1、B2U5 Music Reading for writingLead-inDear students,An online art festival will be held by the International Music Forum on 15th November,2022.At the festival,there will be an English speech contest.Everyone is welcome to participate in the speech contest and give a speech about how music can change
2、a persons life.Those who are going to attend the speech contest need to write out a speech of no more than 250 words and send it to art before 30th October,2022.We are looking forward to your participation!write a speech draftPre-readingSarah WilliamWhat might happen between music and her?Where is s
3、he?What is she doing?PredictPredictShe is in the hospital.She is listening to music and showing victory gesture.Reading for structureE:Introduce herself and the topic.Task1:Skim the text and match the main idea to each paragraphB:The impacts of musicC:Sarahs personal experience.A:Sarahs advice and h
4、ope.D:Thank the audience.Beginning(Para.1)Body(Para.2-3)Ending(Para.4-5)Writing tip 1:Appropriate structure makes the speech smooth,logical and coherent.Reading for Content Good morning.My name is Sarah Williams.Its an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact
5、on my life.Greet the audienceIntroduce herself Propose the topicBeginning(para 1)Task 2:Read Para.1 and find the key informationPara.1Reading for ContentPara.2Task 3:Read Para.2 and fill in the chartWhen What Howtwo years agothen one dayfrom then onhad a serious disease which was difficult to cureli
6、sten to some music before medical treatmentMusic helped her recoverafraid,alone,discouragedfeel so much betterhappygratefulTime orderMusicWriting tip 2:Suitable personal experience with problem-solving pattern makes the speech vivid.ProblemSolutionProblem-solving patternReading for ContentPara.3Task
7、 4:Read Para.3 and answer the questions1.What impacts does the music have on Sarah?2.How does Sarah describe the impacts of music?Impacts of musicGive me happinessGive me strength and reliefGive me hope and satisfactionMade my spirits fly like a kiteIt was the rock I leant on to become strong and to
8、 get through those hard times.Became my best friendSpoke word of encouragementsupportive detailstopicsentencesReading for ContentPara.4&5Task 5:Read Para.4-5 and answer the questions1.What is her hope and advice?Do you agree?Of course,I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering
9、that I did.At the same time,we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone.During those times,music can help you in the same way that it helped me.I hope all of you will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.Thank you!Ending(para 4-5)Express hope and adviceThan
10、k the audiences listeningRead for language features personification rhetorical question metaphorrepetition quote simileWhat rhetorical devices do you know?rhetorical devicesRead for language featuresTask 5:recognize the rhetorical devices used in the sentences【A】Have you ever faced a time when thing
11、s looked dark and you had no hope at all?【B】John A.Logan said,“Music is the medicine of the mind.”【C】Music gave me happiness.Music gave me strength and brought me relief.Music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.【D】It made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.【E】It was the rock I leant on to
12、become strong and to get through those hard times.【F】It became my best friend.Rhetorical questionQuoteRepetitionSimileMetaphorPersonificationWriting tip 3:Proper rhetorical devices make the speech vivid and impressive.Post-readingStructureContentLanguage features Task 5:Make a mind map of the speech
13、BeginningBodyEndingGreetingSelf-introductionTopic Personal experience(problem-solving pattern)Impact of music (topic+details)Hope and adviceThank to audienceRhetorical devicesLinking wordsPre-writingBrainstorm：think of ways that people experience music,and how music can help people.Ways that people
14、experience musicHow music can help people listen to light/rock/pop music sing songs play the piano/guitar/ukulele/er hu give encouragement provide joy express emotion share similar feelings image a dream world Pre-writingWrite a sentence to express how music gives you happiness with the following rh
15、etorical devices.Music isMusic is likeMusic comforts/inspire/encourage“Music is the medicine of the mind”Have you ever heard?While-writingWrite a speech draft about how music can change a persons life(no more than 250 words)StructureContentUseful expressions Rhetorical devicesHow music help us Music
16、 isMusic is likeMusic comforts/inspire/encouragegive encouragementprovide joyexpress emotionshare similar feelingsimage a dream worldBeginningBodyEndingGreetingSelf-introductionTopic Personal experience(problem-solving pattern)Impact of music (topic+details)Hope and adviceThank to audiencePost-writi
17、ngPeer assessmentWriting checklist Yes NoIs the structure of the speech clear?Does the writer describe his/her experience with problem-solving pattern?Does the writer explain how music help him/her?Are there some rhetorical devices included and used properly?Summary and homeworkTask 1:polish your speech draft according to checklist and advice from your deskmates.Task 2:recite your speech and have a presentation next class.
