1、高考英语短文改错模考试题练习班级 考号 姓名 总分 一、2023届陕西省咸阳市高考模拟检测（二）假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。How much water should you drink each day? Studies hav
2、e produced varying advices over the years.But your individual water needs depend many factors.Know more about your bodys needs will help me estimate how much water to drink each day.Normal kidneys can release nearly a quart of fluid every hour.If you drink less than that, youll keep the extra water
3、in your body, that can be poisonous to your health.For the most people, drinking more than needed water is neither necessary or medically helpful.Normal day water intake is up to the level of physical activity and climate.It was recommended that men should not drink over 3.7 liters and 2.7 liters fo
4、r women.二、2023届陕西省安康市高三二模假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处错误，每句话中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) has been passed down for thousand of years.With
5、 an extensive and profound (意义深远的) culture, TCM is the treasure of Chinese civilization.It is not only widely used in Asia but also has become increasing popular in Europe and the United States.Frank Griffo is a acupuncturist (针灸师) in California whom completed his masters degree in TCM in 2005 at th
6、e American College of Traditional Chinese Medicine in San Francisco.She then spent seven years studied advanced acupuncture techniques and has been practicing for about 18 years.“There are more than 60,000 acupuncturists in the United States right now.Chinese medicine has been grown dramatically in
7、the last 15 years.It is taking on a large role in our medical system here than before, as a safe method of treatment for many problems that Western medicine has difficulty providing good outcomes”, he said in a video interview with China Daily, Acupuncture has been widely accepted in non-Chinese pop
8、ulation but is popular in California.”三、2023届河南省郑州市高三第二次质量预测假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，毎句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。The other day my parents and I took trip
9、to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As is known, its a famous mountain with different kind of plants and animals.The weather was fine and we were on high spirits.It was about noon while we arrived at the foot of the mountain.We were very excited.As we climbed the mountain, we feed monkeys, visited temples a
10、nd told stories.On the way up, I was busy took photos since the scenery was beautiful and attractively.Time passed quickly, and before we knew it, night has fallen.We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good.I was so tired that I fell asle
11、ep the moment my head touched at the pillow.四、2023届江西省宜春市高三第一次模拟假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Last month my new school had witnessed the Fi
12、rst Online Life Skills Show.Here comes a brief account.The activity, consisting with two parts, began with a talent show where participants demonstrated our practical skills.This was followed by a voted process.Some distinguished teachers acting as judge made comments and gave awards to whomever dis
13、played the best expertise.However, what made this show great success is that not only did it provide a golden opportunity for the participants to sharpen their skills and it also sparked audiences passion for acquiring various life skills.Both students and teachers speak high of this activity.I sinc
14、erely hoped that more activities of this kind will be held in the future.五、2023届江西省九江市高三二模假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ).并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用()划掉。修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。Recently ou
15、r class have had a debate.Its topic focuses on if it is necessary to use high technology to beautify the Palace Museum.As for this, different students hold different opinion.Some are in favor of the creative idea because of the use of high technology can add beauty to the Palace Museum, thus make it
16、 more attractive to visitors.Therefore, those who are against the idea thinks that this technology will destroy the original appearance of the Palace Museum.More important, it is extremely essential to respect the history and tradition.From me point of view, other measures can be taken attract more
17、visitors.And its our duty to provide the complete and genuine ancient palace for the world.六、2023届河南省开封市高三二模假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线(1)划掉；修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
18、Its normal to feel angry from time to time in respond to certain situations.However, we cant allow ourselves to be consumed with anger.There are several helpful way to control your anger.Firstly, stop talk.If you let angry words fly, you are more likely do more harm than good.So pretend your lips ar
19、e gluing together.This moment with speaking will give you time to collect your thoughts.Secondly, write down what you are feeling and that how you want to respond, which helps you reassess the event.If the first two steps doesnt work, go for the walk.Exercise is usefully for improving fitness and re
20、ducing anger.七、2023届河南省焦作市高三二模假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Chinese people place a high value in responsibility.It is our duty to taking
21、care of our parents.We know that they have done a lot to take care of them.So we should give back some of the love and care they had given to us.As Chinese citizen, we have a responsibility to protect our country.Thus, we should study hardly for our motherland.Finally, we must remember that we shoul
22、d built a clean and beautiful world.It is important what we need to protect environment.By doing so, and we will make the world better.八、2023届河南省平许济洛四市高三二模假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜钱()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改
23、后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I seldom helped with the housework in 2020, which I was in Senior One.Word couldnt describe how sorry I am, so I thought about what I could do.One weekend, I carried out my housework plan range from tidying up rooms to cooking meals.Early in the mornin
24、g, I gave the house a thoroughly cleaning.After that, I decided to make a delicious lunch with my parents.Recalling how my mother cooked, I finished them.My parents were surprising to see what I had done and gave me hug.Tired as I was, I understood all the things my parents had been done for九、2023届江
25、西省鹰潭市高三二模假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。It is shown in the chart, 30% of the teenagers taking drugs are tricked into doing it, and 50% are d
26、riven by curious.Another 15% just does this to seek excitement or try to get rid of their anxieties.The rest try it for some other reasons.As we all know, drugs do many harm to our health, and even causing people to die at an early age.At the same time, it directly led to the happening of crimes.But
27、 to our sadness, more and more young people now begin taking drugs.How do we protect ourselves from drugs? I think we should be careful to make friend and stay away from those always behave badly.In addition, its very important for us to have a healthy lifestyle and hold a positive attitude with lif
28、e.Do remember that try drugs is very dangerous.十、2023届江西省赣州市高三二模假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Last week, students in our school took part
29、in series of activities that was aimed at improving the students quality.Get involved in the activities, the students cooperated close with each other.In order to finish which seemed impossible, they encouraged each other.Faced with so many challenges, the students didnt lose hearts.Instead, they co
30、mbined our efforts and gifts, working as a strong team.They managed to complete many amused games.The students enjoy themselves very much during the meaningful activities.They have not only been gained a deep friendship with each other, but also pure happiness.附：参考答案和解析一、21.advices advice2.depend后接o
31、n3.KnowKnowing4.meyou5.lessmore6.thatwhich7.去掉the8.ornor9.daydaily10.wasis【解析】【导语】这是一篇说明文。短文介绍了个人的饮水需求取决于很多因素以及男性和女性一天的饮水量。【详解】1.考查名词。句意：多年来，研究得出了不同的建议。advice不可数名词。故advices改为 advice。2.考查介词。句意：但是你个人的水需求取决于很多因素。depend on“取决于”为固定短语。故depend后接on。3.考查动名词。句意：了解你身体的需求可以帮助你估计每天需要喝多少水。动名词作主语。故Know改为Knowing。4.
32、考查代词。句意：了解你身体的需求可以帮助你估计每天需要喝多少水。根据“your bodys needs”可知，了解你身体的需求可以帮助你估计每天需要喝多少水。help后接me作宾语。故me改为you。5.考查不定代词。句意：如果你喝的水超过这个量，你就会把多余的水留在体内，这对你的健康是有害的。根据“youll keep the extra water in your body”可知，如果你喝的水超过这个量，你就会把多余的水留在体内。故less改为more。6.考查关系代词。句意：如果你喝的水超过这个量，你就会把多余的水留在体内，这对你的健康是有害的。which指代前面的句子，在非限制性定语从
33、句作主语，故that改为which。7.考查冠词。句意：对大多数人来说，喝太多的水既没有必要，也没有医疗帮助。对于大多数人为“for most people”。故去掉the。8.考查固定搭配。句意：对大多数人来说，喝太多的水既没有必要，也没有医疗帮助。neithernor“既不也不”为固定搭配。故or改为nor。9.考查形容词。句意：平常一天的饮水量取决于身体活动和气候的水平。形容词daily修饰名词。故day改为daily。10.考查时态。句意：建议男性饮酒量不要超过3.7升，女性不要超过2.7升。本句在陈述事实，所以为一般现在时的被动语态。故was改为is。二、1.thousandthou
34、sands2.increasing increasingly3.aan4.whomwho/that5.SheHe6.studiedstudying7.has been grown去掉been8.largelarger9.good outcomes后面加上for10.butand【解析】【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要说明了中医在欧洲和美国越来越盛行。以弗兰克的口吻叙述了中医的价值和重要作用，受到越来越多的人的青睐。【详解】1.考查固定短语。句意：传统中医已经传承了几千年。“thousands of”意为“数以千计的”，是一个固定搭配。故thousand改为thousands。2.考查副词。句
35、意：它不仅在亚洲被广泛使用，而且在欧洲和美国也越来越受欢迎。修饰形容词“popular”，应用副词“increasingly”作状语。故increasing 改为increasingly。3.考查不定冠词。句意：弗兰克格里夫(Frank Griffo)是加州的一名针灸师，2005年在旧金山的美国中医学院(American College of Traditional Chinese Medicine)完成了中医硕士学位。“acupuncturist”是一个以元音音素开头的单数可数名词，所以用不定冠词an。故a改为an。4.考查定语从句。句意：同上。分析可知， whom completed hi
36、s masters degree为定语从句，关系代词在从句中做主语可知，应用who或that引导，whom在定语从句中做宾语。故whom改为who或that。5.考查人称代词。句意：之后，他花了7年时间学习先进的针灸技术，并已经练习了大约18年。根据下文“he said in a video interview with China Daily”可知，此处应为He。故She改为He。6.考查非谓语动词。句意：同上。“spend(in) doing sth.”意为“做某事花费”。故studied改为studying。7.考查谓语动词的语态。句意：在过去的15年里，中医发展迅猛。此句意为“中医在过
37、去的15年里有了显著的发展”，应该使用主动语态。故has been grown去掉been。8.考查形容词比较级。句意：它在我们的医疗系统中扮演着比以前更重要的角色，作为一种安全的治疗方法，可以治疗许多西医难以提供良好效果的问题。根据后面的“than before”，此处应该用形容词的比较级形式。故large改为larger。9.考查介词。句意：同上。“provide for”意为“为提供”，符合句意。故good outcomes后面加上for。10.考查连词。句意：针灸在非华人人群中已被广泛接受，在加州也很受欢迎。根据上下句关系，此处应用“and”表示递进，而不是“but”表示转折。故but
38、改为and。三、1.trip前加a2.kindkinds3.onin4.whilewhen5.feedfed6.tooktaking7.attractivelyattractive8.hashad9.andbut10.去掉at【解析】【导语】这是一篇记叙文。这篇文章叙述了作者一家在峨眉山旅游的经过。【详解】1.考查冠词。句意：前几天我和父母去四川的峨眉山旅行。take a trip“旅行”是固定表达，故在trip前加a。2.考查名词的数。句意：众所周知，这是一座著名的山，有各种各样的动植物。kind“种类”是可数名词，被different修饰，应用其复数形式，different kinds o
39、f“各种各样的”。故kind改为kinds。3.考查介词。句意：天气很好，我们情绪也很高。in high spirits“情绪高，心情好”是固定短语。故on改为in。4.考查时间状语从句。句意：我们到达山脚下时，大约是中午时分。while引导时间状语从句时，谓语动词应是延续性动词；when引导让步状语从句，谓语动词既可是延续性动词也可是瞬间动词。句中arrived是瞬间动作，故应用when引导从句。故while改为when。5.考查时态。句意：当我们爬山时，我们喂猴子，参观寺庙，讲故事。此处和visited，told为并列的谓语动词，使用一般过去时。故feed改为fed。6.考查非谓语动词。句
40、意：在路上我忙着拍照，因为风景是如此美丽具有吸引力。be busy (in) doing sth.“忙着做某事”是固定短语，应用动名词作宾语。故took改为taking。7.考查形容词。句意同上。此处和上文beautiful并列作表语，应用形容词attractive“有吸引力的”。故attractively改为attractive。8.考查形容词。句意：时间过得很快，不知不觉，夜幕降临。“夜幕降临”发生在“知道”之前，即过去的过去，应用过去完成时。故has改为had。9.考查连词。句意：食物很贵，但是服务很好。“食物贵”与“服务好”是转折关系而非并列关系，应用but连接。故and改为but。1
41、0.考查介词。句意：我太累了，头一碰到枕头就睡着了。touch“触及”是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语，不需要介词。故将at去掉。四、1.删除witnessed前的had2.with of3.our their4.voted voting5.judge judges6.whomever whoever7.great前加a8.and but9.high highly10.hoped hope【解析】【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了作者新学校开展的首届在线生活技能展。【详解】1.考查时态。句意：上个月，我的新学校见证了首届在线生活技能展。根据“Last month”可知，此处为陈述一个过去发生过
42、的事情，故只需要用一般过去时态即可。故删除witnessed前的had。2.考查介词。句意：该活动由两部分组成，以才艺表演开始，参与者展示了他们的实践技能。固定短语consist of表示“包括”，而不是和with搭配。故将with改为of。3.考查代词。句意：该活动由两部分组成，以才艺表演开始，参与者展示了他们的实践技能。demonstrated后的代词应指代前文提到的participants，故应用their。故将our改为their。4.考查名词。句意：随后是投票程序。不定冠词a后应接名词成分，表示“投票”的名词形式为voting，作定语。故将voted改为voting。5.考查名词。句
43、意：一些著名的教师担任评委，对表现出最好专业知识的人进行了评论和颁奖。主语为teachers，故acting as后应该也需要接judge的复数形式进行对应，作宾语。故将judge改为judges。6.考查宾语从句。句意：一些著名的教师担任评委，对表现出最好专业知识的人进行了评论和颁奖。分析句子成分，gave awards to后接宾语从句，其中宾语从句里缺少的是主语，whomever只能代宾语。故将whomever改为whoever。7.考查冠词。句意：然而，这个节目之所以取得巨大成功，不仅是因为它为参与者提供了一个磨练技能的黄金机会，而且还激发了观众学习各种生活技能的热情。success为
44、不可数名词，但表示“一次成功的事情”时可抽象名词具体化，名词前需要加不定冠词。故在great前加a。8.考查固定短语。句意：然而，这个节目之所以取得巨大成功，不仅是因为它为参与者提供了一个磨练技能的黄金机会，而且还激发了观众学习各种生活技能的热情。固定短语not only but (also)表示“不仅而且”，其中but不能与and互换使用。故将and改为but。9.考查副词。句意：同学和老师都对这次活动给予了高度评价。固定短语speak highly of表示“对给予高度评价”，其中highly为副词，表示“高度地”。故将high改为highly。10.考查动词。句意：我衷心希望今后能举办更
45、多这样的活动。结合上下文，作者是在陈述自己的想法和希望，故需要用一般现在时态。故将hoped改为hope。五、1.take前加to2.hold held3.five fifth4.what which/that5.activity activities6.去掉to7.convincing convinced8.a an9.close closer10.convenient convenience【导语】本文是一篇应用文。文章是一封邀请信，作者写信邀请对方参加中秋节晚会，并介绍了晚会上的一些活动。【详解】1.考查非谓语动词。句意：我写信是想邀请你参加中秋节晚会。invite sb.to do s
46、th.邀请某人做某事。这里为非谓语动词担当动词invite的宾语补足语，用不定式。故在take前加to。2.考查谓语动词。句意：晚会将于9月30日下午6点在5楼515房间举行。这里为本句谓语动词，主语the party和动词hold之间存在被动关系，所以用过去分词形式。故将hold改为held。3.考查序数词。句意：晚会将于9月30日下午6点在5楼515房间举行。此处指的是“第五层楼”，用序数词修饰名词floor。故将five改为fifth。4.考查定语从句。句意：在晚会上，你将欣赏到一些由学生表演的戏剧。这里为定语从句的关系词，先行词为some plays，在定语从句中担当主语，用关系代词w
47、hich或that引导。故将what改为which/that。5.考查名词的数。句意：在这个特殊的日子里，吃月饼和赏月也是很重要的活动。根据谓语动词are可知，这里的activity不止一个，用其复数形式。故将activity改为activities。6.考查固定结构。句意：为什么不加入我们呢？固定结构why not do sth.，意为“为什么不做”。故将to去掉。7.考查形容词。句意：我相信你会有一个难忘的中秋节。convince有两个形容词：convinced，意为“确信的”，修饰人；convincing，意为“令人信服的”，修饰物。主语是I，指人，所以用convinced。故将convincing改为convinced。8.考查冠词。句意：我相信你会有一个难忘的中秋节。形容词unforgettable发音为元音音素开头，其前用an而不是a。故将a改为an。9.考查比较级。句意：通过一起庆祝节日，我们的关系会发展得更密切。根据下文“Also you are certain to
