1、话题一话题一 个人情况写作指导个人情况写作指导Never judge by appearances.切莫以貌取人。切莫以貌取人。Read aloudv11.friendly_v12.humorous_v13.patient_v14.warm-hearted_v15.kind_v16.popular_v17.lovely_v18.brave_v19.polite_v20.smart/clever_友好的友好的有幽默感的有幽默感的热心的热心的善良的善良的受欢迎的受欢迎的可爱的可爱的勇敢的勇敢的礼貌的礼貌的耐心的耐心的聪明的聪明的害羞的害羞的v1.tall_v2.short_v3.fat_v4.th
2、in_v5.strong_v6.weak_v7.handsome_v8.beutiful_v9.shy_v10.helpful_高的高的矮的矮的肥的肥的瘦的瘦的强壮的强壮的虚弱的虚弱的帅气的帅气的美丽的美丽的乐于助人的乐于助人的Chinese to English:v11.friendly_v12.humorous_v13.patient_v14.warm-hearted_v15.kind_v16.popular_v17.lovely_v18.brave_v19.polite_v20.smart/clever_友好的友好的有幽默感的有幽默感的热心的热心的善良的善良的受欢迎的受欢迎的可爱的可爱的
3、勇敢的勇敢的礼貌的礼貌的耐心的耐心的聪明的聪明的害羞的害羞的v1.tall_v2.short_v3.fat_v4.thin_v5.strong_v6.weak_v7.handsome_v8.beutiful_v9.shy_v10.helpful_Summary:1.形容词作表语：形容词作表语：she/he is.2.形容词作定语修饰名词形容词作定语修饰名词:a+adj+n高的高的矮的矮的肥的肥的瘦的瘦的强壮的强壮的虚弱的虚弱的帅气的帅气的美丽的美丽的乐于助人的乐于助人的1.与与.某人相处融洽某人相处融洽2.乐于做某事乐于做某事3.想要做某事想要做某事4.来自来自5.15 岁岁6.有一头长头发有
4、一头长头发7.努力，刻苦努力，刻苦8.擅长擅长9.帮助某人做某事帮助某人做某事10.在在.获得很大得进获得很大得进步步get on well with sbbe ready to do sth study hard/work hardhelp sb with sthwould like to do/want to docome from/be frommake great progress infifteen years old1.与与.某人相处融洽某人相处融洽2.乐于做某事乐于做某事3.想要做某事想要做某事4.来自来自5.15 岁岁6.有一头长头发有一头长头发7.努力，刻苦努力，刻苦8.擅长
5、擅长9.帮助某人做某事帮助某人做某事10.在在.获得很大得进获得很大得进步步get on well with sbbe ready to do sth study hardhelp sb with sthwould like to do/want to docome from/be frommake great progress infifteen years oldRead for information My father is 45 years old.He is of medium build with a big nose and two small eyes.He is an En
6、glish teacher in a middle school.Besides English,he likes sports best of all.He often plays basketball with his friends after school.He is a man who is very strict with me.One day,I made a small mistakes in my math homework.When he saw the paper,he made exercises for me to solve until I completely u
7、nderstand.How strict and careful my father is!I love him so much.ageappearancejobhobbywhenwherewhathowyour feeling篇篇章章结结构构how to describe a person 12Activity 1age/appearance/job/hobby.structurewhenwherewhathowyour feeling Find out good sentences My father is 45 years old.He is of medium build with a
8、 big nose and two small eyes.He is an English teacher in a middle school.Besides English,he likes sports best of all.He often plays basketball with his friends after school.He is a man who is very strict with me.One day,I made a small mistakes in my math homework.When he saw the paper,he made exerci
9、ses for me to solve until I completely understand.How strict and careful my father is!I love him so much.Find out good sentences My father is 45 years old.He is of medium build with a big nose and two small eyes.He is an English teacher in a middle school.Besides English,he likes sports best of all.
10、He often plays basketball with his friends after school.He is a man who is very strict with me.One day,I made a small mistakes in my math homework.When he saw the paper,he made exercises for me to solve until I completely understand.How strict and careful my father is!I love him so much.1.He is of m
11、edium build with a big nose and two small eyes.1.He/She is.with.他他/她她.有有.她是一个有一头长头发的女孩她是一个有一头长头发的女孩._ 她有一头长头发和一双大眼睛。她有一头长头发和一双大眼睛。Good sentencesShe is a girl long hair.She has long hair two big eyes.She has long hair two big eyes.v2.He is a man who is very strict with me.v2.He/She is.v他是一个短头发的男孩孩。他是
12、一个短头发的男孩孩。v_She is a girl long hair.She is a girl long hair.He is a boy has short hair.Good sentences3.How strict and careful my father is!how+adj+主语主语+谓语！谓语！what+(a/an)+adj.+n.+主语主语+谓语谓语这个男孩多么幸运啊！这个男孩多么幸运啊！_她多么勤奋啊！她多么勤奋啊！_How lucky the boy is!How hard she studies!What a lucky boy he is!v1.He/She is
13、.v2.He/She is.with.他他/她她.有有.v3.He/She is.who.v4.how+adj+主语主语+谓语！谓语！vwhat+(a/an)+adj.+n.+主语主语+谓语谓语While-writing:朋友在我们的生活中有着非凡的意义，好朋友是值得我朋友在我们的生活中有着非凡的意义，好朋友是值得我们珍惜的。假如你是李立，你所在的英语俱乐部本周讨们珍惜的。假如你是李立，你所在的英语俱乐部本周讨论的话题为论的话题为“My best friend”，请你以此话题写一篇英，请你以此话题写一篇英文短文，参与英语俱乐部的讨论。内容包括文短文，参与英语俱乐部的讨论。内容包括:1.介绍自己
14、的好朋友。介绍自己的好朋友。2.叙述与好朋友之间发生的一件事。叙述与好朋友之间发生的一件事。3.这件事给你的感受。这件事给你的感受。作文要求作文要求:1.不能照抄原文不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。不计入总词数。As we know,friends are important in our life.人称：人称：_时态：时态：_第一，三人称第一，三人称一般现在时，一般现在时，一般过去时一般过去时大约大约30字字大
15、约大约40字字大约大约10字字朋友在我们的生活中有着非凡的意义，好朋友是值得我朋友在我们的生活中有着非凡的意义，好朋友是值得我们珍惜的。假如你是李立，你所在的英语俱乐部本周讨们珍惜的。假如你是李立，你所在的英语俱乐部本周讨论的话题为论的话题为“My best friend”，请你以此话题写一篇英，请你以此话题写一篇英文短文，参与英语俱乐部的讨论。内容包括文短文，参与英语俱乐部的讨论。内容包括:1.介绍自己的好朋友。介绍自己的好朋友。2.叙述与好朋友之间发生的一件事。叙述与好朋友之间发生的一件事。3.这件事给你的感受。这件事给你的感受。As we know,friends are importa
16、nt in our life.1.He/She is.2.He/She is.with.他他/她她.有有.3.He/She is.who.4.how+adj+主语主语+谓谓语！语！get on well with sbbe ready to do sthwould like to do/want to docome from/be fromfifteen years oldstudy hardhelp sb with sthmake great progress in 大约大约30字字大约大约40字字大约大约10字字 评分标准评分标准 内容分：内容分：7 7分分1.1.介绍自己的好朋友介绍自己
17、的好朋友；-2 2分分2.2.叙述与好朋友之间发生叙述与好朋友之间发生的一件事的一件事 -4 4分分3.3.这件事给你的感受。这件事给你的感受。-1 1分分语言分：语言分：8 8分分第一档：第一档：8 8分分 要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。第二档：第二档：6-76-7分分要求：内容涵盖绝大多数要求，表达准确，意思连贯，要求：内容涵盖绝大多数要求，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少量语言错误。符合逻辑，但有少量语言错误。第三档第三档：4-54-5分分要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达
18、较为清楚、连贯，要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。第四档：第四档：1-31-3分分要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确句子，但要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。第五档：0 0分分空白卷或完全没有相关内容。空白卷或完全没有相关内容。互评作文（互评作文（3分钟）分钟）As we know,friends are important in our life.My best friend is Jane.She has big eyes with
19、 long hair.She is very lovely and kind-hearted.Reading is her favourite hobby and she is good at playing the violin.I remembered that I got a bad mark in my maths exam and I was very sad and disappointed.She came to comfort me with a gentle smile and helped me with my maths.With her great encouragem
20、ent and support,I made great progress in the final maths exam.We all smiled when we saw the mark on the paper.I was deeply grateful to her 篇篇章章结结构构how to describe a person 12Summaryage/appearance/job/hobby.structurewhenwherewhathowyour feeling1.He/She is.2.He/She is.with.他他/她她.有有.3.He/She is.who.4.h
21、ow+adj+主语主语+谓语！谓语！Thank you for listening!Thank you for listening!school informationpersonal informationfamily informationjobs and careersinterests and hobbiesPersonal backgroundMy father is 45 years old.He is of medium build with a big nose and two small eyes.He is an English teacher in a middle sc
22、hool.Besides English,he likes sports best of all.He often plays basketball with his friends after school.He is very strict with me.One day,I made a small mistakes in my math homework.When he saw the paper,he made exercises for me to solve until I completely understand.How strict and careful my fathe
23、r is!I love him so much.1.在在的南部的南部2.有有人口人口3.有有面积面积4.有有历史历史5.因因出名出名6.比如比如7.平方公里平方公里8.名胜古迹名胜古迹9.夏热冬冷夏热冬冷in the south of has a population ofbe famous for such as square kilometersplaces of interesthas an area ofhas a history ofhot in summer and cold in winter1.在在的南部的南部2.有有人口人口3.有有面积面积4.有有历史历史5.因因出名出名6.
24、比如比如7.平方公里平方公里8.名胜古迹名胜古迹9.夏热冬冷夏热冬冷in the south of has a population ofbe famous for such as square kilometersplaces of interesthas an area ofhas a history ofhot in summer and cold in winter 地点介绍地点介绍边读边思考介绍了广州哪方面的内容边读边思考介绍了广州哪方面的内容。v Guangzhou is in the south of China.It has a history of more than 2,2
25、00 years and it is famous as“Flower City.It has a population of more than 16 million and has an area of about 70,000 square kilometres.There are a lot of places of interest in it.Tourists from all over the world visit Guangzhou.It is never hot in summer or cold in winter.地理位置地理位置历史历史人口人口面积面积景点景点天气天气
26、时态：时态：一般现在时一般现在时 人称人称:第三人称第三人称 Place面积面积(Area)人口人口(Population)气候气候(Climate)风景风景(Scenery)文体特点文体特点位置位置(Location)历史和文化历史和文化(History&Culture)特产特产(Local products)1.Location（位置）（位置）(1)is in the south/north/of在在南南/北部北部 1.北京在中国北部。北京在中国北部。vBeijing is in the north of China.v2.湛江位于广东的南侧。湛江位于广东的南侧。vZhanjiang is
27、 in the south of Guangdong.2.Population(人口人口)has a population of 有人口茂名人口六百多万茂名人口六百多万(six million)。Maoming has a population of over six million.3.Area(面积面积)has an area of有有面积面积 英国面积英国面积700万平方公里万平方公里(7 million square kilometers)。England has an area of 7 million square kilometers.4.History:(历史)has a hi
28、story of有历史译：这个城市有译：这个城市有1000多年历史。多年历史。The city has a history of over 1000 years.中国有中国有5000多年历史。多年历史。China has a history of over 5000 years.5.Scenery(风景名胜风景名胜)There are a lot of paces of interest in,such as.1）信宜有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石）信宜有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石根山根山,西江温泉西江温泉(spring)There are a lot of places of
29、interest in Xinyi,such as Tianma mountain,Dawu mountain,Shigen mountain,Xijiang Spring.places of interest 归纳句型：归纳句型：(1).is in the south/north of 在在的南的南/北部北部(2).has a population of 有有人口人口(3).has a history of 有有历史历史(4)has an area of 有有面积面积(5)There are a lot of places of interest in,such as 有很多名胜在有很多名胜
30、在 例如例如.While-writing:v根据以下内容写一篇根据以下内容写一篇100字左右的说明文，字左右的说明文，标题为标题为“Xinyi”v1.信宜位于广东的南部信宜位于广东的南部，面积约，面积约3,101平方平方公里公里(square kilometers),人口约人口约100多万多万v(1 million)；v2.信宜有信宜有1000多年的历史，多年的历史，v3.信宜有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，信宜有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石根山石根山,西江温泉西江温泉(spring)v4.信宜因为三华李而出名。信宜因为三华李而出名。v5.信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。信宜夏天不会很
31、热冬天也不会很冷。1.信宜位于广东的南部信宜位于广东的南部，面积约，面积约3,101平方公里平方公里(square kilometers),人口约人口约100多多(1 million)；2.信宜有信宜有1000多年的历史，多年的历史，3.信宜有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石信宜有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石根山根山,西江温泉西江温泉(spring)4.信宜因为三华李而出名信宜因为三华李而出名。5.信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。它它它它be famous for互评作文（互评作文（3分钟）分钟）任务任务：1.看看别人如何表达你的看看别人如何表达你的疑难
32、点疑难点；2.看看同学的作文里有看看同学的作文里有没有正确使用句型。没有正确使用句型。评判依据：评判依据：1.卷面（整洁少涂改）卷面（整洁少涂改）2.字体（压线写）字体（压线写）3.内容（要点齐全）内容（要点齐全）评分档次评分档次：第一档：第一档：12-15(优秀）优秀）卷面整洁，字体清晰，卷面整洁，字体清晰，内容齐内容齐全，错误很少；全，错误很少；第二档第二档:10-11（良好）卷面（良好）卷面较较整洁，字体整洁，字体较较清晰，清晰，内内容齐全容齐全，错误，错误较较少；少；第三档第三档:9（及格）内容基本齐全，错误（及格）内容基本齐全，错误较多；较多；第四档第四档:4-8（较差）内容不齐全，
33、错误很多；（较差）内容不齐全，错误很多；第五档第五档:1-3（差）只写了一两个相关词句。（差）只写了一两个相关词句。XinyiXinyi is in the south of Guangdong province and has an area of 3,101 square kilometers.It has a population of more than one million.Besides,it has a long history of over1000 years.There are a lot of places of interest in Xinyi,such as Ti
34、anma mountain,Shigen mountain,Dawu mountain,Xijiang Spring.Whats more,Xinyi is famous for Sanhuali.It is never very hot in summer or very cold in winter.Welcome to my home town-Xinyi.1).is in thesouth/north of(2).has a population of(3).has a history of(4)has an area of(5)There are a lot of places of
35、 interest in,such as时态：时态：一般现在时一般现在时 人称人称:第三人称第三人称话题：介绍地方话题：介绍地方vStep 4连句成篇，连句成篇，添加适当添加适当过渡词语过渡词语如：如：and,but,however,besides,whats more,so等等Step 1:审题审题 体裁体裁:时态时态:人称人称:vStep2:理清要点理清要点v1.信宜位于广东的南部信宜位于广东的南部，面积约，面积约3,101平方平方公里公里,人口约人口约100多万；多万；v2.信宜有信宜有1000多年的历史，多年的历史，v3.信宜是山区城市，有很多风景名胜，如天信宜是山区城市，有很多风景名
36、胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石根山马山，大雾岭，石根山,西江温泉西江温泉v4.信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。说明文说明文一般现在时一般现在时第三人称第三人称v根据以下内容写一篇根据以下内容写一篇100字左右的说明文，字左右的说明文，标题为标题为“Xinyi”v1.信宜位于广东的南部信宜位于广东的南部，面积约，面积约3,101平方平方公里公里(square kilometers),人口约人口约100多万多万v(1 million)；v2.信宜有信宜有1000多年的历史，多年的历史，v3.信宜是山区城市，有很多风景名胜，如天信宜是山区城市，有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾
37、岭，石根山马山，大雾岭，石根山,西江温泉西江温泉(spring)v4.信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。Exchange your composition with your desk mate and help each other to improve your writing.在评改时，应注意以下几个方面：在评改时，应注意以下几个方面：1、在、在语言语言方面方面,重点评判句子的语法结构是否正重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范确、用词是否规范;是否使用了合适而且是否使用了合适而且较丰富较丰富的的句型结构句型结构;是否用上了较高级词汇是否用上了较高级词
38、汇。2、在、在内容内容方面，重点评判是否表达全部规定内容，方面，重点评判是否表达全部规定内容，适当添加一些内容，不扣分。适当添加一些内容，不扣分。3、在、在连贯性连贯性方面，重点评判是否构成一篇连贯的方面，重点评判是否构成一篇连贯的短文；是否合理使用了过渡词语。短文；是否合理使用了过渡词语。4、卷面卷面是否整洁，是否整洁，字体字体是否工整。是否工整。XinyiLocated in the south of Guangdong province,Xinyi has an area of 3,101 square kilometers.Its a small city which has a po
39、pulation of more than one million.Besides,it has a long history of more than 1000 years.As a mountainous city,Xinyi has many places of interest,such as Tianma mountain,Shigen mountain,Dawu mountain,Xijiang Spring and so on.Whats more,Xinyi has gentle climate,which is warm in winter and cool in summe
40、r,so it is a good place for people to settle downPost-writing:6.Climate:(气候气候)The climate in is.Sp has climate 云南的气候适宜，冬暖夏凉。云南的气候适宜，冬暖夏凉。The climate in Yunnan is gentle/nice.It is warm in winter and cool in summer good/nice/gentle/hot/coldcool/dry/wet/rainy/snowy.归纳句型：归纳句型：(1)Sp.is located in/lies i
41、n Located in,主句主句(2)Sp.has a history of 主句主句+with a history of(3)Sp.has/covers an area of 主句主句+with an area of (4)Sp.has a population of 主句主句+with a population of(5)Sp.has many places of interest,such as(6)The climate is Sp.has climate，which is 套用句型：套用句型：(1)Sp.is located in/lies in Located in,主句主句(2
42、)Sp.has a history of 主句主句+with a history of(3)Sp.has/covers an area of square kilometers 主句主句+with an area of (4)Sp.has a population of 主句主句+with a population of(5)Sp.has many places of interest,such as(6)The climate is Sp.has climate，which is 句型归纳：句型归纳：(1)Sp.is located in/lies in Located in,主句主句(2)Sp.has a history of 主句主句+with a history of(3)Sp.have/cover an area of 主句主句+with an area of (4)Sp.have a population of 主句主句+with a population of(5)Sp.has many places of interest,such as(6)The climate is Sp.has climate,which is
