1、2014年高考年高考写作如何得高分写作如何得高分高分策略高分策略一、考试说明对写作的要求：一、考试说明对写作的要求：要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：（1）清楚、连贯清楚、连贯地地传递传递信息，信息，表达表达意思意思;（2）有效运用有效运用所学语言知识。所学语言知识。写作试题设计的原则写作试题设计的原则：写作试题要有写作试题要有真实的情景真实的情景，也就是考生，也就是考生现在或将现在或将来很可能会遇到的情景来很可能会遇到的情景。以意义为测试焦点，而且。以意义为测试焦点，而且是互动性的行为，是互动性的行为，有用英语交际的需要有用英语交际的需要。因为只
2、有。因为只有试题的情景真实，才能测试学生的写作技能。试题的情景真实，才能测试学生的写作技能。分档分档2013年标准年标准 2012年标准年标准极优档极优档书写规范；书写规范；覆盖所有要点覆盖所有要点,内容充实；内容充实；词汇丰富，词汇丰富，行文流畅行文流畅，有修辞意识。，有修辞意识。书写规范书写规范；覆盖所有要点，；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；内容充实；词汇丰富，词汇丰富，行文流畅行文流畅，有修辞意识。，有修辞意识。优秀优秀2124紧扣主题紧扣主题；覆盖；覆盖所有要点所有要点内容充实内容充实；语法结构多语法结构多词汇丰富，词汇丰富，行文流畅，行文流畅，显示出显示出较强的语言运用能较强的语言运用能力
3、力。允许有个别语言错。允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。误，但不影响意思表达。紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；内容充实；语法结构多样，语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文较为流畅词汇丰富，行文较为流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能显示出较强的语言运用能力。语言小错不超过力。语言小错不超过6个。个。良好良好2018紧扣主题；覆盖所有要紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容较充实；点，内容较充实；行文较行文较流畅；流畅；语言有少量错误，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。但基本不影响意思表达。紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有少量错内容较充实，语言有少量错误
4、，但基本不影响意思表误，但基本不影响意思表达。达。二、高考写作的评分细则二、高考写作的评分细则2013年阅卷注意事项年阅卷注意事项2012年阅卷注意事项年阅卷注意事项1.评分时，先根据文章评分时，先根据文章要点的涵盖要点的涵盖度和语言度和语言 表达表达初步确定是否达初步确定是否达到及格线（到及格线（15分），然后确定其分），然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整，最后给求来衡量，确定或调整，最后给分。分。2.试卷写作要求中，第二点括号内试卷写作要求中，第二点括号内的信息作为对考生的提示，非必的信息作为对考生的提示，非必需表示内容，考生可用可不用，
5、需表示内容，考生可用可不用，可多可少。可多可少。3.词数若少于词数若少于120字，从应得分中字，从应得分中扣扣2分。分。4.评分时，评分时，应考虑拼写与标点符号应考虑拼写与标点符号的使用。的使用。英、美拼法均可接受。英、美拼法均可接受。5.如书写较差，以致影响交际，将如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。分数降低一个档次。1.对于写作内容，无题目或以书信体写对于写作内容，无题目或以书信体写作的不扣分。对于引言（李华在学作的不扣分。对于引言（李华在学校举行的英语比赛中获得一等奖）校举行的英语比赛中获得一等奖）的描述与否，不宜作扣分处理。的描述与否，不宜作扣分处理。2.评分时评分时,先根据
6、要点的覆盖面和语言先根据要点的覆盖面和语言表达的流畅性初步确定是否达到及表达的流畅性初步确定是否达到及格线（格线（15分）分）,划定其所属的档次后划定其所属的档次后,以该档次的要求来衡量，调整上下以该档次的要求来衡量，调整上下分值，最后确定分数分值，最后确定分数。3.词数少于词数少于120,应从得分中减去应从得分中减去2分。分。4.大小错误的界定：大小错误的界定：小错：单词拼写，冠词，大小写，标点小错：单词拼写，冠词，大小写，标点符号的错误。符号的错误。大错：搭配错误，用词用错（介词，名大错：搭配错误，用词用错（介词，名词，动词，形容词，副词），时态词，动词，形容词，副词），时态，语态，主谓一
7、致，非谓语动词，语态，主谓一致，非谓语动词，句式等错误。句式等错误。2012年高考作文真题再现年高考作文真题再现 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：参加英语角的益处；参加英语角的益处；坚持写英语日记的作用；坚持写英语日记的作用；英文阅读网站（英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）对你的帮助。）对你的帮助。
8、注意：注意：1.词数：词数：120-150；2.可适当增加细节，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。三、考生写作评析三、考生写作评析 标准卷一（标准卷一（15分）分）I am lickily to be the first one in the English game.Our English teachers hope we can share the experience of learning English with each others.Now,I want to tell you mine.At first,I can take part in the English a
9、ction every time,taking part in the English is a very useful way to learn English,it can increase our spoken-English.Then,You should write date book everyday,if you can do it.I believe you will learn English more and more easily.If you want to find a English website to study,I have a good one,it is
10、Enjoy Reading.There are many good books for you to read.I hope it can help you.Thats all my experience.I hope to know your study ways,I believe it will better than mine.三、考生写作评析三、考生写作评析 标准卷一（标准卷一（15分）分）I am lickily to be the first one in the English game.Our English teachers hope we can share the ex
11、perience of learning English with each others.Now,I want to tell you mine.At first,I can take part in the English action every time,taking part in the English is a very useful way to learn English,it can increase our spoken-English.Then,You should write date book everyday,if you can do it.I believe
12、you will learn English more and more easily.If you want to find a English website to study,I have a good one,it is Enjoy Reading.There are many good books for you to read.I hope it can help you.Thats all my experience.I hope to know your study ways,I believe it will better than mine.corner三、考生写作评析三、
13、考生写作评析 标准卷二（标准卷二（20分）分）Im glad to win the first prize in the English competition.I think it is related to my studying habit.So there is some experience I want to share with you.In the first place,I keep taking part in the English corner three times a week.I think it provides us with an opportunity t
14、o communicate with others,which is good for our spoken English.In the second place,I keep writing diary where I try to use some good sentences.Gradually,I make a great progress on writing.Finally.I often surfer the Internet.Enjoy Reading is a good website which has a effect on my reading.Just keep g
15、oing until you succeed.三、考生写作评析三、考生写作评析 标准卷二（标准卷二（20分）分）Im glad to win the first prize in the English competition.I think it is related to my studying habit.So there is some experience I want to share with you.In the first place,I keep taking part in the English corner three times a week.I think it
16、provides us with an opportunity to communicate with others,which is good for our spoken English.In the second place,I keep writing diary where I try to use some good sentences.Gradually,I make a great progress on writing.Finally.I often surfer the Internet.Enjoy Reading is a good website which has a
17、 effect on my reading.Just keep going until you succeed.greatEnglish三、考生写作评析三、考生写作评析 标准卷三（标准卷三（23分）分）Hello every schoolmate.Im Li Hua,who got the first prize on our Schools English contest recently.Today Im honoured to have a chance to deliver my experience to you.As we know,oral English is very imp
18、ortant.As for me,I usually go to English corner to practise my spoken English with foreign teachers.Additionally,improving my grammar and structures of students,writing English diary also benefits me a lot.Furthermore,it is the websites called Enjoy Reading that promotes my reading skills and vocabu
19、lary.Indeed,what really counts is that I can stick to these good habits,or nothing miraculous like my success would have happened.So believe yourself and do what I do;you can succeed as well.三、考生写作评析三、考生写作评析 标准卷三（标准卷三（23分）分）Hello every schoolmate.Im Li Hua,who got the first prize on our Schools Engl
20、ish contest recently.Today Im honoured to have a chance to deliver my experience to you.As we know,oral English is very important.As for me,I usually go to English corner to practise my spoken English with foreign teachers.Additionally,improving my grammar and structures of students,writing English
21、diary also benefits me a lot.Furthermore,it is the websites called Enjoy Reading that promotes my reading skills and vocabulary.Indeed,what really counts is that I can stick to these good habits,or nothing miraculous like my success would have happened.So believe yourself and do what I do;you can su
22、cceed as well.佳作优点分析佳作优点分析 标准卷三标准卷三学生作文中用到了非限制性定语从句学生作文中用到了非限制性定语从句2 2个，个，强调结构强调结构1 1个，主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句各一个，主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句各一个，并列句一个，还用到了虚拟语气和非谓语动词。个，并列句一个，还用到了虚拟语气和非谓语动词。充分展示了学生充分展示了学生雄厚的基本功和超强语感雄厚的基本功和超强语感。读起来。读起来流畅，亮点频繁闪现。这些流畅，亮点频繁闪现。这些高级句式在备考过程中高级句式在备考过程中学生见的很多，因为学生做了大量的单项选择。但学生见的很多，因为学生做了大量的单项选择。但写
23、得很少，写得很少，这就导致学生的作文简单句过多，写不这就导致学生的作文简单句过多，写不出高水平的作文来。写作能力的提高不是一日之功，出高水平的作文来。写作能力的提高不是一日之功，需要学生在日常的学习中逐渐积累。需要学生在日常的学习中逐渐积累。启示：启示：一些一些基本语法项目学生应该能熟练运用并根据基本语法项目学生应该能熟练运用并根据不同的语言环境写出恰当的句子不同的语言环境写出恰当的句子。因此，将。因此，将语法学语法学习与写作训练相结合应该是提高学生写作档次的重习与写作训练相结合应该是提高学生写作档次的重要途径。要途径。书写漂亮的秘诀书写漂亮的秘诀：1、一定要打格写，约占三分之一。除一定要打格
24、写，约占三分之一。除b d f g h j l p q t y 这些字母要出格外，这些字母要出格外，其余的字母均要在格内并其余的字母均要在格内并要占满格写要占满格写。2、字母大小，间隔要均匀；字母大小，间隔要均匀；单词之单词之间隔一个字母，间隔一个字母，每段的第一个单词空四个字母。每段的第一个单词空四个字母。3、字母不要太小，太瘦；不能太宽，太胖；要美字母不要太小，太瘦；不能太宽，太胖；要美观，大方，不要太生硬，观，大方，不要太生硬，要圆滑要圆滑。4、要有一定的倾斜度（右倾斜、要有一定的倾斜度（右倾斜15%左右）；所有的）；所有的字母要字母要平行平行。5、每行写、每行写10个单词左右个单词左右
25、,写写12行行-15左右左右.6、不要连笔不要连笔，不要乱涂乱画不要乱涂乱画，即使不得已修改也，即使不得已修改也要只用一条线划掉，要只用一条线划掉，保持保持卷面整洁卷面整洁。四、实战演练四、实战演练 2013年高考题年高考题 重点训练：高级句式和表达的连贯性。重点训练：高级句式和表达的连贯性。2013年高考题重现年高考题重现 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友友Tom 一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：回复。请根据以
26、下要点给他回封邮件：未及时回信的原因；未及时回信的原因；你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。等）。注意：注意：1.词数：词数：120150；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。五、检查修改，誊写工整五、检查修改，誊写工整书面表达的写作步骤书面表达的写作步骤五步法五步法一、一、分析题目要求，分析题目要求，确定体裁、时态、人称，格式、确定体裁、时态、人称，格式、要点。要点。二、二、列出主体框架（结构）、确定段落与层次。列出主体框架（结构）、确定段落与层次。三、三、列出要点，恰当组合列出要点，恰当组合，确定主题句。确定主题句。
27、四、四、字斟句酌连词成句，巧妙使用过度句和连接词语。字斟句酌连词成句，巧妙使用过度句和连接词语。标准卷标准卷1 专家评分：专家评分：26分分 Im sorry that I didnt reply to your letter on time.The reason why I wouldnt reply to your letter is that I was preparing for the final exam.Now that the summer holiday is coming,Ill tell you my summer plan.Firstly,Id like to do a
28、 part-time job,which will enrich my experience.In the meanwhile,I can make money by myself,making it possible for me to have a better understanding of the sweat of my parents.Secondly,traveling is also a good idea,not only can it relax me,but also I can expand my horizons and increase my slope of kn
29、owledge.Last but not least,I intend to be a volunteer.There is no denying to devote ourselves to help others.So how will you spending your holiday?Nothing in the world can delight me more than spending time with you.Can we go out to do something together?Looking forward to your reply.高考作文标准卷高考作文标准卷
30、标准卷标准卷2 专家评分：专家评分：28分分 Im sorry that I didnt reply to you in time.The reason is that I had to prepare for the final exam last week,which was extremely important for me.So I didnt check my emails.My summer holidays plan is as follows.Firstly,Id like to do a part-time job so that I can make some money
31、 to ease my parents stress.Secondly,Beijing has a lot of famous sights among which the most famous is the Great Wall,so what I want to do next is to go there.Whats more,another plan is to be a volunteer.By getting myself involved in those activities,such as cleaning the streets;helping the disabled,
32、Ill have the opportunity to enhance my social experience.How about you?We havent met each other for along time.Why not come to Shandong to relax?Ill show you around here,looking forward to your reply.总评 这这2篇文章紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，篇文章紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实，语法结构多样，行文流畅，内容充实，语法结构多样，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个显示出较强的语言运用能力，
33、允许有个别语言错误，因此专家定位别语言错误，因此专家定位“优秀档优秀档”2013年写作范文年写作范文Dear Tom，How is everything going on with you?Im writing this letter to express my apology to you for not writing you back in time.In the first place,Ill be so happy if you could accept my apology.Its of great importance for me to make full preparatio
34、ns for the final exam last week.Therefore,I couldnt spare enough time to write you back in time.Whats more,I am willing to tell you that I am to do some part-time jobs in the summer holiday.No one can deny the fact that we can have our vision broadened in the process.Last but not least,it must be po
35、inted out that I would love to go travelling during this holiday.I am looking forward to hearing from you.And Ill appreciate it very much if you give me an early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua2013年作文亮点句式：年作文亮点句式：经典句式和句型的灵活运用经典句式和句型的灵活运用1.There is no denying that we devote ourselves to helping others.2
36、.Its universally acknowledeged that.;3.The reason why I wouldnt reply to your letter is that I was preparing for the final exam.4.Not only can it relax me,but also I can expand my horizons and increase my slope of knowledge.5.Ill really appreciate it if you could reply to me as soon as possible.2013
37、年作文亮点句式：年作文亮点句式：连接词和成分的恰当使用连接词和成分的恰当使用 Whats more;however;on the one hand on the other hand.从句和谚语的使用从句和谚语的使用1.Beijing has a lot of famous sights among which the most famous is the Great Wall so what I want to do next is to go there2.The reason is that I had to prepare for the final exam last week,wh
38、ich was extremely important for me.3.No pains,no gains.4.Rome was not built in a day.5.Practice makes perfect.6.Where there is a will,there is a way.思路 按照按照 点点线线面，（词面，（词句句篇），篇），师生共同找出要点、确定关键词师生共同找出要点、确定关键词扩扩展成句展成句高级句式。高级句式。然后由学生连句成篇，训练过渡词的使然后由学生连句成篇，训练过渡词的使用。用。最后教师展示范文、赏析。最后教师展示范文、赏析。高考作文的核心任务：在在15秒
39、内取悦阅卷老师秒内取悦阅卷老师语言的正确性、丰富性语言的正确性、丰富性语言的层次性、整体性语言的层次性、整体性优秀作文应具备的六个特征优秀作文应具备的六个特征v层次不乱层次不乱 v句式多变句式多变 v亮点若干亮点若干 v巧妙串联巧妙串联 v蠢错不犯蠢错不犯 v卷面整洁卷面整洁 如何获得阅卷老师对你写作的如何获得阅卷老师对你写作的“好感好感”1、书写整洁，分布均匀；、书写整洁，分布均匀；2、首尾无错，审题正确；、首尾无错，审题正确；3、一气呵成，干净利索；、一气呵成，干净利索；4、避难就易，避错保分；、避难就易，避错保分；5、错不恼人，误不气人；、错不恼人，误不气人；6、抓大放小，分辨轻重；、抓
40、大放小，分辨轻重；7、高低错落，和谐得体；、高低错落，和谐得体；8、换位检查，认真重审；、换位检查，认真重审；作文上光第一招：肃清愚蠢语言错误肃清愚蠢语言错误学生学生13种常见的语言错误种常见的语言错误（1）主谓不一致）主谓不一致 Father and I am going to visit her.My uncle often go to the cinema himself.(2)时态、语态混用时态、语态混用 The movie is so good that we all enjoyed it very much.The old man knocked down by the car a
41、nd injured badly.(3)句子成分残缺句子成分残缺 But the car which painted red didnt stop.The young man running in the street fast.(4)习惯搭配乱用习惯搭配乱用 I very like the novel.Then we set off digging,planting and watering.(5)汉式英语汉式英语 The car is yellow color.Next month have a sports meeting.(6)名词单、复数不分名词单、复数不分 He will give
42、 us a talk on American film.He is one of the best player in our school.(7)赘词现象严重赘词现象严重 At last,the lost boy returned back.On one day,he went to the cinema.(8)用词不当用词不当 He doesnt want to say something about this matter.I hope you to help the girl with her homework.(9)拼写和词形变化错误拼写和词形变化错误 The car hitted
43、the old man and drived away.On his way to school,he sew a little girl.(10)前后人称不一致前后人称不一致 Swimming and football are his favorite sports,and he likes it all his life.The little girl usually goes to school at 7 in the morning,but today he was late for school.(11)分词作状语、逻辑主语不一致分词作状语、逻辑主语不一致Having heard t
44、he news,her heart beat faster and faster.Preparing dinner,the doorbell rang.(12)动词原形作主语动词原形作主语Walk is good for you health.Drink wines is harmful.(13)一个简单句出现两个谓语一个简单句出现两个谓语There was no bus,we had to walk home.There are a lot of students like this movie.作文上光第二招：让词汇和句式多变起来附：探讨词的灵活多变：附：探讨词的灵活多变：一、词的灵活多变
45、，例：一、词的灵活多变，例：She is _happyThe movie was _good.Im _sorryHe was _kind to me.We were _shocked at the news.This story is _significant.I _want to change my job.The boss felt _pleased with my job.We were _excited at the news.The performance was_marvelous.What I said is _clear.I felt _exhausted by the tim
46、e I got home.verysimplyprettyterriblymost greatlyhighlybadlyquiteextremelyperfectlytotally二、短语灵活多变：二、短语灵活多变：例：例：“喜欢喜欢”I dont _baseball.She is _playing the piano.Many football fans _Beckham.My son is _about football.Mary people _/about JinYongs martial（武侠）武侠）arts fictions.（小说）小说）He has _the drug.Some
47、 adults _computer games as well.She _personal computers.has a great enthusiasm(热衷热衷)forcare forfond ofare crazy aboutmadare keen onbeen addicted toare hooked on三、句型灵活多变：三、句型灵活多变：Hardlywhen,the moment,no soonerthan,the instant,shortly after I _youre right.I _youll succeed.I_you have made a right choi
48、ce.We _that no country should interfere（干涉）干涉）in the affairs of other countries._,smoking should be forbidden in public places._,nothing is more important than health._,chatting online is a waste of time._,learning English is a piece of cake._that buying lottery tickets（彩票）彩票）is a waste of money.I _
49、College English Test（大学英语等大学英语等级考试）级考试）should be cancelled.（取消）取消）accept the idea thatthinkbelieveguessholdIn my opinionAs I see itFrom my point of viewAs far as Im concernedIt seems to me四、句式灵活多变：四、句式灵活多变：1、主动与被动：、主动与被动：We must take some effective measures to stop pollution.2、陈述与感叹：陈述与感叹：You gave m
50、e a pleasant surprise.3、正常与倒装：正常与倒装：I have never seen such a beautiful picture.4、普通与强调：普通与强调：We put off the football match because of the bad weather.Some effective measures must be taken to stop pollution.What a pleasant surprise you gave me!Never have I seen such a beautiful picture.It was because
