宾语从句/比较级比较级/最高级最高级/被动语被动语等等合并简单句合并简单句 如何提升英语写作能力？LOGO提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！方式方式1 1：适当使用感叹句！：适当使用感叹句！I had a busy day!What a busy but meaningful day I had!What a busy but meaningful day I had!Zongzi is very delicious!How delicious I cooked!How delici
33、ous I cooked!LOGO提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！方式2：适当使用定语从句连接简单句！Messi is my idol.He plays football best in the Messi is my idol.He plays football best in the world.world.Messi who plays football best in the world Messi who plays football best in the world is my idol.is my idol.LOGO提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！方式3：适当使用状语从句连接简单句
34、！I was afraid to do that.Because I made lots of mistakes.I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face.LOGO提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！方式4：适当使用比较级最高级！I try more times,our life will be happy.The more I try,the happier our life will be.The more I try,the happier our life will be.LOGO提高句子“颜值
35、”的一些微技能！方式5：适当使用宾语从句！We must obey the rules.Our room will We must obey the rules.Our room will become comfortable.become comfortable.I hope all of us can obey these rules and ourI hope all of us can obey these rules and ourroom can become more comfortable.room can become more comfortable.LOGOI believe you can make it!
