1、Reading for WritingHow to write a student profile?Welcome UnitDevelop writing and cooperating abilities By the end of this period,students will be able toKnow how to write a profile properlyUse some writing skills flexiblyBecome interested in writing discourses:01020304Warming-upWritingPost-writing
2、ProcedureReadingWriting a student profileWhat is a student profile?What is a student profile?the outline of a persons face when you look from the side,not the front.The word“profile”can refer to:a description of sb/sth that gives useful information.Warming-upBear in mindA student profile is a short
3、article or programme in which the students life and character are described.What kind of aspects should be included when you write a student profile?Profile Hobbies Name Personality School/Study Dreams/Plans Some Conceptions about a student profileAge ReadingPre-Reading:It tells us the name and _ An
4、n is in.Personality:active&_ school My name is Ann Wells and Im a Grade 10 student at Lakeside High School.Im an active person and I love sports.Im curious about everything.I often ask questions,but I learn by doing.My favorite subject is physics.Dancing and skating are my hobbies,and I also like to
5、 read short stories.I plan to become an engineer in the futureAnn,15 Ann,15 Lakeside High SchoolLakeside High SchoolUSAUSA 1.I love sports.2.I often ask ._ Her hobbies:dancing,skating&_ short stories.reading questions Examples:Reading curious _ Her dream:to become an _ engineer What is Anns way of l
6、earning?And whats her dream?She often asks questions and learns by doing.And she wants to be an engineer in the future.Careful-ReadingIm Thando Gowon.Im 16 this year.I come from South Africa.Im a Grade 10 student at South Hill High School.I look good,think fast,and play hard.Youll never see me witho
7、ut a book or a pen.If Im not in class,Im either in the library or in the computer lab.At the weekends,I play computer games if Im not busy studying.My dream is to start my own IT company.Main idea:_ of Thando Gowon Key phrase be busy in doing sth 忙于 come from 来自 The profile Question:What does“Youll
8、never see me without a book or a pen”mean?eitheror 要么要么Part2 Diligent&Hardworking W Words and expressionsords and expressionsbe born in,at the age of,study in/at warm-hearted,active,honest,independent,creative,curious,easy to get along with be popular with(受受欢迎欢迎)be fond of,be interested in,have a f
9、ancy for(喜欢喜欢),be willing to dream of/about,plan to,be ready to,wish for a chance to 1.Introduction3.Hobby 2.Personality4.Dream&PlanWriting a profile Writing structure Introducing the topicExplaining the topic1.3.4.Closing the topicHighlighting the topicpersonalitylearning style&hobbydream&future pl
10、an name,age,grade,school 2.My name is Johann Webber and Im a Grade 10 student at South Lake High School.Im a(n)_ boy，so I am easy to get along with.Im curious about everything.I often ask questions and always try to solve them by .Of all the subjects,is my favourite.I enjoy collecting stamps as well
11、 as _.I also play the piano in my spare time.In the near future，I intend to become a(n).musicianclimbing mountainseasy-goingchemistryworking in groupsSample writingHow to polish your writing技巧一：技巧一：巧巧用过渡词汇用过渡词汇技巧二：技巧二：避免中式表达避免中式表达技巧三：技巧三：简单句与从句并用简单句与从句并用技巧四：技巧四：适当使用非谓语结构适当使用非谓语结构How to polish your w
12、riting技巧一：技巧一：巧巧用过渡词汇用过渡词汇过渡词起“向导向导”作用，可有效规范我们的行文逻辑。所谓过渡词过渡词，就是表示先后顺序的first，second，last.；表示因果关系的due to,because of,therefore,as a result；表示分述关系的whats more,furthermore,besides,in addition等。How to polish your writing由于英语和汉语表达方式不同，行文中要尽量避免生硬拗口的中式化表达，如，I very like English和I live city center等。因此，要学会及时检查、修
13、正语法错误,尽量做到地道化地道化表达。技巧二：技巧二：避免中式表达避免中式表达How to polish your writing交替使用简单句和从句，即可以凸显句型的多样性，也能使文章显得更加流畅和完整。如His charming personality lies in a simple fact that he never hesitates to help others，句中使用同位语从句很好地描述了“他”乐于助人的性格特点。技巧三：技巧三：简单句与从句并用简单句与从句并用How to polish your writing作为一种复杂结构，非谓语动词（不定式、分词和动名词）常常是文章表
14、达的亮点；它既可使行文紧凑，也能体现写作者较好的语言素养和驾驭能力。如Born into a peasant family,he had only two years of schooling；It offers me an opportunity to do something interesting and creative.技巧四：技巧四：适当使用非谓语结构适当使用非谓语结构亮点句式积累亮点句式积累1.Born into a poor clerks family，she had little schooling.出生于一个贫穷小职员家庭，她几乎没上学。2.Collecting stamp
15、s not only gives me great satisfaction but also helps me relax under the pressure of studies.集邮不仅使我得到极大的满足，而且帮助我缓解学习中的压力。3.I enjoy reading,which helps broaden my horizon and enrich my life.我享受读书，它既拓宽了我的视野，又充实了我的生活。亮点句式积累亮点句式积累5.A proper hobby does not occupy our too much time.一个适当的爱好并不会占用我们太多的时间。6.A
16、 wide variety of interests and hobbies can make us feel relaxed.丰富多彩的兴趣与爱好能使我们放松。7.Dreams can make our life colorful and therefore we wont feel bored at all.怀抱梦想能使我们的生活多姿多彩，并让我们不再感到无聊。My name is Johann Webber and Im a Grade 10 student at South Lake High School.Im a(n)_ boy，so I am easy to get along
17、with.Im curious about everything.I often ask questions and always try to solve them by _ .Of all the subjects,is my favourite.I enjoy collecting stamps as well as _.I also play the piano in my spare time.I intend to become a(n)in the near future.musicianclimbing mountainseasy-goingchemistryworking i
18、n groupsRewritingwhich meansTherefore，Besides，have a fancy for playing Write a profile for your best friends.Information such as name,age,personality,hobby and so on should be included.Post-writingUse the checklist to assess your writing:pIs there a title?pDoes the profile give you a good impression
19、 of the student?pAre all the key points included and organized in good order?pAre the sentence structures correct?pDo all the sentences begin with capital letters?pAre there any grammar or spelling mistakes?My best friend is called Tom,a 16-year-old boy,who is in Grade One now.He is a shy boy,but he
20、 is easy to approach.Always bumping into things and knocking things over,he is usually covered in bruises.Ive never seen anyone eat as much as Tom.It is surprising that he doesnt get any fatter.Maybe its because he runs everywhere and loves to jump and climb.Tom also loves to sleep and his mother ha
21、s a big problem getting him out of bed in the morning.On the weekends,when not sleeping,he often goes out all by himself into the forest near his home where he climbs up into the trees to watch the animals below without frightening them.At school,chemistry is a subject that he is reaaly proud of,whi
22、le maths is his weakness.In face of a difficult problem,he will think of it over at a quiet place until he works it out.He has the ambition to be a scientist in the near future.A profile of my best friend1.Review the structure of a profile.2.Write a description of a famous person you like the best.HomeworkTHANKS!Practice makes perfect!The End
