1、UnitPEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT1In this class,you will 1.collect information about a great scientist through reading a biography;2.study the organization and language feature of the biography to improve your writing skills.人物传记人物传记Albert Einstein what youll read from the text.p his contributions and achie
2、vementsp his scientific discoveryp his personal qualitiesp his likes and dislikesPara.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Para.5Para.6Paragraph 1Key words:the greatestthe smartestmade numerous cntributionsthe most well-knowna geniuscourageous and kindintroduction(his great contribution and personality)Paragraph 2Key
3、 words:was born tried to enter university low scores exceptional scoresAfter studyingmanaged to pass the examenteringgraduatinghis early life and educationParagraph 3Key words:took a job,working there,published four extraordinary physics papers,quit his job,enter research,was awardedhis work experie
4、nce and achievementsParagraph 4Key words:came to power,Jewish,found the doors of academic institution closed to him,had to flee Germany,took up a position,make great achievementshis life crisis caused by Hitler metaphor暗喻rhetorical device修辞手法Paragraph 5Key words:a slightly odd-looking but kind and f
5、unny man,had a thick moustache and long white hair,which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shockhis appearance personification拟人Paragraph 5Key words:a slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man,had a thick moustache and long white hair,which sometimes stood on end as
6、 though he had just received an electric shockpersonification拟人simile 明喻With the rhetorical devices(修辞手法),the language in this part is more vivid and impressive.Paragraph 5Key words:forgot things,helped a little girl,encountered peopleask him to explain thingsstories showing his personalitiesParagra
7、ph 6Key words:mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientistEinsteins deathOn 18 April 1955,it was reported that Einstein had passed away,and the whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.euphemism委婉语 Para.1 introduction(his great contribution and personality)Para.2 early life and
8、 educationPara.3 work experience and achievementsPara.4 life crisis caused by Hitler Para.5 his appearance and stories showing his personalitiesPara.6 his deaththe text and complete the timeline on Page 9.Tips:1.Look for the time and key words;2.Use some math skills if needed.18791896195519331895190
9、019021905 19091922the text and complete the timeline on Page 9.Apart from his remarkable achievements,what does the passage tell us about Einsteins life?Struggles:when he failed to pass his university exam when he failed to get a good job when he had to flee Germany What type of writing is this text
10、?How does the writer develop the text?The text is a biography.It is developed in time order.What rhetorical devices are used in the passage?metaphor(暗喻)personification(拟人)simile(明喻)euphemism(委婉语)the doors of academic institutons（Para.4）(hair)stood on end（Para.5）as though received an electric shock（P
11、ara.5）had passed away（Para.6）袁隆平出生：1930年9月7日，北京爱好：听音乐、游泳毕业院校：西南农学院工作经历及成就：1.大学毕业后，袁隆平去往湖南从事农业教学和研究工作，并在1975年成功培育出了杂交水稻。2.提高水稻产量，消除世界饥饿 3.被誉为“杂交水稻之父”4.2019年被授予“共和国勋章”5.2021年5月22日，在湖南长沙逝世仿写Albert Einstein,who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics,is often considered one of the smartest m
12、en who ever lived.p作为当代中国最伟大的人物之一，袁隆平被人们称为“杂交水稻之父”。pYuan Longping,who is one of the greatest figures in modern China,is widely known as the“father of hybrid rice”.仿写He made numerous contributions to the world,the most well-known being the general theory of relativity and famous formula E=mc.p通过提高水稻产
13、量，他为解决世界饥饿问题作出了巨大贡献。pHe made huge contributions to the problem of world hunger by promoting/increasing rice production.仿写Einstein was not only a genius;he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.p袁隆平不仅仅是一位杰出的科学家，他还爱好广泛，例如喜欢听音乐和游泳。（定语从句）pYuan was not only an outstanding scientist;he was
14、 also a person who had a wide range of hobbies,like listening to music and swimming.仿写This great genius was born in Germany on 14 March 1879.p这个伟大的科学家于1930年9月7日在北京出生。pThis great scientist was born in Beijing on 7 September 1930.仿写On 18 April 1955,it was reported that Einstein had passed away,and the
15、 whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.p在2021年5月22日，有报道称袁隆平已经离世，举国哀悼。pOn 22 May 2021,it was reported that Yuan had passed away,and our whole country mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.Activity 为做出了许多贡献由于，因为出于对的强烈热爱(开始)掌权；上台因此担任；任职在取得巨大成就在任何情况下都不，绝不竖起来被误认为是去世总结；概括I.
16、Translate the phrases.1.After studying for another year,he managed _ _ the exam,_ _ in 1896 and _ in 1900.经过又一年的学习，他通过了考试，经过又一年的学习，他通过了考试，1896年进入大学，并于年进入大学，并于1900年毕业。年毕业。to passentering universitygraduating2._ _ _,out of _ _ _ _ knowledge,he continued to study,earning a doctorate in physics in 1905.
17、在此工作期间，出于对知识的强烈热情，他继续学习，并于在此工作期间，出于对知识的强烈热情，他继续学习，并于1905年获得了年获得了物理学博士学位。物理学博士学位。While working therea strong passion forII.Complete the following sentences.3.He had a thick moustache and long white hair,_ sometimes stood on end _ _ he had just received an _ _.他胡须浓密，他胡须浓密，头发又长又白，有时会像刚遭了电击似的竖起来。头发又长又白，
18、有时会像刚遭了电击似的竖起来。as thoughelectric shockwhichComplete the following sentences.4.On 18 April 1955,_ _ _ _ Einstein had _ _,and the whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.1955年年4月月18日，有报道说爱因斯坦去世了，全世界都为一位杰出科学家的日，有报道说爱因斯坦去世了，全世界都为一位杰出科学家的逝世而哀悼。逝世而哀悼。it was reported thatpassed away5.Under no ciucumstances_ _ _ terrible things to other people.在任何情况下我们都不应该对别人做可怕的事情。在任何情况下我们都不应该对别人做可怕的事情。should we do
